Chun Li not using her legs

Xidon · January 14th, 2009, 06:44 PM

Haven't asked for critique here in quite some time, so here is some half-assed Chun Li tag for ya:

Proper CnC por favor :D!

Tenacious GFX · January 14th, 2009, 09:51 PM

This tag definitley has some flow
I like v2 the most because it feels up some neg space and the colors look good

~~Charlie~~ · January 15th, 2009, 12:36 AM

I'm feeling the first.
The sprite could be sharpened a bit, to make it more distinctive alongside the effects.
The typography in the others could have its font switched. That font in particular doesn't really fit
in terms of its sharpness, edges, etc.

I like the feeling of motion, but I think it'd have more of an edge if the colors were a tad more intense for the flourish growing out of that sprite.

Xidon · January 15th, 2009, 06:30 AM

^Sharpening the sprite more would make it look too pixel-y and changing the tags color or just adding more would make it messier for me, so I probably won't change that.

Concerning the text, I verymuch agree with you, but I didn't really pay much attention to it, so yeah :v

Thanks for the feedback peeps.

｡★｡+.:.*ﾟ☆Dug☆ﾟ*.:.+｡★｡ · January 15th, 2009, 06:35 AM

Ctrl+A, Ctrl+Shift+C, Ctrl+Shift+V, Filter > Sharpen, erase sprite area with an accurate brush.

and works better without the text : D

Xidon · January 15th, 2009, 12:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vodka

Sharpen the sprite, but not the effects

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scarecrow

Sharpen the effects, but not the sprite

I hate you guys >:

~~gramp anime scholar~~ · January 15th, 2009, 02:56 PM

Uhhhh, the fuck did you do with the Chunster? >:l

Anyway, yeah works better without that typography (ew), but those effects could use a lot more work.

Xidon · January 15th, 2009, 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Proline

but those effects could use a lot more work.

Mind being a bit more precise? I haven't done a somewhat serious tag were the dominant effects are renders for half a year, so I'd like to know what I'm doing wrong :x

And thanks for the comment.

Vandread · January 17th, 2009, 03:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Xidon

I hate you guys >:

Try both for the hell of it.

Anyway, the sprite itself is kinda meh and the text sucks in the second one. V3 is also a no.

Xidon · January 17th, 2009, 12:17 PM

^ Nah, I think I'll just scrap the tag.

I just did it to break the monotony of the way I usually do tags anyway :v