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Old December 14th, 2008, 10:06 AM   #61
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i'm in as well Kaz
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Old December 14th, 2008, 12:55 PM   #62
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And me, kazuki, if you need more help. =)
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Old December 14th, 2008, 07:46 PM   #63
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I'll send it to whoever is interested ^.^

Thanks for the support! I'll send it later today (can't right now since I'm on my PS3. lol).
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Old December 15th, 2008, 02:49 PM   #64
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I read yours, kazuki, check your inbox! ^^

And I haven't forgotten you, Destined. Expect PM soon. =) Nice italian, btw.
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Old December 23rd, 2008, 03:24 AM   #65
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Hey Cicero, is it okay if I PM you a song I wrote?

EDIT: Actually, nevermind. I'm good.
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Old December 27th, 2008, 04:36 AM   #66
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Well, this seems semi-inactive. Um... I'm having difficulty figuring out what past BR's meant in their critiques for an old story. It never took off anywhere, so I'm thinking of bringing it up after all this time. Found a lot of places for improvement with fresh eyes on editing it.

http://forums.khinsider.com/creative...ml#post2979042

Audo and SA's stories are dominating the CW section, by the way. Anyone notice that? Anyone? ;3
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Old December 27th, 2008, 04:44 AM   #67
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Hmm, need some critique on a short piece.

http://charxaiarchives.webs.com/charxaimaleficent.htm

Anyone who wants to can take it. Thanks in advance :D
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Old December 29th, 2008, 01:51 AM   #68
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If none of you are getting on, I can be a temp BR. ;3
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Old January 10th, 2009, 12:37 AM   #69
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Umm... anyone?
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Old January 10th, 2009, 11:57 AM   #70
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Wow, still no one helped you?

Then I think I'll take a look...
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Old January 18th, 2009, 07:36 AM   #71
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I had to change a piece in Night 1 of HCTB and I'm worried about the flow after it. Can someone take a look?(it's not up so I'll PM it)
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Old January 19th, 2009, 02:16 AM   #72
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I had to change a piece in Night 1 of HCTB and I'm worried about the flow after it. Can someone take a look?(it's not up so I'll PM it)
I'll give it a look (I need to get back in the swing of things anyway).
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Old January 19th, 2009, 09:50 AM   #73
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Ironically, I discover the purpose of this thread five minutes after I post my story. >.<
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Old January 20th, 2009, 11:59 PM   #74
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I'll be posting a beta soon for someone to read, 'kay?
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Old January 21st, 2009, 12:30 PM   #75
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I'll be willing to help you out, Sorrow, for old times sake. =D
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