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| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
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| | #2 |
| I don't like you. | BG is kind of boring, but it looks pretty sweet. Nice stock cut, too. |
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| | #3 |
| Moderator | Much better than the Riku one you did. |
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| G0t anth1ng 2 say b1+ch ? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: in ur room wit ur mom go check!! Age: 18 Posts: 4,046
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | I kinda like it but bg needs some thing kinda flat |
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| | #5 |
| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | lol I did that Riku tag a long ass time ago but it was the most recent thing I had done. actually made this one today, and thanks |
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| | #6 |
| ♥ | the effects are just totally... O_O; ... radiant! you're crazy good! I love the orange/red around her and the text. Only thing I'd add is just more depth in the background...smudging? Iunno. |
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| | #7 |
| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | ![]() how's this? |
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| | #8 |
| Is Retired. | New low opacity stuff is gross. I would like to see some of those warmer colours moved around throughout the rest of the background to add some contrast. Maybe move some of those cool flaming ball of light things around the stock to the rest of tag. |
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| | #9 |
| Moderator | Hope you don't mind, but i editted to show you what i think should be done. ![]() All i did was add a slightly stronger light source, high pass, dodge/burn and blurred a few parts to add more of a sense of depth. I don't think you should worry about adding more to the background. I also think the first version is better, not really feeling the changes you made. |
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| | #10 |
| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | ![]() tried to imitate yours, Eli. I really like the way this looks now |
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| Moderator | I like it, the darkness around the sides makes a tad of negative space, but also adds a sense of depth to counter the older 'flat' look to it. Very nice effects around the stock btw, like to see more work done with them ^^ |
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| | #12 |
| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | thanks Eli :) any more comments? |
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| | #13 |
| Still Against The Test Of Time Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: You know that box on the side of the road Age: 18 Posts: 4,086
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | lol Why did you blur the arm? The hair yes, but the arm blurred is creating depth inconsistency. Oh I'm not feeling the typo. Other than that I do like it(V2). Could use a little light source Got a link to that stock? ;D |
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| | #14 |
| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,639
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | it's in the first post broham :) |
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