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Old October 17th, 2009, 03:23 AM   #1
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I know this can be a lot better than it is now so I need you guys to tell me what's what
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Old October 17th, 2009, 03:26 AM   #2
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crop it horizontally.

throw in some more depth.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 03:35 AM   #3
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crop it horizontally.
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more depth.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 05:56 AM   #4
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What it needs is more contrast. And get rid of the text and add one (or two) effect c4ds around the focal.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:20 AM   #5
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more depth.
lmao.

Eh, tbh I'm not a fan of the tag length, feels like it should be just a bit shorter, you don't want too much negative space no?
Keep effects moderate unless your one of those peeps that do collages that are STRICTLY abstract.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 06:53 AM   #6
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Fix Roxas' color. The BG and all seems on the blue/magenta side, while he seems yellow/green side.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 07:21 AM   #7
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Roxas.
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Roxas.
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Roxas.
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Roxas.
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Old October 17th, 2009, 07:48 AM   #8
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Old October 17th, 2009, 09:43 PM   #9
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other than maybe more depth, i can't find anything more it needs. i'm loving the text, lines, and bubbles. that and the background makes it look kinda spacey :]
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Old October 18th, 2009, 08:52 PM   #10
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What it needs is more contrast. And get rid of the text and add one (or two) effect c4ds around the focal.
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lmao.

Eh, tbh I'm not a fan of the tag length, feels like it should be just a bit shorter, you don't want too much negative space no?
Keep effects moderate unless your one of those peeps that do collages that are STRICTLY abstract.
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Fix Roxas' color. The BG and all seems on the blue/magenta side, while he seems yellow/green side.
Alright I'll try doing this
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