soldiers of misfortune

~~Miss Murder~~ · 05/20/08, 03:20 AM

v1

v2

v3
http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/a...andpeacev2.png

yes, I have been paying attention to your comments in other threads.
even so, I don't think this is the greatest.

now then.
=]

Veritas · 05/20/08, 03:41 AM

Two focal points. My eyes can't find a place to rest. I keep bouncing between the two. I'd suggest blurring and burning the guy just enough that he is not distracting but is still visible so your point gets across. Also, don't use lense flares for lighting. The rarely turn out looking good. Soft brushes at sizes around 100-200px are better. That's all I can think of right now. Other people will pick out whatever I missed.

Zook · 05/21/08, 02:44 AM

that peace sign actually fits, good job with that. Like Aequitas said V1 and V2 have two focal points but V3 seems to correct that. My only other comment is that the lens flare near his hand looks like it's coming off his hand instead of behind it. Other than that nice job.

05/20/08, 03:20 AM	#1
~~Miss Murder~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Climbing Up the Walls Age: 16 Posts: 3,399 Rep Power: 0	soldiers of misfortune v1 v2 v3 http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/a...andpeacev2.png yes, I have been paying attention to your comments in other threads. even so, I don't think this is the greatest. now then. =]

05/20/08, 03:41 AM	#2
Veritas Dangerously Delicious Join Date: May 2006 Location: Flo Rida Age: 17 Posts: 2,638 Rep Power: 6	Re: soldiers of misfortune Two focal points. My eyes can't find a place to rest. I keep bouncing between the two. I'd suggest blurring and burning the guy just enough that he is not distracting but is still visible so your point gets across. Also, don't use lense flares for lighting. The rarely turn out looking good. Soft brushes at sizes around 100-200px are better. That's all I can think of right now. Other people will pick out whatever I missed.

05/21/08, 02:44 AM	#3
Zook Sound of Silver Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Here and Now Age: 17 Posts: 2,005 Rep Power: 7	Re: soldiers of misfortune that peace sign actually fits, good job with that. Like Aequitas said V1 and V2 have two focal points but V3 seems to correct that. My only other comment is that the lens flare near his hand looks like it's coming off his hand instead of behind it. Other than that nice job.

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