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SPLATTER BRUSHAN CLIPPAN MASKAN

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[shortythugsta]

looks empty! Also, dont like all the stuff going on top of that stock.

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Originally Posted by shortythugsta

looks empty! Also, dont like all the stuff going on top of that stock.

It's supposed to be messy. hence the splatter brush whoring. :|

[auron10_KING.dvx]

jesus fuck how many times do i have to tell you people not to bitch at the critique you're given

if you're going to admit that you're just 'whoring' the splatter brushes, why use them? try something different jeez you guys are boring

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Yeah, saying that I intended it to be messy is totally bitching.

if you're going to admit that you're just 'whoring' the splatter brushes, why use them? try something different jeez you guys are boring

I was going to ;-;

[King X]

I like this one quite a bit, the lighting is nice, i definately love the splatter, but it does look a bit empty, but this is a good first version. Add in some effects to make "wow" worthy, then it will be good :D

[Color Me Evil]

text ruins it imo

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Originally Posted by Color Me Evil

text ruins it imo

[Color Me Evil]

looks a lot better but it's still pretty plain. the background is just there.

[Bud Light]

very boring background. The lighting next to her head looks awkward, at least to me. the stock looks oversharpened to me.

[Salty]

Adding to what you all said, I don't really like the black at the right. I see that you were going for depth, but the burning was too strong, I'd tone it down.
As for the BG, maybe get some effects to pop out around the focal, but still keep the same concept you were originally going for.

[.:[Kazuma]:.]

Use textures for a more appealing BG,and don't do too much of that multi lighting because it's creating multi focal points. It's also flat. Use some light stream textures to spice up effects.

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[VLexaeus]

looks cool. :D
i think the background should be lighter, or on the right side some sort of blue though.

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I experimented, :3
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