Kingdom Hearts: Hellfire

key490 · 09/19/07, 10:17 PM

When Sora defeated Xemnas, the Castle that Never Was exploded. The blast set off a program called Hellfire. If it is not stopped all planets will be obliterated in a mass explosion. A group of people will unleash their abilities, and find that not all is as it appears. What they don't know is that a new leader has surfaced to take control of both heartless and nobodies and will stop at nothing to decimate the worlds

Rules
1. No god-modding
2. Romance is allowed but keep it, and everything else PG-13

Template

Name:
Age: (14-20)

Weapon: ( if it is a keyblade tell me the name)
Skills: ( at least three)
Form: ( one only)
Hometown:
Appearence:

Name: Andrew
Age: 16
Weapon: Keyblade ( Twilight's Wrath)
Skills: Ars Arcanum
Strike Raid
Ragnarok
Break Raid
Form: Final Form
Hometown: Twilight Town
Appearence: He has black hair and brown eyes. He wears mostly white and black and has a scar over his right eye

Jopari · 09/19/07, 10:42 PM

Just a suggestion, but you may want to add a bit more of an intro. It's bland and lifeless as it is now and won't get far. Maybe add some details or a bit more of a plot to get this going.

09/19/07, 10:17 PM	#1
key490 Organization Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Nowhere in particular Posts: 363 Rep Power: 0	Kingdom Hearts: Hellfire When Sora defeated Xemnas, the Castle that Never Was exploded. The blast set off a program called Hellfire. If it is not stopped all planets will be obliterated in a mass explosion. A group of people will unleash their abilities, and find that not all is as it appears. What they don't know is that a new leader has surfaced to take control of both heartless and nobodies and will stop at nothing to decimate the worlds Rules 1. No god-modding 2. Romance is allowed but keep it, and everything else PG-13 Template Name: Age: (14-20) Weapon: ( if it is a keyblade tell me the name) Skills: ( at least three) Form: ( one only) Hometown: Appearence: Name: Andrew Age: 16 Weapon: Keyblade ( Twilight's Wrath) Skills: Ars Arcanum Strike Raid Ragnarok Break Raid Form: Final Form Hometown: Twilight Town Appearence: He has black hair and brown eyes. He wears mostly white and black and has a scar over his right eye Last edited by key490; 09/20/07 at 03:10 AM.

09/19/07, 10:42 PM	#2
Jopari Ruler of Light Join Date: May 2007 Location: Defying Authority blatantly and being awesome while I do Age: 17 Posts: 696 Rep Power: 2	Re: Kingdom Hearts: Hellfire Just a suggestion, but you may want to add a bit more of an intro. It's bland and lifeless as it is now and won't get far. Maybe add some details or a bit more of a plot to get this going.

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