** Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation ***

Beauxxx · 09/27/08, 06:18 AM

Here are a handful of pieces that I've made over the last couple of days.
I felt like taking a few steps out of my comfort zones with these tags, and wanted to focus more on depth and perspective. Not to mention mixing in an extra, /wow/, factor that some may not be accustomed to. Not to mention subtle approaches to /abstracting/ some basic styles here and there.
My tags were also my little delve into conforming to making them again, when I told myself that I wouldn't xD

LOL @ HYPOCRISY;

CNC?

order oldest - newest :

TheTerrorofDeath · 09/27/08, 05:18 PM

I love the Joker stocks. Though version 2 is better. The second one doesn't appeal to me as much. I thought the color took away from the stock, and the left is a bit blank. I don't know what to say about the third, but it looks cool lol.

Good job.

DaDarkDude · 10/14/08, 08:08 PM

I like the joker ones, the second better, the third and forth, I can't say much... The fourth is way to bright... Other than that, good job.

Beautiful Chaos · 10/14/08, 09:03 PM

The joker tag is nice, but there are flaws. The stock doesn't fit in nicely or draw my attention at all, except for the ill-fitted effects covering him. On the other hand the background is really quite nice, i love the effects. Although, sadly, the rest of the tag doesn't match the background.

The second tag has some of the same flaws. The effects, again, are fantastic, other than the left side could do with some more dynamic features. But the stock fades far too much and is over-powered with bright and distracting colours on the right. For the right, i would suggest some more typography, drag out the effects already there and maybe cut down the side a bit, to get rid of some of the unneccesary empty space.

Finally, there's not much to say about the last piece. It plainly looks like a burst of random shapes and patterns. Maybe it's my inexperience in abstract art, but i think it would look much nicer with a focal point implemented.

Overall, very very good, but i think other LP's i've seen from you have been much better.

Scarecrow · 10/15/08, 02:14 PM

to be honest, I don't really like the Joker one all that much. The whole circle/smudge/splatter just really doesn't appeal to me that much anymore.

i like this one better, however, although I think the colours could be better. The uh, rectangular bar you've got down the bottom there isn't really necessary, imo.

nice work though, I like how your style is sort of flourishing

09/27/08, 06:18 AM	#1
Beauxxx Twilight Knight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Desirous Phantastical Whimsical Bangable Romanticistalfanstasmal sugar coated - life in California Age: 18 Posts: 895 Rep Power: 5	Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation * Here are a handful of pieces that I've made over the last couple of days. I felt like taking a few steps out of my comfort zones with these tags, and wanted to focus more on depth and perspective. Not to mention mixing in an extra, /wow/, factor that some may not be accustomed to. Not to mention subtle approaches to /abstracting/ some basic styles here and there. My tags were also my little delve into conforming to making them again, when I told myself that I wouldn't xD LOL @ HYPOCRISY; CNC? order oldest - newest :

09/27/08, 05:18 PM	#2
TheTerrorofDeath Returned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: USA Posts: 3,250 Rep Power: 8	Re: Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation * I love the Joker stocks. Though version 2 is better. The second one doesn't appeal to me as much. I thought the color took away from the stock, and the left is a bit blank. I don't know what to say about the third, but it looks cool lol. Good job.

10/14/08, 08:08 PM	#3
DaDarkDude Ruler of Light Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Say, wanna know how I got these scars?! Posts: 653 Rep Power: 2	Re: Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation * I like the joker ones, the second better, the third and forth, I can't say much... The fourth is way to bright... Other than that, good job.

10/14/08, 09:03 PM	#4
Beautiful Chaos The Vaccine. Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England. Age: 19 Posts: 1,505 Rep Power: 7	Re: Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation * The joker tag is nice, but there are flaws. The stock doesn't fit in nicely or draw my attention at all, except for the ill-fitted effects covering him. On the other hand the background is really quite nice, i love the effects. Although, sadly, the rest of the tag doesn't match the background. The second tag has some of the same flaws. The effects, again, are fantastic, other than the left side could do with some more dynamic features. But the stock fades far too much and is over-powered with bright and distracting colours on the right. For the right, i would suggest some more typography, drag out the effects already there and maybe cut down the side a bit, to get rid of some of the unneccesary empty space. Finally, there's not much to say about the last piece. It plainly looks like a burst of random shapes and patterns. Maybe it's my inexperience in abstract art, but i think it would look much nicer with a focal point implemented. Overall, very very good, but i think other LP's i've seen from you have been much better.

10/15/08, 02:14 PM	#5
Scarecrow pm me for your free custom avatar! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: the moulin rouge Age: 17 Posts: 2,938 Rep Power: 8	Re: Meeting of: COLOR and CLASSIC generation * to be honest, I don't really like the Joker one all that much. The whole circle/smudge/splatter just really doesn't appeal to me that much anymore. i like this one better, however, although I think the colours could be better. The uh, rectangular bar you've got down the bottom there isn't really necessary, imo. nice work though, I like how your style is sort of flourishing

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