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Old January 15th, 2009, 07:34 AM   #1
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CnC please.

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Old January 15th, 2009, 07:42 AM   #2
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this tag is not one of your best. but that doesnt mean its not good, on the plus side its a great idea, kinda risky if you ask me, the effects dont seem to match with the stock, and it seems that it was slightly rushed, as if it were done in less then 1 hour. And if that is the case, not bad of a job, but next time, say you go for a v.2 of this tag, try using more appealing effects, and put more pazass into it..keep up the good work, your improving.
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Old January 15th, 2009, 07:50 AM   #3
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The thing I'm going to point out instantly is that right side of the stock. Smudge it in a fair bit, so the outline isn't as visible. I'd also say you need some type of a light source in there too. Like KSX said, it does look a bit rushed, but even still, it's a nice tag
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Old January 15th, 2009, 09:34 AM   #4
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V2
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Old January 15th, 2009, 09:36 AM   #5
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That's a heck of a lot better
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Old January 15th, 2009, 09:39 AM   #6
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I know right. Just a bit more smudging and effects & getting rid of a texture
and adding color balance.
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Old January 15th, 2009, 09:43 AM   #7
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That's the main thing, just playing around with it all to find the balance
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Old January 15th, 2009, 10:54 AM   #8
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The first tag was nice, and V2's corrections make it even better. Do you take requests, or are you part of a sig shop/group?
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Old January 15th, 2009, 11:40 AM   #9
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Requests i do occasionally so far i've had 2. But i'm not part of shop.
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Old January 15th, 2009, 01:57 PM   #10
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Damn, v2 is so sexy:D
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Old January 16th, 2009, 03:18 AM   #11
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That little white bit at the far, far left should be nixxed.
Then the focal can be sharpened, slightly.

Otherwise, hot piece, baby cakes.
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Old January 16th, 2009, 04:18 AM   #12
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holy shit, this newer verison is way more detailed, you are a great GFX'er in the making. i am glad i got my avvy from you..:D!
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