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| Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho | ![]() SPLATTER BRUSHAN CLIPPAN MASKAN cnc? |
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| G0t anth1ng 2 say b1+ch ? Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: in ur room wit ur mom go check!! Age: 18 Posts: 4,046
Rep Power: 9 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | looks empty! Also, dont like all the stuff going on top of that stock. |
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| judge magister daniel | jesus fuck how many times do i have to tell you people not to bitch at the critique you're given if you're going to admit that you're just 'whoring' the splatter brushes, why use them? try something different jeez you guys are boring |
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| Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho | Yeah, saying that I intended it to be messy is totally bitching. Quote:
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| look into the pretty light Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: in a place Age: 18 Posts: 4,535
Rep Power: 8 ![]() ![]() ![]() Level: 31 EXP: | I like this one quite a bit, the lighting is nice, i definately love the splatter, but it does look a bit empty, but this is a good first version. Add in some effects to make "wow" worthy, then it will be good :D |
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| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,640
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | text ruins it imo |
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| the temptress Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Providence Age: 18 Posts: 3,640
Rep Power: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | looks a lot better but it's still pretty plain. the background is just there. |
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| white whale holy grail Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,420
Rep Power: 6 ![]() ![]() Level: 22 EXP: | very boring background. The lighting next to her head looks awkward, at least to me. the stock looks oversharpened to me. |
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| I don't like you. | Adding to what you all said, I don't really like the black at the right. I see that you were going for depth, but the burning was too strong, I'd tone it down. As for the BG, maybe get some effects to pop out around the focal, but still keep the same concept you were originally going for. |
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| Still Against The Test Of Time Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: You know that box on the side of the road Age: 18 Posts: 4,055
Rep Power: 9 ![]() ![]() Level: 19 EXP: | Use textures for a more appealing BG,and don't do too much of that multi lighting because it's creating multi focal points. It's also flat. Use some light stream textures to spice up effects. |
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| Sidekick | looks cool. :D i think the background should be lighter, or on the right side some sort of blue though. |
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| Ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho | ![]() ![]() I experimented, :3 cnc Last edited by PLR; July 3rd, 2009 at 06:34 AM. |
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