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May 8th, 2009, 01:16 PM
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#1 | | 光の戦士
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May 8th, 2009, 02:34 PM
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#2 | | THE VOICES ARE BACK
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Registered: Jan 2008 Age: 13 Posts: 5,891 | Re: Ocelot OMGHOLYSHITAWESOME
I really like how the whole tag looks.
It's great. Nice use of clipping masks and great placement of the wireframes and text.
Link me to the stock.
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May 8th, 2009, 02:41 PM
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#3 | | 光の戦士
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May 8th, 2009, 09:06 PM
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#4 | | damn you a sexy chick
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Registered: Dec 2008 Location: New Mexico Age: 13 Posts: 4,647
Currently playing: Modern Warfare 2, Kingdom Hearts II, DJ Hero, and Lost: Via Domus | Re: Ocelot Awesome tag! I think it's the best you have ever made! The Clipping Masks are awesome, the Wireframes are incredible, text is pretty good, the use of the stock is excellent. Awesome job Salty! | |
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May 9th, 2009, 02:51 PM
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#5 | | Line 'em up!
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Currently playing: Battlefield: Bad Company 2 | Re: Ocelot Honestly I don't know what you were doing with the flow, it's shooting all over the place. Is it because the stock doesn't have anything to help with your flow?
Other then that the colors are boring, brighten up the blood splatters. | |
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May 9th, 2009, 03:11 PM
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#6 | | Banned
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Registered: Feb 2006 Location: Los Angeles Age: 19 Posts: 2,644 | Re: Ocelot What in the fuck are you talking about?
It looks fine.
The spikes out of the stock aren't vicious, so it doesn't disturb the flow.
The tag's good, let it be. | |
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May 9th, 2009, 03:20 PM
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#7 | | 光の戦士
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Currently playing: Final Fantasy IV | Re: Ocelot Quote:
Originally Posted by Ringleader Man Awesome tag! I think it's the best you have ever made! The Clipping Masks are awesome, the Wireframes are incredible, text is pretty good, the use of the stock is excellent. Awesome job Salty! | Thanks. Quote:
Originally Posted by Victor Honestly I don't know what you were doing with the flow, it's shooting all over the place. Is it because the stock doesn't have anything to help with your flow?
Other then that the colors are boring, brighten up the blood splatters. | I was really trying to focus on the focal, and just have a few effects around the area, to make it a bit more exciting. Guess I screwed up a bit. Thanks, though Quote:
Originally Posted by Vodka What in the fuck are you talking about?
It looks fine.
The spikes out of the stock aren't vicious, so it doesn't disturb the flow.
The tag's good, let it be. | Ya, I was trying to make that blend with the stock. Thanks. | |
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May 9th, 2009, 03:28 PM
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#8 | | bad dug bad!
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Currently playing: i am currently sitting in this hole waiting for the bird because i will capture it for my master | Re: Ocelot i'm sorry but I really don't like it
it looks poorly thrown together and messy
the wireframes look like they're just 'there', like you just put them there and said 'this is my background'
there's no balance with the text and that square, either :/
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May 9th, 2009, 03:38 PM
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#9 | | 光の戦士
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Currently playing: Final Fantasy IV | Re: Ocelot Quote:
Originally Posted by Scarecrow i'm sorry but I really don't like it
it looks poorly thrown together and messy
the wireframes look like they're just 'there', like you just put them there and said 'this is my background'
there's no balance with the text and that square, either :/ | I did think it was a bit messy when I finished it. I thought that I should've erased some of the wireframes, and clipping masks. I actually kinda liked the text.
Thanks for the comment, though. | |
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May 9th, 2009, 03:45 PM
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#10 | | bad dug bad!
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Currently playing: i am currently sitting in this hole waiting for the bird because i will capture it for my master | Re: Ocelot it's mainly those splatters
I understand that they're supposed to be a little chaotic because they're splatters, but there's just no correlation between them and the stock at all, besides the fact that they have the same colour and texture
i'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh or mean, that's not my intent, it's just i'm sick of people giving positive critique all the time here because it just wastes everyone's time. Everybody here except for vodka, Jecht, and Xidon is just going around circles. You guys don't seem to be making any progress at all, yet you're all like 'lol that's so call nice job bro'. It almost seems like you enjoy being crappy :/
and I know it's just tags but jesus guys it's not hard to get them right
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May 9th, 2009, 04:10 PM
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#11 | | 光の戦士
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Currently playing: Final Fantasy IV | Re: Ocelot Quote:
Originally Posted by Scarecrow it's mainly those splatters
I understand that they're supposed to be a little chaotic because they're splatters, but there's just no correlation between them and the stock at all, besides the fact that they have the same colour and texture | Haha, nah, I understand completely. This obviously wasn't one of my better tags, and I can see that. Quote:
i'm sorry if I'm coming off harsh or mean, that's not my intent, it's just i'm sick of people giving positive critique all the time here because it just wastes everyone's time. Everybody here except for vodka, Jecht, and Xidon is just going around circles. You guys don't seem to be making any progress at all, yet you're all like 'lol that's so call nice job bro'. It almost seems like you enjoy being crappy :/
and I know it's just tags but jesus guys it's not hard to get them right
| I guess it's just people trying to be nice when giving critique, or they just don't know what they're talking about; that's basically over half of this section.
And yeah, hardly anybody can make decent tags in this section, and maybe the reason they give positive credit is to think that they're good, and that they're improving. Some people are, but not a lot. I think people should be a lot more serious when giving critique (including me). | |
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