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[Riel]

The day that he met her, the leaves had just turned from green to gold. The grass was crisp, the sky was a deep blue, and the clouds were rolling and puffy. It had been a nice day, staying at a relatively warm temperature, excepting the wind chill. He was sitting there, in his car, waiting for the traffic to die down when she walked over and opened the passenger's side door.

"What the hell are you doing?" he asked her. She had black hair, green eyes, and a lip ring. He guessed her height at around five-three, five-four, and she was on the skinnier side of healthy.

"I'm sitting in your car with you, and then I'm going wherever you are going," she told him. There was no note of defiance in her voice, no mocking words, nothing; she was simply stating a fact. When she turned to look him dead in the eye, she didn't seem to find anything wrong with this statement.

The weird thing was that he didn't even really mind. Sure, he was scared that some random girl had just opened his door and sat down, but he wasn't particularly upset about it; just kind of bemused. He turned took the car out of park and edged forward, slightly crowding the car in front of him.

"Well, if that's the plan..." he said, before she cut him off.

"I'm not going to tell you my name."

Now he was a little upset. What right did she have to barge into his car and not even have the decency to tell him her name?

"Then you can just get the fuck-"

"Relax. I'll tell you my name at some point, sure, but I'm not going to tell you right now," she said. "Because right now, the only important thing is that you drive where you need to drive, and then we drive where I need you to drive me."

"Where do you need to go?"

"I said and then. It's not really important until we go where you need to go. Now go!"

The light ahead of them turned green, traffic began to move again, and he pushed his foot down on the gas.

[Audo]

Hm. Intriguing. Will there be more?

[Riel]

I honestly don't know. I think I'll probably end up re-writing it in the first person, just because I like that medium more. Not so angst ridden as my usual stuff, but I still prefer it, I guess.

[cloudwolf124]

This is very good...The end seems to be one of those "Leave the reader guessing" kind of endings.

[Audo]

Originally Posted by cloudwolf124

This is very good...The end seems to be one of those "Leave the reader guessing" kind of endings.

Also known as a cliffhanger?
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