inferno and burn

**madammina** · 08/30/08, 05:40 PM

yes, more CnC. This time, please ignore the render. I made it last night and am working on finding a better one. but I want your opinion on all but that (unless you like it ;P)

So, yeah, what do you guys think (I'm working on flow)

**chaywa** · 08/31/08, 12:03 AM

The stock is LQ, so much so that you can tell you ripped it from WMM
The canvas:stock ratio is totally skewed, there's too much empty space on both sides which isn't filled other than a gradient and text which acts as focal (which is a big no no).

My honest advice is to scrap it, or cut off about 30 pixels each side (minimum), increase the height a tad, stock should be larger and better quality, then when you've filled up about 1/3 of the space develop the effects/flow/depth thereafeter.

You really need to get the stock:canvas ratio aspects near enough right before really focusing on anything else.

Oh and a better STOCK

saratp · 09/13/08, 06:17 AM

i'm going to have to go with, well everything chaywa on this one.
the text on the bottom is a big give away thats it's from WMM.

also the size us way to big. take it down a bit. also work on the blending. and remove the text.

what program are you useing?

**madammina** · 09/15/08, 02:14 AM

Gimp. That was a late night, need new sig moment. I ended up redoing it into my current one (new pic, worked on effects, got actual burning text, smaller size.) Hope its' better. Thank you for posting BTW

princess · 09/15/08, 11:09 PM

it's so nice

08/30/08, 05:40 PM	#1
madammina Just listen to teacher Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: On Pride Rock, watching my kingdom fall Posts: 3,517 Rep Power: 7	inferno and burn yes, more CnC. This time, please ignore the render. I made it last night and am working on finding a better one. but I want your opinion on all but that (unless you like it ;P) So, yeah, what do you guys think (I'm working on flow)

08/31/08, 12:03 AM	#2
chaywa (E)motion Isn't Meaning Join Date: May 2005 Location: Chamber of Guf Age: 19 Posts: 5,490 Rep Power: 12	Re: inferno and burn The stock is LQ, so much so that you can tell you ripped it from WMM The canvas:stock ratio is totally skewed, there's too much empty space on both sides which isn't filled other than a gradient and text which acts as focal (which is a big no no). My honest advice is to scrap it, or cut off about 30 pixels each side (minimum), increase the height a tad, stock should be larger and better quality, then when you've filled up about 1/3 of the space develop the effects/flow/depth thereafeter. You really need to get the stock:canvas ratio aspects near enough right before really focusing on anything else. Oh and a better STOCK

09/13/08, 06:17 AM	#3
saratp Uhh... Chyeah! Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 1,574 Rep Power: 5	Re: inferno and burn i'm going to have to go with, well everything chaywa on this one. the text on the bottom is a big give away thats it's from WMM. also the size us way to big. take it down a bit. also work on the blending. and remove the text. what program are you useing?

09/15/08, 02:14 AM	#4
madammina Just listen to teacher Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: On Pride Rock, watching my kingdom fall Posts: 3,517 Rep Power: 7	Re: inferno and burn Gimp. That was a late night, need new sig moment. I ended up redoing it into my current one (new pic, worked on effects, got actual burning text, smaller size.) Hope its' better. Thank you for posting BTW

09/15/08, 11:09 PM	#5
princess Court Mage Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Saudi Arabia Age: 18 Posts: 27 Rep Power: 1	Re: inferno and burn it's so nice

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