don't let them know you're afraid

Virus · January 11th, 2009, 05:32 AM

Latest....

cnc?

Erebus Kronos · January 11th, 2009, 06:00 AM

Ah, I like where you're going with this. Work on your blending and your type more. The stock should work with the tag not look like it was just slapped on. Plus, it has a blue tone, but your BG is purple. It would look better if the stock had a purple or a violet tint to it dont you think? I would erase some of the spekels that you have going on in the BG, it really takes away from it IMO. You should change the font too. It doesn't flow with the rest of the tag. The last thing I'm ganna comment on it wtf is that greenish, redish, purpleish thing under the stock's forearm? I don't think that flows either...not with green in it anyway.

I wouldn't scrap this. It would look amazing if you made some fine tunes to it.

Virus · January 11th, 2009, 06:30 AM

thanks...i'll work more wit it

any other cnc?

**Rapidus Procella** · January 13th, 2009, 04:05 AM

I love it, nothing wrong here, if i may. Can i wear this smexy tag, its soooo hott.

And like i said its the best one i saw you come out with..bravo..^_^

~~Charlie~~ · January 13th, 2009, 05:04 AM

In tune to what titan up yonder said..
It'd be interesting if there was a sense of 'movement' to it by creating flourishes coming out of his back.
You can leave it as is. It's an interesting piece of work to say the least.

But taking a look at it again, it feels as if something's missing.
Maybe a little light source. Like a point of light at the end of the gun, then a set of lines, duplications etc set up behind him to create the effect that he's in a battle scene of some sort rather than it seeming so stationary.

Virus · January 15th, 2009, 04:35 AM

I see wat ur sayin Vodka. When i have more time i'll definitely work with it...

And King Sora, sure. You can wear it if u want

January 13th, 2009, 05:04 AM	#5
~~Charlie~~ Banned Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Los Angeles Age: 19 Posts: 2,405 Rep Power: 0 Level: EXP:	Re: don't let them know you're afraid In tune to what titan up yonder said.. It'd be interesting if there was a sense of 'movement' to it by creating flourishes coming out of his back. You can leave it as is. It's an interesting piece of work to say the least. But taking a look at it again, it feels as if something's missing. Maybe a little light source. Like a point of light at the end of the gun, then a set of lines, duplications etc set up behind him to create the effect that he's in a battle scene of some sort rather than it seeming so stationary.

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