look mom

**.:[Kazuma]:.** · 05/19/08, 03:14 AM

I wanted to try to do something different other than smudging all the time; a new style. What do guys think? Cnc...................................

Beauxxx · 05/19/08, 04:14 AM

Woah, I remember when GG used that stock =D
Anyway, the first thing that catches my eye is that his face is a bit too stretched (bad quality, imo), but sometimes people have to deal with that, so I suggest (if you want to touch this piece up a bit)- to nix the monotone color scheme in this tag. It worked in your last one, but for this particular stock, it's always fun to experiment with different color schemes and gradients rather than flowing back into one that you've grown accustom to using.

As for anything else I can comment on--

*The flow of the tag in general is well executed, I have to admit. However, once you get past seeing that, your choice of a gold yellow tribal -esque design there hurts the eyes when you mix it with your overall color scheme, (maybe lower the opacity a bit?)

*Next ish le text. In general, it breaks as a good choice. My only suggestion would be to fade it more into the background a bit, or change up the font type to something a bit edgier.

**Otherwise
1) Flow = Good
2) Color = (It passes, but you can toy around with it more)
3) Creativity = Excellent for the stock piece <3

Play with your options, that's all I can tell ya =]

~Beau

**.:[Kazuma]:.** · 05/19/08, 04:28 AM

Thanks for the comment. More Cnc please.

Zook · 05/19/08, 07:52 PM

everything blends nicely, that stock looks a little funky though (stretched again?), anyways the only thing that doesn't fit nicely is that black/yellow graphic on the bottom. should throw a filter on that to blend it more. Other than that it looks good.

Felix · 05/20/08, 12:48 AM

The stock throws off the sig. It is too stretched out, or just bad quality, and if you get a chance you should change that only if you have the PSD though. The colors match the stock though, I do have th complement you on that. The first thing I saw when I looked at the sig was the black and yellow outlined tribal design. If you get a chance change that. I blinked for one second and refreshed the page, but it is still the first thing I see.

The smudging is ok, but for some reason doesn't seem completely right. I like it though, but I haven't seen your other sigs so I don't know what this "new style" really is. The sig is sharpened too much in some areas and the dots annoy me.

Overall, good sig.

**.:[Kazuma]:.** · 05/20/08, 03:41 AM

Yo can I get some Cnc for my current too.

05/19/08, 03:14 AM	#1
.:[Kazuma]:. ☆aww sh*t☆ Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: You know that box on the side of the road Age: 17 Posts: 3,125 Rep Power: 7	look mom I wanted to try to do something different other than smudging all the time; a new style. What do guys think? Cnc...................................

05/19/08, 04:14 AM	#2
Beauxxx Twilight Knight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Rubix Cube Pollen Age: 18 Posts: 861 Rep Power: 4	Re: look mom Woah, I remember when GG used that stock =D Anyway, the first thing that catches my eye is that his face is a bit too stretched (bad quality, imo), but sometimes people have to deal with that, so I suggest (if you want to touch this piece up a bit)- to nix the monotone color scheme in this tag. It worked in your last one, but for this particular stock, it's always fun to experiment with different color schemes and gradients rather than flowing back into one that you've grown accustom to using. As for anything else I can comment on-- The flow of the tag in general is well executed, I have to admit. However, once you get past seeing that, your choice of a gold yellow tribal -esque design there hurts the eyes when you mix it with your overall color scheme, (maybe lower the opacity a bit?) Next ish le text. In general, it breaks as a good choice. My only suggestion would be to fade it more into the background a bit, or change up the font type to something a bit edgier. **Otherwise 1) Flow = Good 2) Color = (It passes, but you can toy around with it more) 3) Creativity = Excellent for the stock piece <3 Play with your options, that's all I can tell ya =] ~Beau

05/19/08, 04:28 AM	#3
.:[Kazuma]:. ☆aww sh*t☆ Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: You know that box on the side of the road Age: 17 Posts: 3,125 Rep Power: 7	Re: look mom Thanks for the comment. More Cnc please.

05/19/08, 07:52 PM	#4
Zook Sound of Silver Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Here and Now Age: 17 Posts: 2,005 Rep Power: 7	Re: look mom everything blends nicely, that stock looks a little funky though (stretched again?), anyways the only thing that doesn't fit nicely is that black/yellow graphic on the bottom. should throw a filter on that to blend it more. Other than that it looks good.

05/20/08, 12:48 AM	#5
Felix Expect the Unexpected Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Across the Universe Posts: 2,497 Rep Power: 6	Re: look mom The stock throws off the sig. It is too stretched out, or just bad quality, and if you get a chance you should change that only if you have the PSD though. The colors match the stock though, I do have th complement you on that. The first thing I saw when I looked at the sig was the black and yellow outlined tribal design. If you get a chance change that. I blinked for one second and refreshed the page, but it is still the first thing I see. The smudging is ok, but for some reason doesn't seem completely right. I like it though, but I haven't seen your other sigs so I don't know what this "new style" really is. The sig is sharpened too much in some areas and the dots annoy me. Overall, good sig.

05/20/08, 03:41 AM	#6
.:[Kazuma]:. ☆aww sh*t☆ Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: You know that box on the side of the road Age: 17 Posts: 3,125 Rep Power: 7	Re: look mom Yo can I get some Cnc for my current too.

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