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Old October 17th, 2009, 02:55 PM   #1
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Rate it (my signature) i made it the other day. I think i will go back and change it, because all i really did, was add the renders... and a pretty background lol. Comments too please.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 03:07 PM   #2
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I recomend a different font; it just doesn't suit. There also apears to be no flow, so I think you should work on that, aswell. And the images don't blend with the backround which can be fixed if you change the colours in certain ways to suit the backround colours.

Also, you need to do some effects. Oh, and try some tutorial's if you want to. KHI has a tutorial catalog:

http://forums.khinsider.com/resource...catalogue.html

Good luck with your sigs.

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Old October 17th, 2009, 03:10 PM   #3
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I also recommend a different text as that is said by Selphie and she doesn't seem to blend in with the Sora - Kairi - Roxas - Xion idea.

Perhaps; "I see you the way I remember you, and you see me the way you remember me", I think it was.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:32 PM   #4
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Needs better Typogaphy and anything relating to that, make sure that the text doesn't go over the stock and if you have too much text in a sig, it doesn't look as good but it's your choice.

Also, The lines going through the stock is kinda a bad thing. Other than that, with enough practice, you'll get better. Good luck.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:48 PM   #5
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Also, mess with the colors and use brushes.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 07:13 PM   #6
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Why the fuck am I kissing Sir Jecht? I don't like you sir.

Seriously though, it's pretty horrible. Everything is LQ (most likely because you saved it as .jpg, or you found LQ images) and the 'tag' itself is just boring and worthless. Look at some tutorials before making another tag, they seriously help.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:38 PM   #7
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besides all the suggestions everyone else said, it would help if you used only one stock, or made them flow better. they don't match, especially since the Roxas and Xion one is kinda green...
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Old October 18th, 2009, 04:01 PM   #8
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yes i know its horrible, i didnt spend much time on it, i have some better tags, but they werent KH-ish and from a while ago. I even said all i did was slack togethor some text and renders.
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Old October 18th, 2009, 04:22 PM   #9
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Tags don't have to be about Kingdom Hearts. In fact Kingdom Hearts stocks are usually pretty terrible.
4 (5 if you count the text as it's pretty much in your face) is a bad thing as my eye has nowhere to rest when looking at your tag.
There isn't much to say as all it appears to be is copy pasted renders on a pre-made background with a text and logo.
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Old October 19th, 2009, 03:52 AM   #10
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Didn't read everyone esle's critique.

It's more of a banner, low quality, random line things. The text is small and dull. Not bad for a beginner, which if you aren't I don't mean to be insulting.
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Old October 25th, 2009, 03:18 PM   #11
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i am along the lines of begginer-ness
and thanks for all the help to improve everybody.
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