New direction

Ashes Remnant · September 1st, 2009, 04:33 AM

My feeble attempt at a new style. Not really sure where to go from here, if anywhere.

C and C = <3

Enri · September 1st, 2009, 09:29 AM

I never understood the crop cut on the side.

More BG rather than white. Going in a nice direction nonetheless.

Salty · September 1st, 2009, 12:47 PM

this from a tutorial?

Anyway, I don't like the flower thing, it looks ugly and distracting. Sharpen up the stock, and maybe add a few c4ds around the stock. Other than that, I like the pentooling.

Also, make it smaller and lose the clipping mask thing.

Ashes Remnant · September 1st, 2009, 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Salty

this from a tutorial?

Anyway, I don't like the flower thing, it looks ugly and distracting. Sharpen up the stock, and maybe add a few c4ds around the stock. Other than that, I like the pentooling.

Also, make it smaller and lose the clipping mask thing.

Yeah, parts of it were from a tut, but mainly just the ideas from it. 99% is from my own head.

Thanks for the CnC guys, love you two. =D

Grace Falls · September 1st, 2009, 02:19 PM

The crop? or reflection is distracting in my eyes, and also the yellow streak is giving me a headache. Having bits of the pink on her back is bad... No actually most of her back is ugly. Other than that it's fine.

KR∆NK · September 1st, 2009, 11:09 PM

you're definitely heading in a good direction, and i think the flower looks nice :3
but, that turquoise thing on the left of her shoulder should be carried on more throughout the background someway, or possible just the color.

Cloud · September 2nd, 2009, 12:09 AM

The flowers should wrap around her, srsly.