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Old May 8th, 2009, 01:16 PM   #1
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Old May 8th, 2009, 02:34 PM   #2
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OMGHOLYSHITAWESOME

I really like how the whole tag looks.
It's great. Nice use of clipping masks and great placement of the wireframes and text.

Link me to the stock.
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Old May 8th, 2009, 02:41 PM   #3
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Old May 8th, 2009, 09:06 PM   #4
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Awesome tag! I think it's the best you have ever made! The Clipping Masks are awesome, the Wireframes are incredible, text is pretty good, the use of the stock is excellent. Awesome job Salty!
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Old May 9th, 2009, 02:51 PM   #5
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Honestly I don't know what you were doing with the flow, it's shooting all over the place. Is it because the stock doesn't have anything to help with your flow?

Other then that the colors are boring, brighten up the blood splatters.
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Old May 9th, 2009, 03:11 PM   #6
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What in the fuck are you talking about?
It looks fine.

The spikes out of the stock aren't vicious, so it doesn't disturb the flow.
The tag's good, let it be.
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Old May 9th, 2009, 03:20 PM   #7
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Awesome tag! I think it's the best you have ever made! The Clipping Masks are awesome, the Wireframes are incredible, text is pretty good, the use of the stock is excellent. Awesome job Salty!
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Honestly I don't know what you were doing with the flow, it's shooting all over the place. Is it because the stock doesn't have anything to help with your flow?

Other then that the colors are boring, brighten up the blood splatters.
I was really trying to focus on the focal, and just have a few effects around the area, to make it a bit more exciting. Guess I screwed up a bit. Thanks, though

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What in the fuck are you talking about?
It looks fine.

The spikes out of the stock aren't vicious, so it doesn't disturb the flow.
The tag's good, let it be.
Ya, I was trying to make that blend with the stock. Thanks.
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Old May 9th, 2009, 03:28 PM   #8
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i'm sorry but I really don't like it

it looks poorly thrown together and messy
the wireframes look like they're just 'there', like you just put them there and said 'this is my background'

there's no balance with the text and that square, either :/
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Old May 9th, 2009, 03:38 PM   #9
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i'm sorry but I really don't like it

it looks poorly thrown together and messy
the wireframes look like they're just 'there', like you just put them there and said 'this is my background'

there's no balance with the text and that square, either :/
I did think it was a bit messy when I finished it. I thought that I should've erased some of the wireframes, and clipping masks. I actually kinda liked the text.

Thanks for the comment, though.
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Old May 9th, 2009, 03:45 PM   #10
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it's mainly those splatters

I understand that they're supposed to be a little chaotic because they're splatters, but there's just no correlation between them and the stock at all, besides the fact that they have the same colour and texture

i'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh or mean, that's not my intent, it's just i'm sick of people giving positive critique all the time here because it just wastes everyone's time. Everybody here except for vodka, Jecht, and Xidon is just going around circles. You guys don't seem to be making any progress at all, yet you're all like 'lol that's so call nice job bro'. It almost seems like you enjoy being crappy :/

and I know it's just tags but jesus guys it's not hard to get them right
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Old May 9th, 2009, 04:10 PM   #11
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it's mainly those splatters

I understand that they're supposed to be a little chaotic because they're splatters, but there's just no correlation between them and the stock at all, besides the fact that they have the same colour and texture
Haha, nah, I understand completely. This obviously wasn't one of my better tags, and I can see that.

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i'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh or mean, that's not my intent, it's just i'm sick of people giving positive critique all the time here because it just wastes everyone's time. Everybody here except for vodka, Jecht, and Xidon is just going around circles. You guys don't seem to be making any progress at all, yet you're all like 'lol that's so call nice job bro'. It almost seems like you enjoy being crappy :/

and I know it's just tags but jesus guys it's not hard to get them right
I guess it's just people trying to be nice when giving critique, or they just don't know what they're talking about; that's basically over half of this section.

And yeah, hardly anybody can make decent tags in this section, and maybe the reason they give positive credit is to think that they're good, and that they're improving. Some people are, but not a lot. I think people should be a lot more serious when giving critique (including me).
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