Untitled

[Zephyr]

Untitled is the title... just to let everyone know. But yes... enjoy? Feedback is more than welcome. Really. I appreciate comments. :D



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I want you. I’ve thought about it long and hard, and I can’t get past my original conclusion. I want you. Don’t ask me why, because I wouldn’t be able to tell you. I can’t even understand it myself. What could someone like me see in someone like you? I shouldn’t be staring at you when you’re not looking, wondering what it’d be like if you would look at me and smile. I should be yelling at you, hating you, and telling you that someone like you will never get anywhere in the world because you’re so different. The world doesn’t welcome originality with open arms. You’d just drag me down. You’re not normal. So why in the hell do I want you?

It’s your eyes. The way you look when you’re sitting alone in that corner, drawing. You look alive. The way your face filled with despair when I took your notebook filled with drawings and threw it out the window into that dirty, disgusting pond. Being different will only hurt you, so just stop already! You piss me off so much! No one likes you. Yet you continue to come day after day. Why? I wish you would just go away already, so I wouldn’t have to look at you. Maybe then I could get you off my mind. Even then, I doubt it. If you failed to show up one day, I’d probably end up searching for you, and then yell at you because “the teacher was worried”. But then, maybe, if we were alone and in no danger of being overheard, I might tell you that I was worried too. Maybe I would tell you that I’m sorry. Sorry for all of the horrible things I’ve said to you and done. Maybe I would tell you that after I threw your notebook out the window, I went and picked it up again, and now I have every single water-ruined page plastered on my wall. Maybe I would tell you… that I’ve loved you since second grade.

[DJQuackQuack]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! How cute :3

I liked the fact it didnt specify age or gender or any such thing, just allowed to reader to focus on the raw emotions.

When I read it, I pictured a girl picking on a guy, and it was over a period of time. As in she picked on him for years and they knew each other for awhile.

Close at all to what you intended? XD

[Bellaisima358]

Awwwwww that was so sweet :)

I love your point of view, and how you don't focus on age and time, and the piece is so...alive. I love it.