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Old February 13th, 2008, 01:28 AM   #1
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set....wat u think?
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Old February 13th, 2008, 01:34 AM   #2
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no its not that bad
work on text, it looks like it was jsut thrown on there. find a better position for it
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Old February 13th, 2008, 01:39 AM   #3
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that better?
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Old February 13th, 2008, 01:56 AM   #4
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i think it would look better if you moved it to the right just so it wasnt covering anything except for the background
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Old February 13th, 2008, 04:41 AM   #5
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there we go....anymore CnC?
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Old February 13th, 2008, 01:36 PM   #6
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yeah i think it looks much better now
add some more colors to it
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Old February 13th, 2008, 02:03 PM   #7
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the typography on the first was better.
it's a bit monotone, but i like it.
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Old February 13th, 2008, 04:20 PM   #8
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What is it with you and fractals, seriously get rid of them as they don't contribute to anything at all. The main issue here however is stock dominance, leading to random effects and what seems to be random smudging thrown in on the top left. Work with stock location first and build up the tag around that, there should never be too much or too little space filled by the stock so that random effects are used. Think of structure, especially in regards to flow and eventually this will lead to improved depth, proper application of effect, lighting etc. thereafter.
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Old February 13th, 2008, 10:39 PM   #9
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^dude, give him a break
although its really big, you have to admit this is his nicest tag ever
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Old February 14th, 2008, 04:10 AM   #10
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^thanks orangx but its ok....i dont mind the criticism so much....how can i get better if no one gives me some CnC?

@chaywa: and i'll keep that in mind for my new tags....
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