Brittle Bullet [Completed]

[tdc456]

This story has been planned out by me for at least a month or two now.
I have quite a bit of the story already worked out.
Please look for the intro chapter in the next two days.
This fanfic has nothing to with Kingdom Hearts.
This story was inspired by the title itself. It was the title of an episode of an anime called FLCL.
Just those two words sparked a flurry of ideas in my head and it has become something great.
Please reply and tell me what you think when you read the title.

Quick Jump Links:
Prologue-Chapter 1
Chapters 2-7
Chapters 8-12
Chapters 13-15
Chapters 16-19
Chapter 20
Chapters 21-23
Chapters 24-27
Chapters 28-Epilogue

EDIT: This story is now complete. 29 chapters total plus an Epilogue. Please let me know what you think.

The sequel to Brittle Bullet is now up. Please click >HERE< to go read Savage Stars.

[Azrael]

Finally something that isn't Kingdom Hearts.

[tdc456]

Haha. Seriously!!
My other fanfic is Kingdom Hearts, but I'm taking a break to get a start on this one.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by tdc456

Haha. Seriously!!
My other fanfic is but I'm taking a break to get a start on this one.

That's good, I hope to read it once you post some of it.

I'm thinking of a Star Wars fanfic too.

[tdc456]

I've seen a few pop up in the past few weeks.
I didn't like many of them.
And thanks for the rep.

Please spread the word to people who like to read fanfics.
Check out my other one too if you want.
The link is in my sig.
I like to be very violent sometimes in stories. Thats part of the reason I made this. Some anime and games just aren't as violent as they should be.
I also like to have a reality to it so the characters are probably gonna swear a lot.
It brings out the humor in certain situations.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by tdc456

I've seen a few pop up in the past few weeks.
I didn't like many of them.
And thanks for the rep.

Please spread the word to people who like to read fanfics.
Check out my other one too if you want.
The link is in my sig.
I like to be very violent sometimes in stories. Thats part of the reason I made this. Some anime and games just aren't as violent as they should be.
I also like to have a reality to it so the characters are probably gonna swear a lot.
It brings out the humor in certain situations.

You probably mean the War of the Universes right? Me, Madammina and Xziled worked hard doing that=P

At least read it, don't have to though.

Not sure what will mines be about, but I have a basic idea of some mysterious alien virus is infecting a space station and the Republic orders a Jedi along with a force of clonetroopers to investigate the situation.

[tdc456]

Well I read one that was alright.

[tdc456]

Originally Posted by Ziz

You probably mean the War of the Universes right? Me, Madammina and Xziled worked hard doing that=P

I actually never read it. Didn't know what it was about. I'll check it out.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by tdc456

I actually never read it. Didn't know what it was about. I'll check it out.

A crossover between Kingdom Hearts and Star Wars.

We already finished Part II with the Galactic Empire ruling the KH universe

[tdc456]

Damn.
Guess I'll need to catch up then.
Good thing I read fast.

[Azrael]

Originally Posted by tdc456

Damn.
Guess I'll need to catch up then.
Good thing I read fast.

Hope you like it

[tdc456]

Brittle Bullet
Prologue: What Would You Do?

What would do if you were in his position?
What would any of us do?
Would you run from the fight or stay and protect your cause?

If strange people with frightening and unique weapons and skills began to appear. If they flocked to you in the dozens and tried to either kill or capture you. If the referred to their leaders simply as "The Generals". If people began to stand by your side and fight with you. If you began to discover that you could do much more with a gun than aim and shoot. If you discoverd a government that kept the worst secrets possible. If the only way to stop it was to fight and win.
What would you do?...

I'll tell you what he did.
This is his story.

[tdc456]

Brittle Bullet
Chapter 1: The Yo-Yo

The sun sat high in the sky. Despite this, it was a fairly cool day. It seemed as if time had been passing very slowly all day long. Everyone was wondering how long it really would be until school let out. Things had progressed as normally as any other day. It was just that a strange feeling hung in the air over the school. At least for him anyway.

"Wait up Chris!!" someone shouted from down the hall. A young boy of about 16 stopped and turned around. He had medium length brown hair and bright blue eyes. He stood at 5 feet 9 inches, a pretty average height for a kid his age. He stared back at his friend Zach running up the hall towards him. Zach was only about an inch shorter than Chris with bright, long blond hair stopping just above his shoulders. He had green eyes that glinted in the afternoon sun.

"Why were you walking so fast man?" asked Zach. Chris thought about it for moment and realized that he didn't have an answer.
"I don't know," Chris replied. "I've just been feeling funny all day long. I feel like if I walk faster, the day will end quicker."
"Whatever dude," countered Zach. "Did you do the English homework? Because I didn't even bother to open the book. I'm way too lazy for my own good."
"Yeah here," paused Chris reaching into his backpack. He pulled out a piece of notebook paper with a lot of writing on it. Zach took and looked at it in amazement.
"Thanks!" exclaimed Zach. "You're a lifesaver man. See you tomorrow okay?" Zach took off to his last class of the day. They wouldn't see each other till the next day because they lived on opposite sides of town. Chris continued his awkwardly fast pace all the way through the door of his next class.

*****

Damn it, thought Chris. Only three more minutes until the day is over. He stared at the clock while concentrating hard as if it would start moving faster. Suddenly there was a small click a few rows over.

"Damn," said a voice from the other side of the class. A strange looking boy with silver hair sat in the seat the sound came from. His hair was longer on one side and covered his right eye. Chris realized that he hadn't seen this guy around school at all all year. He was playing with a yo-yo. He got mad everytime it hit the floor and made that clicking noise.

He finally managed to make rest in the air with a constant spin. The teacher stood up and walked in front of her desk next to the white board. She had a very mad expression on her face.

"Put that thing away young man," she snapped. The silver haired boy flinched at her words and snapped up the yo-yo back into his hand. He got a funny smirk on his face. He slowly raised his head and stared directly into the teacher's eyes.

"Okay," he said. He snapped his hand forward with blinding speed straight at the teacher. The yo-yo went spinning forward at her violently. When it looked as if it was at the end of its string just feet from the teacher, it kept going as if more string was appearing from nowhere. The yo-yo collided with the center of the teachers forehead. The boy snapped back the yo-yo. Her eyes rolled back and she fell to the floor. He had knocked the teacher out with a yo-yo!

What the hell is up with this kid, thought Chris. Suddenly the boy sprang to his feet and began hopping over desks all the way to the window. He ran through and smashe through the window.

"Doesn't he know that we are on the third floor?" asked someone behind him. Chris was freaking out for just as the boy hopped his desk, it looked as if he winked at him. Chris ran for the door and out of the school after him, leaving his classmates and unconcious teacher behind.

*****

Chris stopped and leaned against the door of the abandoned warehouse that the silver haired boy had ran into. He looked at his watch. He had been trailing him for almost two hours now. Soon his parents would call him to find out where he is.

This was it. Ifhe was gonna find out anything, he would have to go in now and confront him or risk never seeing him again. He turned and ran into the open door of the building.

Inside he saw the silver haired boy just standing by himself. But from nowhere the lights in the ware house began to come on. Once the place was lit up, he saw that there was another person there besides the two of them. The other person had strange rubber straps around his forearms. He was wearing a black long sleeve shirt and ripped blue jeans. His pitch black hair was a mess on top of his head.

The yo-yo kid turned and yelled in a frantic voice, "Why the hell did you follow me you idiot?!"

Chris wanted to turn and run but was entranced by the sight of the strapped boy. Suddenly the boy raised his arms and the rubber straps moved as if they had a will of their own. Two from each arm shot up towards the ceiling and raised the strange boy off the ground. He raised one leg to stick out straight towards Chris. His shoes had big portrusions on the back and holes in the bottom of the soles. A gunshot went off and a bullet flew out of the bottom of his shoe straight at Chris.

He prepared for the worst but the pain never came. Something had blocked the bullet. He looked down and saw the yo-yo from before smoking at his feet. It had no marks. It was almost as if it was bulletproof.

Chris looked at the yo-yo boy as he snapped the yo-yo back.
He simply said, "You're gonna hafta learn to be more careful."
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To be continued in
B.B. Chapter 2

[tdc456]

Let me know what you think of this first chapter.
If you have any advice just let me know.

[Azrael]

Just pure pwnage there.

I really have no advice, your writing is pretty good!