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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:31 AM   #1
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Interactive PART!
YouTube - Chain - Underwater Mix
Put this on before you read!


Running, Can't we fly in the sky? [Pun not taken]. Going here and there. It's a simple thing, but we need something that lets you go to the stars, at night.....

Pant* *Pant* "Seriously, can't school start at 1:59 and ends at 2:00?" Suddenly I felt a gasping wind going through my hair. "Woah....." I saw a Bluring light zig zagging through the road. "Felt like God's Speed". "Hey KID YOUR GONNA BE LATE FOR SCHOOL!" said the bluring light.
"I think i know that!" My name is Isle (Pronounced I'll) Misturugi. Im the age of 15 and I go to Fujiagoma High.

531, 532, 534!" said Isle. *Books slammed on the floor* "ISLE YOUR LATE AGAIN!"
"I'm sorry Mr. Wallace wont happen again, I PROMISE!" *Bell Rings* "Seriously Isle your gonna get
expelled for just being late everyday" said Kazu. Kazu is an old Friend of mine since 10 years before. He's mature and cool. "Hey Isle, did you hear of those new things called Airs?" said Kazu.
"You mean those hover boards? Yeah, i saw one before i went to school." said Isle. Well how about those gangs?" said Kazu. "Gangs?"


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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:33 AM   #2
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Eeeeeeee!! lol cant wait for more
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:36 AM   #3
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squeeeee!!
i like iit c:
btw you should put the song BEFORE the chapter, so people will see it before they start reading.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:39 AM   #4
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squeeeee!!
i like iit c:
btw you should put the song BEFORE the chapter, so people will see it before they start reading.
yeah i forgot it but i'll edit it that way.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:40 AM   #5
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this reminds me of air gear but of a different air (LOL NO I DO NOT MEAN THE AIR-BOARDS)
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:41 AM   #6
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awww i didnt listen to the song, dang it!
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:42 AM   #7
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this reminds me of air gear but of a different air (LOL NO I DO NOT MEAN THE AIR-BOARDS)
dont worry its WAY different, trust me ^^ oh and i put kazu on there cause i ran out of names...:3


Edit: its alright
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:45 AM   #8
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hmmm should it be a fanfic then??
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Old October 14th, 2009, 01:50 AM   #9
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hmmm should it be a fanfic then??
not really since, its using different places and times and other stuff, and its in the future =D.

Edit: forgot to mention other people.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 02:11 AM   #10
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At first I thought I was reading a book I have read before then I noticed how different they are.
Continue monsieur.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 02:54 AM   #11
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its really good skye!! keep writing it lol!! :3
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Old October 14th, 2009, 02:57 AM   #12
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*covers mouth with my right hand flabbergasted at how bad this is*

Your style of writing lacks grammar, maturity, and substance.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 03:02 AM   #13
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I'd reccommend that you quit centering your text and don't use any more asterisk actions. Have you looked at a novel recently? I mean, Twilight sucks, but at least it's easy to pick up and read and it doesn't read like a conversation between two people on an internet forum. I don't think you're doing this on purpose, but if you are, please don't try to be a beautiful and unique snowflake in this regard.

As for the actual substance/story/etcetc...there's not much of it.
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Old October 14th, 2009, 03:03 AM   #14
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Honestly, have you ever taken an English class in your life?
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Old October 14th, 2009, 03:03 AM   #15
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*covers mouth with my right hand flabbergasted at how bad this is*

Your style of writing lacks grammar, maturity, and substance.
Everyone's gonna get better, when they do more of it right?

@Sombre, I am reading a book, but I'm not actually a good writer.

@Ulti. Yes

And for some reason my computer doesn't have word. So I'm using word-pad
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