Naruto - Metal Srike

[Relliks Ban]

Metal Strike

Start Date: 9/21/07

Plot: The attack on Konoha. Three years ago, a village made itself known. The village hidden in the sound attacked Konoha exactly three years ago, leaving Konoha in a vulnerable state. The attack caused major damage, and severly hurt the people of the village. The attack happened during the Chunin Exam, an exam in which a ninja of Genin level takes to get to the next level. The attack turned out to be from the mind of Orochimaru, a former Konoha ninja. It has been three years since that fatal day, and Konoha has grown to be an even more stronger village than it used to be. It has taken up a new Hokage, Tsunade, who assumed her possition after the death of the Third. Sarutobi was an honerable ninja, but died in a climactic battle with Orochimaru.

Lately, a new village has risen, making itself known. As of right now, the village has not made its intentions clear, but what is known, is that the village specializes in Metal Jutsu. Konoha wants to take no chances, causing a repeat of three years ago. Konoha has sent three Shinobi to this metal village, to form a peace offering. Three weeks passed, and no word from the Shinobi. Konoha dismissed this, and thought nothing of it.

They began to regret their thoughts when an attack on Konoha was made. The attack was small, but killed six people; two children, and four adults. Witnesses to the attack noted a blinding light. When the flash was gone, the people who were murdered had metal stabbed through various places in their body. Fearing that this would happen again, and worse than before, Konoha sought out the help of the other Shinobi nations, hoping to strengthen their alliance, so that they would be able to destroy this Metal Village before it had the chance to destroy them.

Which side will you be on? Will you destroy this village with your various jutsu, or will you destroy your enemies with your pearcing metal?

Rules:
No GM
No PP (Unless given permission by the person)
No killing off another Rper's character (Unless given permission)
No Double posts!!@$)(!)~~~~
No Machine Gun posts. So don't post like crazy....crazy would be 1+ people posting a freakin' book. I barely have time to read the books my school gives me...
Two paragraphs per post (No exception....and two paragraphs isn't two sentences split up.)
Only two OOC are allowed per person, per page. You can have multiple OOC, as long as it has IC with it.
NO Rasengan. I'm sorry, but it's getting old. In every Naruto Rp I have ever been in, everyone uses the Rasengan. You can have modified versions of it though, like your changed it somehow.
No Spamming, or One liners....
You have to be active......I understand if you have school though.
No Ripping off anyone....like switching the letters of a character's name and using it as your own...come on...be original. This includes jutsu as well.
To join, finish this sentence "In order to win, I will risk______"

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Temp:

Name:
Age:
Personality:
Appearance:
Village:
Chakra Element: Limit of 2 for Chunin and lower. 3 for Jonin and higher.
Clan: (Optional)
Ninja Rank:
Weapon(s): Limit of 9
Jutsu: Limit to 20
Each Jutsu must have some sort of description, at least a sentence.
Forbidden Jutsu: Limit of 8
Kekkai Genkai: Optional, but PM me first for approval.
Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: Limit depends on your Kekkai Genaki.
Bio: 4 paragraph minimum, no exceptions (possible structure below)
-Early Childhood
-Academy Student/Genin Background
-2 and a half years arc:
-Current:
Extra: Stuff like Theme Song, Battle Theme, Birthday, Parents, etc...


Mine:
"In order to win, I will risk everything....except for teddy...no one gets teddy...O.O)
Name: Hotaru Raiken (Changed after death of his biological father.)

Age: 16

Personality: Hotaru has an outgoing and carefree personality. He doesn't take anything but his training seriously. He loves to train and fight. In the past few years he has matured, but not enough to stop him from pulling variouse pranks on different people. He is very competitive when it comes to something that he can win at. Be it a fight, or a game, he loves to win, and gets a mild temper when he looses. He's very capable of going completely nuts in a fight but even as he gets more intense, he still wants reassurance from the people around him. When Hotaru realy gets into a battle, and gets realy serious, he will tie his head protector on his forhead, instead of on his arm.

Appearance: Hotaru stands a solid 6'0, growing a bit in three years. His hair is still a deep dark black, and rests just above his shoulders. His skin is a light peach, with one scar on his hand. His eyes are died a deep dark purple, almost black. He is wearing a tan long sleeved shirt, rolled at the sleeves, fish net can be seen past the sleeves and by his neck. He has black pants that end above his ankles, where he has wrappings. His sandals are black as well. He has tan belt wrapped around his waist, one end of it falling down his side to about his knees. His head band rests on his left upper arm.
Village: Kumo
Chakra Element: Lightning/Water
Ninja Rank: Chunin

Weapon(s):
Kunai Knives: The basic ninja tool for all shinobi, mostly introduced to young Genin. A sharp daggerlike weapon to carve up enemies and opponents.

Demon Wind Shuriken: A shuriken shaped into the form of a windmill, excellent for cutting through the air and through enemies. Its rotation is what makes it such an impressive ninja tool.

Shuriken: One of the starter ninja tools used in various combinations. Shuriken are the equivalent of darts to be thrown can more or less immobilize an opponent temporarily. .

Jutsu:
Taijutsu:
1.Barrage of Lightning (Raikyuu Rendan) -
Hotaru used the electrical field around his body and Kage Buyou to appear behind his airborn opponent Hotaru sends an electrical charge into his opponents back with his index and middle finger pointed at thier back to temporarly paralyzing them as he moves around and starts with a electrified backhand strike to the face, a powerful chakra-electricity infused punch to the stomach, and finishes with a spin-around kick lands the left heel on the center of the opponent that also sends a bolt of lightning through the opponents body just as they both hit the ground.
Users: Hotaru Barkwater (Creator)

2.Shihou Hapou Shuriken no Maki
A Taijutsu technique where the ninja creates a quantity of Kage Bunshin (shadow clones). They collectively leap into the air and simultaneously hurl a multitude of shuriken and kunai at their opponent, raining steel upon them.

-Ninjutsu:
3.Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Being a forbidden and advanced NinJutsu, few people know this technique perfectly. It is listed in the Scroll of Seals, but still some advanced ninjas (such as Kakashi) know this technique. It is similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu; the main function is to create clones. ~??~

4.Raiton: Shuurai (Lightining Strike)
The sky grows dark, allowing Hotaru 10 minutes to control the lightning. He is able to make the lightning strike when and where he wants. ~Lightning~ B-rank

5. Lightning Disc Technique (Raikyuu Endan no Jutsu) -
With the concentration of Chakra and his electrical field to his feet Hotaru creates a continuous spinning disc under his feet with lightning moving from it and blowing away almost all on coming attacks, on this Hotaru has the ability to fly.
~Lightning~ C-rank

6.Raiton: Lightning Clone Jutsu
Similar to the Shadow Clone Jutsu, this jutsu has a base of which to clone. The clones start out as lightning, and soon gain the charactersitics of Hotaru. The clones gain twice as much power when the Raiton: Shuurai (Lightining Strike) jutsu is in affect. When destroyed, unlike the Shadow Clone Jutsu, the clones send an electrical charge through the person who destroyed them, which may cause a few seconds of parslisation. ~Lightning~ C-rank

7.Raiton: Lightning Shield
Creates a wall of lightning that can withstand an A-rank jutsu. If hit enough times, the shield will explode, and send an elextrical charge into anyone that comes in contact with the bolts of lightning that shoot out. Metallic objects, such as shuriken, kunai.. etc. won't penetrate the shield, but instead will be flung to the ground.
~Lightning~ B-rank

8. Summoning Technique; Eagle Summon:
The summoning jutsu that requires the user to sign a blood contract that binds you to the summoning creature. Hotaru was givin him the contract by his father. He is now capable of summoning Eagles.

*Ninja Art: Eagle Claw
Hotaru summons an immense clawed hand similar to that of an Eagle, and attacks his enemy with it. Hotaru uses his hand to control the clawed hand and does not lose consciousness.

*Ninja Art: Eagle Wing Attack
Hotaru summons the wings of an Eagle behind him. The wings blow a force of wind at the opponant. The wind's highest speed has reached 80 miles per hour.

9.Raiton- Jishakute no Jutsu (Thunder Element: Magnet Hand Technique)- A basic ninjutsu in which the user forces chakra into the hand, creating a strong magnetic current. Small steel objects are drawn towards the hand, and allow the user to grab things located on a distance, and can also help the user catch kunai or shuriken aimed for him/her out of the air.


10. Dematerialization (Terepoto) -
This is a last resort escape move. Pulling in electro particles and using on own body breaks down past cellular level to atomic electrical, conciousness still intact a transportation process is done to carry over vast distances extremly fast. ~Lightning~ B-rank

11.Raiton - Raigeki no Yoroi (Lightning Strike Armor)
Raigeki no Yoroi is a ninjutsu using the lightning element. Hotaru summons a plume of lightning from the heavens, coating their body's into close range armor.
~Lightning~
B-rank

12.Suiton - Mizu no Muchi (Whip of Water)- Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. Hotaru can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing Hotaru to whip the crap out of little kids. ~Water....and possibly lightning~ D-rank

13.Chakra Hadou no Jutsu(Chakra Surge Jutsu)- Hotaru releases a small amount of electricity from his hands that flows out in the form of tiny sparks that are able to stun enemies for a brief period of time, but also cause light damage. ~Lightning~ C-rank

14.Dengeki no jutsu(Electric Shock Jutsu)- Hotaru leaps into the air and shoots out small sparks to stun an enemy then, releases moderate volts of electric chakra firm his mouth that fly down like mini lighting bolts to inflict damage upon an enemy. ~Lightning~ B-rank

15.Raiton: Hiryuu Chidori no Jutsu(Lightning Release: Flying plover Dragon technique)- After quickly making an incomplete chidori attack in his hand Hotaru runs forward and thrusts his hand up. This results in a lightning dragon attack that sweeps around the opponent and shocks them severely causing moderate damage. This jutsu has 100% accuracy when water is nearby, or it is raining outside.....or inside for that matter.~Lightning~ B-rank

16.Raiton: Myaku Baasuto no Jutsu(Lightning Release: Pulse Burst Jutsu)- This is both a taijutsu and ninjutsu skill that involves covering the base of the feet, or hands with electricity to cause a shock that disrupts the nerves in an opponent when they are hit. This can cause paralysis, and in some cases instant death……..~Lightning~ A-rank

17.Thunder Coil Jutsu: Hotaru generates a wave of electricity that starts as a straight line, but quickly latches onto an opponent and coils around them, causing massive damage by electrocuting them. This jutsu can also be used by wrapping it around an opponent, to prevent movement for they would get shocked by touching it. ~Lightning~ B-rank

18.Bukujutsu(sky dance skill, fly)-This is the technique that allows the user to fly, float or walk in the air while controlling his/her chakra. Daaku explains that anyone with sufficient power and the proper training can learn the ability. Hotaru simply controls his energy and pushes out from underneath him allowing him to fly. ~None~

19.Lightning Spout Jutsu- Hotaru forms two giant bubbles of water under the opponents feet that burst out of the ground and spray then from beneath with high pressure water blasts that knock the into the air. Hotaru’s last hand sign that activated the jutsu also makes sure that the orbs of lightning he threw also are a guaranteed hit. The water only attracts the electricity because of the impurities in the dirt. ~Lighning, Water~ C-rank

20.Nan Kaizou (Soften Modification)
A special technique where the user places chakra through their body in order to soften their body, giving it the ability to bend in irregular ways and even stretch rather strange distances. ~none~ C-rank

21.Raiton: Lightning Arrow- Hotaru opens his palms, and concentrates on his chakra, forming an arrow in his hand. Hotaru enters his lightnig element, and a lightning arrow shoots out of his palm. After used once, arrows will shoot out at will, needing no more concentration. The jutsu lasts for 24 hours, then in order to use the jutsu once more, Hotaru would need to concentrate again. ~Lightning~ C-rank



Forbidden Jutsu:

1.Raiton: Senhappa(Lightning Release: Energy Destroyer)- A supercharged version of the Senhappa jutsu. In this style it is charged for longer than normal and upon being fire, is done so one handed, so that the other hand fires a concentrated stream of electric chakra than can be as high as 36,000 volts. This extra energy makes it so that anybody hit with the attack is instantly paralyzed and also fried by the intense voltage…………just think about the nasty, blistered, bubbling skin………~Lightning~ S-rank

2.Water Drain Jutsu:- The jutsu uses up a lot of Hotaru's chakra. Hotaru concentrates on the water that is inside the opponents body. Since the human body consists of 70% water, it would be devastating if it were to be drained. After Hotaru has complete concentration on the opponent, he drains most, or all the water from the opponent. Since he has to have complete concentration on the opponent, he has to find someway to have his opponent completely still. ~Water~ S-rank

Bio: Hotaru was born into the Cloud Village. At his birth, his mother fell ill to an unknown desease, which at the time, had killed off a number of people. Hotaru was supposed to be one of three triplets, but to his knowledge, the other two died, due to his mother's sickness. Hotaru grew up with his father, and his father's three pupils. Although they were a few years older than him, they still treated him as one of them.

His father put him into the ninja academy, hoping he would be the best of Shinobi, better than him. Hotaru's father was sent out on a lot of missions, leaving Hotaru by himself for days upon end. This would go on for a while, his father would leave, Hotaru would be alone, then he would come back. Hotaru's father was disgraced by his village, because he failed to complete a mission in favor of saving one of his pupils. Because of the shame he felt, Hotaru's father, unknown by Hotaru, commited suicide. Hotaru was told his father was killed by Sound ninja, so he began to have dreams of the event taking place, and eventualy believed he was there when he was murdered, which he wasn't.

Hotaru continued his training, hoping to become a better ninja than his father, and not bare the same fate he had. Hotaru grew up hating the sound village, not knowing the true death of his father, which he would later find out. Hotaru be-friended an Uchiha boy, but after attempting to perfect his Lightning Phonix Summoning jutsu, he was killed. Hotaru swore he would never use the jutsu, but still keeps it in his arsenal of jutsu. After graduating from the ninja acadamy, he was assigned a Jounin squad leader, one that matched the strength of Kakashi and Guy. He also had two teammates, who he loved dearly.

On an A-rank mission, Hotaru was faced with the same situation his father was in. He had found out that the true death of his father was caused because of what he had done. Hotaru's teammate had come close to dieng, but Hotaru abandoned his mission to save him. Hotaru's sensei told him that what his father had done was an honorable thing to do. Hotaru failed to save him though, and they were all killed. In a last ditch effort to save them all, Hotaru's sensei told him to use his Summoning jutsu, which he did wrong once more, and his teammates fell to the same fate as his old friend. Hotaru left the site, everyone dead exept him. He returned to his village, not speaking a word of what had happened. He has had that event on his mind ever since.

After the chunin exams had begun, Hotaru was assigned to a new team. His new sensei, Daaku Raito became a close friend. It was the prelims of the Chunin exams. Hotaru's match was against his newly found friend, Anaru, who had dissapered after there match, and Ditonke. The match was a three-way, something that hadn't been seen in years. The match ended in Hotaru's loss, him becoming a human popsicle. Luckily Daaku saved him before he ran out of air. He walked out of the hospital room, only to find his new teammate, Kaito Yoshido, who, at first hated Hotaru, but eventually they became close friends.

The prelims ended, and they had a month to rest. Hotaru layed in the forest, and fell asleep. He woke in a dark room, someone had kidnapped him. They knocked him out, and when he woke, he was in the forest once more. He only assumed it to be his father. Anxiouse to tell Daaku the news, he set out to the Cloud Village, where everyone had left to. Alond the path, he met his father, who he assumed to be dead.

He was overjoyed to find that his father who had been dead for years, was standing infront of him. They spent hours talking about Hotaru's exciting life as a shinobi, and his new friends. His father had nothing to say about his life after he left, but he did have one thing to say. "There is no easy way to say this Hotaru. You were led to believe that I was your father, but I'm not. We found you abandoned, and took you in. I researched your whole family background, and found out your father is still alive." Then, the man whom he believed to be his father, and vanished. That was the last time he saw him.

Hotaru, a bit shookin up after what had happened, continued, no sleep, to the village. After arriving, he realized the girl he thought to be the Raikage's daughter, was Daaku's. He left to the ramen shop, attempting to have R&R, but it was cut short. The village noticed Daaku, and the Raikeage arrived. The whole thing was blown out of proportion. To make things worse, Mizuki, Rayex's relative, had shown. He left, and Hotaru finally was able to rest. Daaku showed them to his mansion....yes a mansion....where he rested, and trained.

His training resulted in him learning Daaku's jutsu, Senhappa, but the jutsu also blew a hole through his hand. Luckily, the jutsu contained enough chakra to heal his hand. Aiko, Kaito's old friend, joined them on their trip, and became a close friend. They left back to Konoha, and the rest of the end of the month grew nearer.

The finals began, and no one expected what to happen next. Orochimaru and the rest of the sound village attacked Konoha, leaving it in ruins, and Sarutobi, the third Hokage, dead. Daaku had set out to train with Rayex for the past 2 and a half years. Hotaru had the permission to set out to find his father, using the information his adoptive father left in his house. He found him, drunk in a bar not to far off from his village. He took him home. Apparently he didn't know Hotaru was still alive. His mother told him he was dead, not wanting a boy, so she left him in the middle of a field, where his adoptive parents found him. Hotaru trained for the past two and half years with his father. He tought him new jutsu, and mastered his lightning element. His father also helped him master his pheonix summoning jutsu that ruined his childhood.

Hotaru's mother was part of the waterfall village. His parents ran away together at a young age. When they had Hotaru, the two parents were only nineteen, and carrying a newly born baby wasn't something his mother could handle apperantly. His father helped him with his water element, teaching him jutsu that his mother knew. Hotaru now lives with his father in an apartment in their village. He still trains, and has strong bonds with his team. His brothers, who are the children of his adoptive parents, are infact alive. Little is known on their location at the moment, but Hotaru is detirmined to find them.

While on a mission to find a rouge ninja, who was related to his sensei, Hotaru got bad news. He was lied to when he was told about his brothers where alive, so the journey he made to look for them was a major waste. The two people who clamed to be his brothers, where actually assasins, looking to kill his father, for deeds he commited years ago. The only family Hotaru had left....was killed by the two assasins, right infront of him. Seeing it only right, Hotaru took on the Raiken name.

Extra: Parents-Kengi Raiken
Theme Song- Your not Alone - Soasin
Battle theme- House of Wolves - MCR
Birthday: January 23

[Urban_Ninja]

Guess I have to repost this, ne?

"In order to win I will risk...well, maybe not everything, because I like life, and my small fortune, and really, what's the point of risking it all, when there's nothing to gain?"

Name: Tenju Fukugawa

Age: 22

Personality: Tenju is a very easy going person, flexible and relaxed. It takes alot to get him angry, althoug he can make others angry very quickly. He;s also very helpful, for the right price. If any drawbacks, he's a sore loser, and will beat himself up if he fails.

Appearance: Tenju stands tall, with long brown hair, which he usually ties back in a ponytail with a ribbon. He has green eyes, and is usually smiling. He wears all black, with a shirt that somewhat sparkles. He is always in sandals or bare foot.
He often wears the attire of a priest while travelling.

Village: Waterfall

Chakra Element: Wind. Fire.

Clan: Fukugawa

Ninja Rank: Chuunin (officially, but his power level is around the rank of a Jounin)

Weapon(s): Senbon, Needles (Myriads hidden around his person, sharp, and some are poisoned), Kunai, Shurikan, Caltrops.

Jutsu:

_________ Needle Jutsu.
The blank is replaced by an element. Using the elements around him, Tenju can create thousands of needles, which he can aim, with questionable accuracy (Quantity over quality). *It's like an upgraded version of Haku's 1000 Ice needles* The element has to be present in order to use it. (Ie: If he's standing in a desert, he can't use water)

Blood Needle Jutsu.
Tenju uses his own blood to create needles. These are far more accurate, as they are his own blood.

Blood Javelin Jutsu.
Using his own blood again, Tenju creates a large javelin. He can control it at will, and manipulate it as he wills. This is a last resort attack, as it is debilitating to the user.

Forbidden Jutsu: N/A

Kekkai Genkai: N/A

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: N/A

Bio:
-Early Childhood
Tenju was born as the only male heir to the Fukugawa Clan, in the Village of the Waterfall. He had a sheltered childhood, as his father insisted that he learn all about his Clan's jutsu and history, in preparation for becoming the succesor. His father was an elite ninja, and so wanted Tenju to be the same. Tenju did his best, but most of the results were not up to his father's standards. He was aware of most of the other people in the village, but didn't have any friends.

-Academy Student/Genin Background
When he entered the Academy, Tenju changed. He brightened up, and became one of the most well known students, popular with both students and teachers. It bothered his father to no end that Tenju was only producing average results, and he often forced Tenju to work as hard as he did at home as at school. Tenju usually defied his father, and proceeded to gain the easygoing personality that he now has.

He graduated at the age of twelve, and was placed on a genin squad. His squad became his family, giving him the support he had not known. His sqaudmates, Taka and Hakuyuko, became like his brothers, and his sensei became like his father. He began spending less time at home, until finally moving in with Hakuyuko. This led to an argument with his father, and eventually to his disownment. Tenju didn't really care, as it allowed him to pursue the relaxed lifestyle he had been longing.

It did not take long for the group to become Chuunin. Then disaster struck. While disguising himself as a prince on a mission, Hakuyuko was killed. Tenju was devistated at the loss of his best friend, and fell into a sudden funk. After spending about a month in this manner, Taka finally snapped Tenju out it, by reminding him that Hakuyuko wouldn't want Tenju to sulk and that it wasn't him. Tenju was able to come back to the world, and move forward.

-After then:
Tenju spent a few more years in the village, before deciding that there was more world yet for him to see. And so, he abandoned the village and went out into the wide world. He travelled for a few years, until a chance meeting in a tavern with Kakuzu of the Akatsuki pushed him onto the path of bounty hunting. Kakuzu took an intrest in Tenju, and they keep in regular contact.

-Current:
Currently, Tenju remains a bounty hunter. Though mostly bringing in criminals, the few ninja bounties he has taken have allowed him to become known as an A-rank Criminal. Not that Tenju cares. He's to busy enjoying life.

Extra:
Tenju loves money, and is rather stingy. He hates parting with what he's made.
He will always go to the highest bidder, even if that bidder happens to be his target. Hiring him, can therefore, be somewhat expensive.

[Mono Morsa]

OOC: Finish later. You know wuts coming Relliks

In order to win I will risk everything and everyone.

Name: Kouhaku Kinsoku

Age: 45

Personality: Cold and heartless as the jutsu he uses, Kouhaku is a leader like none other. He has no remorse, no mercy, and no feelings. He kills for amusement and hates even his own children

Appearance:

Village: Kinzokugakure

Chakra Element: Metal/Steel

Clan: Kinzoku

Ninja Rank: Kage

Weapon(s): Limit of 9

Jutsu: Limit to 20

Forbidden Jutsu: Limit of 8

Kekkai Genkai: Optional, but PM me first for approval.

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: Limit depends on your Kekkai Genaki.

Bio: 4 paragraph minimum, no exceptions (possible structure below)
-Early Childhood
-Academy Student/Genin Background
-2 and a half years arc:
-Current:
Extra: Stuff like Theme Song, Battle Theme, Birthday, Parents, etc...