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Old July 28th, 2009, 01:31 AM   #1
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"Darkness enters the light. Light enters the darkness. Is it balance or just totally chaos."
INTRO:
A person wearing a white hooded robe stand on top of a clocktower looking at a town down below. A person in a black hooded robe walk up to the white hooded figure. "It has been a long time hasn't" said the black hooded one. "10 years isn't that long" said the white hooded one. The black hooded one started laughing. "My friend we haven't much time. We must find the boy. The boy who will able to destroy the chaos" said The white hooded one.
The black hooded one sat down on the edge of the clocktower. "You sure he is in this town. And even if he is here how do we know he we go peacefully with us." asked the black hooded one. "Trust me he will come with us. And if he doesn't then you'll have to force him Zek" said the white hooded one. "Alright now your talking" said Zek. The white hooded one scan the dark sky. There was a black bird flying in the sky. "Great its one of them. Disguising as a bird now thats just weak" said the white hooded one. Zek pointed his hand to the bird and shot a dark energy bolt at it. The bird was hit and burned into nothingness. "I still got it I see" said Zek. "Thats strange I wonder why it didn't turn to its orginal form" said the white hooded one. "It doesn't matter we better start searching the town tomorrow. If we do it now they will keep attacking us and anyone who is around us" said Zek getting up. The white hooded one shook its head.
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Old July 28th, 2009, 01:50 AM   #2
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ooooooooh that is awesome.....very mysterious, cant wait for more! :)
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Old July 28th, 2009, 02:02 AM   #3
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thank you i'm going to write chapter one soon
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Old July 28th, 2009, 02:20 AM   #4
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dont get distracted lol
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Old July 28th, 2009, 03:30 AM   #5
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Chapter 1: The Calling
The sun was rising in the town of Loruka. It was good seeing sun come up. The night really didn't suit Loruka for some reason. In a house there was one window was open. The window that was open let the sunlight come into the room. The sunlight landed on a face of a boy who look like he was 15. The boy name was Kazu. He had black spikey hair and dark skin. He open his eyes which were green and yawn real loud and he almost thought he woke up the entire house. He look around his room which was really messy. Almost his entire floor was cover in clothes. He had a desk that had almost cover in papers. His closet which was on the far right of his room was open. "Sheesh I didn't think it was this messy" said Kazu getting off from his bed. He dress himself quickly. He was now wearing a red jacket with the right sleeve rip off, a white shirt inside, black pants, red and black checker shoes, and a glove with his fingers cut off on his right hand. He left his room and went downstairs to the living room. It seem his parents and his brother wasn't up yet. "Looks like I'm the only awake I guess I'll have to make my own breakfast". He headed to the kicthen to see if he can find anything to whoop up. He found some bacon and some eggs in the refraigtor and some bread that still look good. "Looks I'm making egg and bacon sandwich yum." Kazu cook the eggs and bacon until they were good and ready to eat. Once they were good he place them on one piece of bread. He then place the other bread onto of it to complete the sandwich. He chomp alway until there was nothing left. Once he was done he left the house to go outside. Kazu just wander through the town. It look like most of the town wasn't even up either. Kazu started hearing a weird sound that sounded like a howl. For some reason it sound like it was calling him. Kazu follow the sound of the howl until he found himself at front of the town clocktower. He always wonder how long it was there. Suddenly a dog came from behind the clocktower it look hurt. Kazu ran to it to see if he could help. "Don't worry buddy I'll help you. Where does it hurt" said Kazu about touch the dog's head. Until suddenly shadows consume the dog. Kazu step back for a moment wondering what just happen. When the shadows disappear a darkdog that had three eyes and three tails took the place of the injury dog. "Woah you don't see that everyday" said Kazu stepping back a bit. The strange three eye dog started growling at him and getting closer towards him. "Nice doggy don't bite me please" said Kazu still stepping back. The dog charge towards him until suddenly a giant ray of light shine on them. When Kazu look up the dog was gone. He look around him to see where it went. Something tap on Kazu shoulder. He turn quickly to find a person in a white hooded robe in front of him. "Woah are you suppose to be the person that save me -- But Kazu was cut off because he was punch in the chest. He fell to the ground and was knockout. The white hooded one look down at him. "I'm sorry but I had no choice."

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Old July 28th, 2009, 03:35 AM   #6
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very interesting
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Old July 28th, 2009, 03:49 AM   #7
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when is bell coming back on i want her to read it to
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Old July 28th, 2009, 03:55 AM   #8
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idk i think its been way more than 45 min though
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Old July 28th, 2009, 03:59 AM   #9
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I hope she gets on soon on the mean i'm probably going to post chapter 2 next how your story going when are going post the next chapter
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:02 AM   #10
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i should be writing it but im not lol but i will right now
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:03 AM   #11
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Sheesh I'm right here.....I said im leaving in 45 mins not for 45 mins.....

Awesome intro and chapter, WTT :)
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:04 AM   #12
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thank you i was inspired by both you and traskix
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:06 AM   #13
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Sheesh I'm right here.....I said im leaving in 45 mins not for 45 mins.....

Awesome intro and chapter, WTT :)

oooh lol my bad
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:10 AM   #14
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Its ok...I got a lil delayed...but I'm here now :) Gonna finish up my chapter.

And really? well...shucks....Idk what to say....
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Old July 28th, 2009, 04:20 AM   #15
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thank you i was inspired by both you and traskix
awwww ur welcome :)
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