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Old November 17th, 2008, 03:18 AM   #31
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well children, it would seem that i suck at writing.

so, if a BR is interested, PM por favor. I would like some critiquing (sp?) :D

edit: Thank you guys so much for the overwhelming response! I think I had around 5 or 6 beta readers PM me asking for details. You guys are truly awesome.
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Old November 20th, 2008, 12:24 AM   #32
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edit: Thank you guys so much for the overwhelming response! I think I had around 5 or 6 beta readers PM me asking for details. You guys are truly awesome.
...Damn. I just read this.
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Old November 20th, 2008, 12:58 AM   #33
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...Damn. I just read this.
And this is why we plan to kill you off :v
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Old November 20th, 2008, 01:00 AM   #34
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And this is why we plan to kill you off :v
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Old November 20th, 2008, 10:35 AM   #35
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Old November 20th, 2008, 03:03 PM   #36
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You guys are hilarious XD
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Old November 21st, 2008, 12:46 AM   #37
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You guys are hilarious XD
I thank upside-down pineapple cake.

I swear that stuff gets you hyped.
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Old November 21st, 2008, 01:54 AM   #38
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I thank upside-down pineapple cake.

I swear that stuff gets you hyped.
I think it's weird that I have never had that stuff in my life.
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Old November 21st, 2008, 06:03 AM   #39
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I thank upside-down pineapple cake.

I swear that stuff gets you hyped.
LOL - That reminds me of this time back in 8th grade (I think it was...?)

So, my 2nd period teacher had a birthday, and he had this cake. And so he let my class have some.

Turns out it was rum cake.

Freakin' good times.
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Old November 21st, 2008, 08:50 AM   #40
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You guys are hilarious XD
And you my friend, are (still) spamming.
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Old November 21st, 2008, 09:40 PM   #41
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So sorry Mister Cicero, sir. Anyone else need help with their stories, hmm?
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Old December 1st, 2008, 10:56 PM   #42
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Hey guys I think I'm losin' mah touch.

I is scared.
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Old December 1st, 2008, 11:18 PM   #43
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What's the problem then?
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Old December 2nd, 2008, 12:51 AM   #44
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Not sure, but my writing doesn't really seem as fresh and well-done as it used to be. I've narrowed it down to a couple problems:

a) I have nothing to read
b) writer's block
c) preoccupation with other things.
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Old December 2nd, 2008, 01:25 AM   #45
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A) You worry about that? I barely read anything (seriously, I've read maybe . . . 3 books in the past few years (outside of school related reading).

B) Meh, just write when you feel like it (really, writer's block is just saying, "Nope, don't feel like it today.")

C) Aren't we all.
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