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Old January 21st, 2009, 02:37 PM   #76
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Hey Kaz, hopefully you remember me. I made the KH3 Story not too long ago, I have made a revision of it, and I was wondering once I finish it up, if I can send it to you ?
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Old January 22nd, 2009, 12:48 AM   #77
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^ I'm a little busy at the moment, but sure, send it over, lol.
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Old January 24th, 2009, 04:30 AM   #78
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I NEED SOME BETA READER HELP.

BADLY.
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Old January 24th, 2009, 04:37 AM   #79
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Sup brodude?

You need something?
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Old January 24th, 2009, 06:29 PM   #80
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I NEED SOME BETA READER HELP.

BADLY.
Elaborate.
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Old February 7th, 2009, 12:29 AM   #81
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Hmm, need some critique on a short piece.

http://charxaiarchives.webs.com/charxaimaleficent.htm

Anyone who wants to can take it. Thanks in advance :D
Sorry about the wait guys.

I posted this awhile back, sorry about my rather desperate post.
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Old March 13th, 2009, 05:43 AM   #82
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K, I have a short story I'm working on [also using it for something at school] and while it's still a WIP, I'd like some criticism please. :]
It's about 8 pages so far.

Anyone want to take it?
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Old March 13th, 2009, 04:57 PM   #83
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your avatar is awakening the lolita complex within me :x

oh but yeah i'll give it a look over
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Old March 13th, 2009, 11:57 PM   #84
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If you need a second opinion, I'll look at it.
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Old March 14th, 2009, 02:27 AM   #85
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If you need a second opinion, I'll look at it.
Thank you!

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your avatar is awakening the lolita complex within me :x

oh but yeah i'll give it a look over
LOL.
Thanks.

I'll send it to you both now then.
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Old April 10th, 2009, 05:20 AM   #86
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I don't know if you can help me or not.
I have a few stories on here that I would like some tips on.
As of right now I don't have any chapters that need proff reading, I was wondering if you check out my previous chapters and give me pointers for future ones.
The story I'm most concerned with is Brittle Bullet, I have a link to it in my sig.
Please, if anyone can help me out.
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Old April 10th, 2009, 05:47 AM   #87
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If someone could beta read the first chapter of my book, itd be appreciated. It's in my sig (Torn)

thanks :)
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Old April 10th, 2009, 10:59 AM   #88
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We BETA-read, Atticus. Please request our help for a story before you post it.
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Old April 10th, 2009, 05:43 PM   #89
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ah. ok, ill be sure to ask before i post the next chapter...
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Old April 11th, 2009, 01:29 AM   #90
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I can help you, tdc. Just PM me the chapters you want looked over.

I'll also read Brittle Bullet later, but like Cicero said ask for help before posting.
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