I always love it when people give their interpretation of something that I've written, particularly when they are as thorough as yours, LongLiveLife. This has got something to do with enjoying any comment, and also something to do with a little bit of bafflement.
I would like to go on record right now with saying that I have never, ever worked to convey a specific idea or maintain a specific thread within my poetry (or, often, within my prose). What you are reading has been edited very, very lightly-mainly just to fix things like flow or poor wording-and I didn't plan out a single scrap of it before I just started typing. All of those lines just come from the words that came into my head.
I'm curious; does this make the work any less interesting to the two (or thirty-five) of you? Does it have to be intentional, or is it okay even independent of my writing method?