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| Nobody Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: ...>.> Psh... Stalker. Posts: 9
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | The Paradox Web is my latest story idea that--believe it or not--came to me in a dream. I haven't completed the first chapter yet, but I do have a snippet of the story that I typed up right away. This is more of a sampling than anything else, but does have a lot to do with the plot, which takes place over one thousand years in the future--after the typically over-used nuclear explosion. It's a lot better than it sounds (I hope). Here's the snippet on Storywrite.com. The Paradox Web (Snippet) by Lovlie at Story write |
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| how annoying. | My only real question is why you used "cat piss" to describe something. It kind of ruins the mood of things, don't you think? |
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| Nobody Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: ...>.> Psh... Stalker. Posts: 9
Rep Power: 1 ![]() Level: EXP: | Because I felt like it and had woken up three hours earlier than I normally do. Needless to say, I was a little groggy and--having two cats--cat piss seemed like an accurate term at the time. |
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