When Hearts Burst Into Fire!

**Sacred Silver** · 08/27/08, 12:31 PM

v1.0

v2.0

Inspired by a tag by Gavin. =)

CnC please. =)

Scarecrow · 08/27/08, 01:36 PM

Haven't seen bardust used for a while, I'm still a little iffy about it, personally.

I think what you've got so far is good, but it looks unfinished, especially v2. It needs something that'll make it eyecatching, that'll make it stand out. As it is, it just looks a little normal.

But uh, keep it up. Digging the colours.

**Sacred Silver** · 08/27/08, 10:23 PM

Thanks Dan! =]

You have any idea how I could make it eye-catching? Anyone?

♥ · 08/28/08, 05:06 AM

Oh my god, Bardust.
Man, that brings back memories.

A tad plain. don't like the colors that much, I feel like that tan-orange color you have could be more contrasted and bright.

**Sacred Silver** · 08/28/08, 05:19 AM

I was scrolling through, trying to find a font I liked and then I came to Bardust. I was like, what the heck!? xD

Thank you for the tips guys. Do you think this is my best?

**Dogenzaka** · 09/08/08, 02:31 AM

Definitely not your best. I've seen you do better.
A lot of lacking space. Try putting some filters and difference in contrast and color. Some C4D might even help.
The text feels unnecessary to me. I almost never use text nowadays as I usually have to force it into my piece. If you're doing that, it's not worth it. The text doesn't feel a part of the tag, in my opinion.
I like that electricity thing you have in the back, try adding some of it in front of the stock to make it feel like it's a part of a tangible environment.

Decron · 09/08/08, 07:45 PM

bit bland at the left but version 1 is absolutly better

08/27/08, 12:31 PM	#1
Sacred Silver Trumpline '08. ♥ Join Date: Nov 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,376 Rep Power: 8	When Hearts Burst Into Fire! v1.0 v2.0 Inspired by a tag by Gavin. =) CnC please. =)

08/27/08, 01:36 PM	#2
Scarecrow pm me for your free custom avatar! Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: the moulin rouge Age: 17 Posts: 2,937 Rep Power: 8	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! Haven't seen bardust used for a while, I'm still a little iffy about it, personally. I think what you've got so far is good, but it looks unfinished, especially v2. It needs something that'll make it eyecatching, that'll make it stand out. As it is, it just looks a little normal. But uh, keep it up. Digging the colours.

08/27/08, 10:23 PM	#3
Sacred Silver Trumpline '08. ♥ Join Date: Nov 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,376 Rep Power: 8	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! Thanks Dan! =] You have any idea how I could make it eye-catching? Anyone?

08/28/08, 05:06 AM	#4
♥ Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 3,540 Rep Power: 9	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! Oh my god, Bardust. Man, that brings back memories. A tad plain. don't like the colors that much, I feel like that tan-orange color you have could be more contrasted and bright.

08/28/08, 05:19 AM	#5
Sacred Silver Trumpline '08. ♥ Join Date: Nov 2005 Age: 17 Posts: 3,376 Rep Power: 8	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! I was scrolling through, trying to find a font I liked and then I came to Bardust. I was like, what the heck!? xD Thank you for the tips guys. Do you think this is my best?

09/08/08, 02:31 AM	#6
Dogenzaka PLATINUM USERNAME WINS Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: KEYBUREDO? Graphics Clan: TheCitrusDistrict Age: 17 Posts: 9,041 Rep Power: 16	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! Definitely not your best. I've seen you do better. A lot of lacking space. Try putting some filters and difference in contrast and color. Some C4D might even help. The text feels unnecessary to me. I almost never use text nowadays as I usually have to force it into my piece. If you're doing that, it's not worth it. The text doesn't feel a part of the tag, in my opinion. I like that electricity thing you have in the back, try adding some of it in front of the stock to make it feel like it's a part of a tangible environment.

09/08/08, 07:45 PM	#7
Decron Organization Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Belgium Age: 17 Posts: 353 Rep Power: 4	Re: When Hearts Burst Into Fire! bit bland at the left but version 1 is absolutly better

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