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| Procrastination is Key | ![]() havent seen it on another monitor yet, but this monitor dulls yellows and reds so its probably pretty terrible as far as colors go. i dono though. critique away. edit: since nobodies commented anyways, might as well add this one too. ![]() Last edited by C4E; 06/27/08 at 07:13 AM. |
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| Sexually Stimulating | Try taking the border off the first one. It's killing me, man. Then I'll look at it again. For the second, the blue is just random to the rest of it all. And the whole tag is all /// kind of direction and the the blue comes in with a || on part of it and ****s up the flow. Either add some more of the blue render kind of thing to the left, or make it feel as though it belongs to the rest. Either way, make it subtle. As far as the text, eh.. Might be better without it. Give it a try. |
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| Procrastination is Key | actually had the no border version of the tag up before i made the second tag. heres that. ![]() & ill play with the other one a bit when i get off work today. thanks for suggestions. ![]() |
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| Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 3,516
Rep Power: 8 ![]() ![]() | Delicious Topaz there, bud. but you missed cloud's face. |
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| daggy waggy | Alright, enough of the ****ing topaz. Please. Seriously, it's giving every tag you do the same freaking look and it's not good. You're pretty much degrading your work by using it. Plus, it's infectious, other people are starting to whore the hell out of now. I can't even critique it properly because it looks like you've just applied the image and topaz'd it to death. |
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| Subtly Inspiring Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 3,516
Rep Power: 8 ![]() ![]() | Quote:
seeing a tag with topaz makes it impossible for me to take the person who made it seriously. | |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: go left a looooooooooooooooooong way and then turn right Age: 15
Posts: 102
Rep Power: 1 ![]() | that cloud sig is insanley good, its a bit too dark though, make it a bit lighter. |
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| Procrastination is Key | Sad. :[ more like Apply image>stylize>diffuse>anistropic edit>fade diffuse. oh well. thanks for comments anyways. |
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| Memento Mori | Quote:
<.< I very much liked the upper border in the Cloud tag, could you keep that part of the border and just make it a bit thiner? Also could you please go reduce noise on his face it is a bit too grainy.. Other then that the tag is pretty good, but it looks to me like your still in a slump D: I don't like the basic compo of the second one, it is just unappealing to me... | |
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| daggy waggy | |
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| Sexually Stimulating | Wait one shit.. to clean your tag? How the **** do you clean a tag? I mean, I doubt I'd do it, but I feel left out. ._. And yes, the gritty face isn't looking so hot. |
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