Fragmented also Poop

Carbunkel · January 30th, 2009, 05:05 AM

Okay, before I get pummeled, it looked way better than this. I forgot to save at one point and went back to change it to see if it would look better that way. Bad idea. : (
I'm unsatisfied with this one, but I sort of like the colors.

saratp · January 30th, 2009, 05:19 AM

Well, In my opinion.
There is just way to much going on, you don't seem to have any flow to it at all on the right.
The left is a lot better but still a little odd.

The colors are good, but maybe move the stock over to the right a little more. I also don't see the point of the random lines on the right too, I'd take them off.
like I said there is just all around to much going on in this if you ask me.

iProd · January 30th, 2009, 06:14 AM

Move the stock to where the action is, my eyes are ripping and running trying to find a single direction to move in.

[Left side \\\\\ GOOD-kinda]Stock/lighting/blended[Right side...dear god every which way.] Btw, whats that blue cloudish layer around the stock? To me, it just doesn't feel right, ya know? Darker choice of color IMO.

Points for going so abstract.

｡★｡+.:.*ﾟ☆Dug☆ﾟ*.:.+｡★｡ · January 30th, 2009, 10:57 AM

i love the colours but it's a tad messy i think

~~gramp anime scholar~~ · January 30th, 2009, 09:06 PM

what is this i don't even

colours are pretty cool

but the effects are like what

Carbunkel · January 30th, 2009, 09:32 PM

it's like when you go to pee and realize you gotta take a shit too. : (

~~gramp anime scholar~~ · January 30th, 2009, 10:28 PM

oh hey I hate that feeling

I actually had that shit earlier today, it was shitsux

Carbunkel · January 31st, 2009, 01:08 AM

or or or

when you go poo and you think you're done and then all of a sudden a whole shit load of shit comes out

~~gramp anime scholar~~ · January 31st, 2009, 01:32 AM

That's a pretty shitty feeling too (PUN).

Also I like the new version.

Vandread · January 31st, 2009, 06:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Carbunkel

when you go poo and you think you're done and then all of a sudden a whole shit load of shit comes out

that is why i sit there for about a half hour, just in case

Quote:

Originally Posted by Carbunkel

yes

｡★｡+.:.*ﾟ☆Dug☆ﾟ*.:.+｡★｡ · January 31st, 2009, 07:00 AM

what is this discussion i don't even

i have experienced these shitstorms

Carbunkel · January 31st, 2009, 06:37 PM

So maybe that's where the tentacle in the bag hides.

you know what sucks
when you're using a public bathroom and you really gotta poo and there is someone in the next stall to hear the 'plop' of the water when you're shitting.

sometimes for fun I start making weird noises to make it awkward :D!

Pablo · January 31st, 2009, 07:00 PM

oh this is good discussion.

Apple Jaxx · January 31st, 2009, 09:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Carbunkel

So maybe that's where the tentacle in the bag hides.

you know what sucks
when you're using a public bathroom and you really gotta poo and there is someone in the next stall to hear the 'plop' of the water when you're shitting.

sometimes for fun I start making weird noises to make it awkward :D!

I am unable to poop anywhere outside my house. seriously

I held it for like a week once when I went to camp :\

.:[Kazuma]:. · February 1st, 2009, 01:14 AM

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Originally Posted by fal'Cie

I am unable to poop anywhere outside my house. seriously

I held it for like a week once when I went to camp :\

It's called putting toilet paper over the seat and pushing your body up so your ass doesn't touch the seat.