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Old October 21st, 2009, 04:10 AM   #1
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I don't know if I like this one



This one is a remake of a tag I made awhile back. I tried some more smudging, but I don't think I have gotten that much better at it.
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Old October 21st, 2009, 11:28 PM   #2
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They both look unfinished.

For the roxas one text isn't so great and the effects are bland. Background is very boring as well.

For the Kuja one the smudging could use a lot more work because it's disrupting the flow. It also suffers from FHS.
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Old October 22nd, 2009, 12:29 AM   #3
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i like your creativity and what you were looking for in the first, but it's just way too simple and boring. introduce some dynamic effects to spice it up a tad.

the second i agree with jaxx. i'd say experiment with different smudge brushes and settings. also, i'd move the stock up a tad.
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