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Dragonball Z: Orutaneito Taitou Ikou

PLOT
It has been more than two thousand years since Goku left to travel the universe with Shenron, and through the ages in between the lands and planets were somewhat peaceful, but in a universe where everyone wants power and nobody wants to give in with out a fight, there has been all kinds of destruction and terrible chaos. About five hundred years after the events of Goku leaving, there was another threat that had to be taken care of, but this time, it came with a great price. A mystic rite had secretly been invoked by Shenron, and through this power, Vegeta, Gohan, Pan, Trunks, Goku, and Goten were all made immune to aging, thus they could watch over the realms with little effort, though their bodies could still be destroyed.

During the threat that arose, shock was a factor that more than caught the new age of fighters off guard, along with the warriors of old. A monstrosity was wiping out planets with power that hadn't even been seen with Omega Shenron, and the combined forces of fighters stood no chance at all. It was then that Goku revealed that there was a reason that Shenron had taken him, and it was a last resort ability with most likely eternal effects. Vegeta, Gohan, Pan, Trunks, Goki, and Goten all gathered around the being known as Krios, and in an instant released all of their saiyan power, and DNA at once. The effect was immediate, and Krios was weakened to the point that a single blow from a human child was enough to finish him off, but their were other affects..........


Wiping out the main branch of saiyans and scattering their DNA was something that Shenron had planned, and it abolished the ability to become Super Saiyan, but over the next several hundred years the particles that swept across the universe gave rise to an ability that came to be known as Alter Saiyans, in remembrance of the sacrifice that the saiyans had made before. This ability has quite a few similarities to Super Saiyan form, such as the massive increase in power, and the change in hair color to bright blond, but after the first stage, the effects are different for every person that got the ability. What the races chose to do with such power is also now history, but as the 3000 year mark hit, the universe is faced once again with the possibility of annihilation.


There was a rumor that before Krios was destroyed, he actually fell in love with an Earth woman, and before completely losing his mind to power, they had a daughter, and because the daughter was not evil, being a mre child, she was hidden and over the 3000 years that passed, the family of Krios descendants were kept hidden, and since then forgotten about, even to themselves. Sadly about 100 years ago a child in the family line found a secret text about his people's past, and what had happened to them. Not understanding that what happened was for the greater good, and his power already immense, the child named Ereon located the temple that his family had guarded and stole the dragon balls, using their power to give him the same power to stop aging as Shenron had given the others. With that done, he turned on his family in a rage, and killed them all, other than a select few who managed to escape.


Now, in present time, he has gotten bored with conquest, and now seeks the dragonballs to make a twisted wish. He seeks non other than the reformation of Krios himself, as Ereon learned that Krios hadn't been destroyed, but merely broken down into zillions of particles that were scattered through out the universe, and a single wish is all he needs to bring them back together. Ereon already has 2 dragonballs and he seeks the others, and will stop at nothing to get the other five. He already has destroyed Namek 4 as a warning when they would give no information, and he is supposedly on Earth at the moment, those his exact whereabouts are unknown. Now there is a race against time, Ereon's followers, and fate to stop the resurrection of Krios.



Battle System/ Information

Obviously in the world of DBZ paced battles occur, and the like, but when it all comes down to it, in an rp battle the frames are slowed down. Here are some rules that must be followed in the rp.

The use of non-physical combat (against another rp'er) requires that you unleash your attack and wait for a reaction from the other before doing anything else.......

-The use of physical combat (against another rp'er) does not require the rule above, though you cannot kill anyone in such a manner. We are all experienced enough to work around a physical blow, or fifty >_>

-The speed at which energy attacks, or other techniques can be performed is limited to three consecutive attacks at any given time. Do NOT violate this rule.

-Everyone can use simple blasts of ki, or energy in battle, and this kind of ability does not count in a template.


Template
Name: (what do you call yourself)

Age: (13 and up)

Persona: (How you act)

Appearance: (If using a pic, a description is still needed)

Homeland: (Where you are from)

Race: (Make it up if you want to)

History: (What's happen in your characters life?? Can be recent.........at least two paragraphs)

Alter Saiyan- This is a transformation that causes the hair to partially spike, and turn blonde, and transform the body in some way. It grants an increase in physical and energy power, along with another abiity that is different for everyone.(Note that everyone may have up to Alter Saiyan three)

Techniques- ( Attacks that involve ki, or other bodily power, can be very powerful. 8 are allowed)

Ultimate Techniques- (Attacks that consume a lot of energy and power. They are usually much more powerful than a normal technique, and will no doubt cause massive destruction. 4 are allowed)


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2.No spamming or oneling (Period)
3.No asking too many questions
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6.Follow the rules above or you’ll be kicked out
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11. Spots are unlimited. Thus, they will NOT be reserved. There's no need to post that you are 'reserving a spot' simply to signify your interest. If you want to let me know you plan on joining, but are too lazy/busy to create a template right now, PM me. Don't post it.
12. "Not again.........the universe annoys me because________" fill in the blank, and post at the top of your template.

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OOC: I love Dragonballz rps. I'm joining this. Tavish, you just got me back into my rp mindset.

"Not again.........the universe annoys me because__fools always want the Dragonballs.______"

Name: Syra Tavar

Age: 23 (3,323)

Persona: Syra is confident in his abilities at all times. He is nice to others and feels a sense of duty to protect Earth and any other planet that needs protection. He cares about others feelings and he loves to train past his own limits. He is like Goku when Goku was younger.

Appearance: http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs13/300...chemistRoy.jpg

Syra is 5'11" and weighs around 180 lb. His hair is short, messy, and silver in color. His eye are light green with the look of many battles. He wears an outfit similar to Goku except his is blue with orange sleeves and an orange sash. His boots are white. He has leather bracers on each arm that extend from his wrist to his elbow. Each are buckled at the bottom as so to stay on his arms.

Homeland: Frotain

Race: Jinkai

History: Syra was born to a race known as Jinkai and was born on the planet Frotain. Syra was born around the sametime that Alter Saiyans became known. The Jinkai are a warrior race that started out as shaman/warriors. They were known as powerful warriors that unlike Saiyans, relied on tactics and speed. When born, Syra had a power level on the same level of teen Gohan in his normal state. His parents were glad their son's power level was moderate meaning he could train harder.

When Syra turned age 6, he began his training. His father was a harsh teacher but, it was only to get Syra stronger. During his training around age 8, Syra's father decided it was time to show Syra his Alter Saiyan 1 stage. Syra though wasn't impressed because he had been keeping a secret from his father. He could also become Alter Saiyan but, at the time he didn't know what an Alter Saiyan was. He also transformed into an Alter Saiyan as though it was natural making his father proud.

For the next ten years, Syra continued training and fighting. He even unlocked Alter Saiyan 2. Soon Frotain was attacked by twins named Yin and Yang. They were searching for a way to become one powerful being and a planet to take as their own. Frotain was to be their planet. They attacked with such power that the Jinkai could barely hold them off. Syra being one of the stronger Jinkai decided to take them on. There was a fierce battle between them but in the end, Syra was killed by their combined power. His people surrendered and mourned the loss of Syra.

When Syra awoke, a blue man, monkey, and bug were staring at Syra. He jumped at first and was lost about where he was until the blue man told him everything. This blue man was King Kai. Seeing the untapped power inside Syra, King Kai decided to enlist Syra as one of his fighters if he could catch Bubbles and hit the bug with a hammer. Syra did both in a matter of sceonds. King Kai was amazed and decided Syra would be ready to learn Spirit Bomb. Instead of a bomb, Syra taught himself to unleash it in the form of a beam. The time for the Otherworld Tournament was soon and King Kai put down Syra as his fighter.

Everyone was skeptical of Syra until the day of the tournament. He flawlessly defeated each warrior that stepped before except the last two, Piccolo, and Android 18. They had been training since their untimely deaths, gaining more strength. They seemed to be an even match for Syra until he transformed into Alter Saiyan 2. He defeated them, winning the tournament and the training from the Grand Kai. For the next thousand or so years, Syra underwent training. This training would give him untold power.

Meanwhile on Frotain, Yin and Yang had finally found the way of fusion by using the Potara earrings to become Ying, a more powerful being. In attempt to get even stronger they made a deal with Ereon. Ying's race was able to live thousands of years without aging meaning Ying had been gaining power all this time. The Jinkai population was dwindling with only 200 Jinkai left alive. More though would continue to die if Ying wasn't stopped. There was only one option, bring back a powerful Jinkai using the ancient amulet of ressurection. There were only two Jinkai that were known to have great power, Syra's ancestor and Syra himself. They chose instead to bring Syra back. It would take the life energy of fifty Jinkai to power the amulet. Fifty Jinkai sacrificed their lives to gve the amulet power and then the amulet was used to bring Syra back to the human world.

When Syra returned, he was lost at first until he was met by the rest of the Jinkai. They told him of what had happened since he had died so long ago and that now Syra was their only hope. Syra nodded and left to fight Ying who stood within Syra's village. Upon meeting with Ying, Syra was laughed at for attempting a second time at beating Ying. Ying began talking about how he had decimated so many Jinkai and taken over Frotain, pissing Syra off to now end, causing all his anger to swell up until he released it, unlocking Alter Saiyan 3. They then began battle soon after.

It was almost evenly matched though Ying had the upperhand. After a long fight, Syra began to realize that his fighting in complete anger wasn't working against Ying since he didn't have any control over his actions, and he calmed his mind. He then focused on raising his own power causing him to unlock True Alter Saiyan 3. Syra was now more powerful giving him the edge over Ying. Ying attacked brutally but, Syra simply danced around Ying's attacks, playing with him the whole time. Finally deciding to fight back, Syra easily began beating Ying, and torturing him for all he did to Syra's people. After destroying Ying's legs, Syra asked why Ying did this, and Ying answered by telling him that he had made a deal with Ereon and that this universe was doomed. Syra finished off Ying and wanting to stop this Ereon from dooming the universe, Syra left his planet in search of answers.

He soon ended up on Earth. He has been here for almost two weeks now.

Alter Saiyan- When Syra tansforms, his hair spikes up partially leaving various pieces of hair to hang over his face. His hair becomes blonde in color with sliver streaks in his hair. His abilities are increased and he given the ability to withstand weak to medium physical attacks and weaker techniques with the slightest of ease.

Alter Saiyan 2 - Syra's hair spikes up more with more spikes in the back then the front. (Alter Saiyan 2 hair http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs12/i/20...NShadowNLC.jpg ) While blonde, he still retains the silver streaks in his hair. His abilities are increased dramatically. His speed becomes almost instant in this transformation. Light blue electricity and a blue aura surronds his body constantly. Syra now has the ability to shapeshift into anyone perfectly, mimicing everything about them with ease just by reading their ki.

Alter Saiyan 3 - http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs21/300..._by_RageVX.jpg

This stage only takes place when Syra is completely angered. He grows thick black fur over his body except for his chest, face. and legs. He grows two fangs from the top of his mouth and his muscles expand. His hair grows longer, and parts of his hair becomes red and dark silver. In this stage, Syra's abilities are drastically increased. His speed becomes instant though he can't travel to other worlds like Instant Transmission. A red aura surronds his body all the time and silver electricity surges around his body continuously. His aura blows away all those that doesn't have the strength to match him. His techniques become stronger along with his ki becoming red. His ki sense becomes strong enough to allow Syra the ability to tell the next move of an enemy just by reading their ki. He has barely any control in this form, allowing anger to rule in this forms. Sometimes even friends are in danger in this form.

(Tavish said this was okay so no one can say anything about it)
True Alter Saiyan 3 - http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs11/300...agonballAF.jpg

This stage was founded by Syra during his fight with Ying. This is the controlled stage of Alter Saiyan 3. This takes place actually adding the power of Alter Saiyan 1 to Alter Saiyan 3. It is obtained by clearing the mind Alter Saiyan 3 and focusing on bringing out your Alter Saiyan 1 powers while maintaining Alter Saiyan 3. The Alter Saiyan 3 abilites becomes more powerful then any normal Alter Saiyan 3. When using this, Syra's strength nearly outmatches his speed, allowing him tremendous strength. His ki becomes silver in color. His ki sense ability is retained and Syra is now able to copy an enemie's attack but, he can only copy one at a time.

Techniques-

Energy wave: Syra puts his hands together as if he was doing Vegeta's Final Flash. He focuses his ki into his hands and unleashes a beam of light blue ki energy.

Ki Enchou: A advanced technique original to only Jinkai. He forms his ki into a sphere, making it grow very large. Syra slams the sphere into the ground. It then grows into a large dome around him, seemingly creating a ki dome. Anything, and everything in it, is struck far beyond five hundred times, including Syra. Though it does so many strikes, it can kill but, only do severe damage.

Sphere Control - Syra creates a ball of ki which he can completely control. He then throws it. Normally any skilled warrior would dodge it. Right as they ball is dodged, Syra makes the ball turn around, usually hitting the target. Syra then has the ball keep attacking. Once the ball hits for a final time, it explodes, injuring the enemy farther. (Syra uses variations of this technique)

Ki sense - By focusing on an individual's ki, Syra can sense the Ki level of that person and where they are almost instantly. It is almost impossible to hide your ki from Syra's acutesense.

Million Kick: Using quick speed, Syra kicks multiple locations. Because of the quick speed of the kick, no one has been able to tell how many times Syra attacks or which way each attack would be coming from.

Dancing Fist: Syra punches multiple times, with such speed that it appears his arm is teleporting from position to position.

Waltz of Kicks: This attack starts with a forceful kick planted in the opponents chest where Syra bounces off of them. At the last second however he uses his right leg to wrap around their neck and pulls him back in for more attacks. Syra calls upon his ki and adds power to his flurries of kicks that hit the opponent. All of these kicks vary, but the final kick is always a jumping somesault kick.

Waltz of Punchs: This attack starts with a heavy uppercut to the enemy's throat that knocks them into the air. Syra shoots up and bombards the opponent with all kinds of horrific punches until he finally charges a punch full of ki and nails them in the gut, causing their body to come crashing to the ground.

Ultimate Techniques-

Final Energy Wave: He starts the attack the same way as he starts the Energy Wave except in this one he charges even more ki into the attack giving it more power. He must focus for this and when he unleashes the attack, it is large in size, ripping the area apart from the power. It is strong enough to completely destory the planet if it hits the ground and not a person or another technique that is equally powerful. The attack is crimson in color.

Raging Wolf Fist: A ancient Jinkai technique thoughto be lost but, Syra was able to recover and use it to it's fullest potential. This can be done in any Alter form but it's true power resides in his Alter Saiyan 3. In his lesser forms, Syra charges large amounts of ki into his fist until it glows light blue from all the ki built up. Syra then flies at his opponent and when close enough Syra punches toward the opponent. The image of a wolf attacking can be seen over his fist. When his fist hits, he unleashs all his ki and the opponent is literally ripped to shreds by the attack. When in Alter Saiyan 3, ki and pure anger is charged into his fist, turning it a red color. When Syra punches at the opponent, the image of several can be seen over his fist. When his fist connects, Syra unleashs all his ki and anger, completely annhilating the opponent.

Spirit wave: This is the spirit bomb with Syra's own spin to the technique. Syra extends his right arms with his hand wide open while his other hand braces it. He then asks the planet and people to lend him their ki, gathering all into a sphere infront of his hand. He can even gather ki from the universe if people decide to lend him ki. When enough is gathered, Syra releases a beam capable of completely destroying it's intended target or devastate a planet.

Chaotic Blast - This attack is original to Syra and the attack gets stronger with each of Syra's transformation. Using his speed, Syra moves over to the enemy and grabs them by the neck, and he then throws them into the air. Syra then extends his hands upward at the enemy, blasting at the enemy with atleast three hundred ki blasts. Syra then unleashs a Final Energy Wave. He then moves above the enemy and charges up the Raging Wolf Fist and flies down at the enemy. The enemy is then surely destroyed by the combination of the Final Energy Wave and Raging Wolf Fist. After using this, Syra is reverted back to his normal state and is almost completely drained.

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"Not again.........the universe annoys me because of noobs"

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Name: Roy Licht

Age: 13

Persona: Very friendly and trusting to new people but if the person looks like an enemy Roy met before, he will turn aggressive and attack without warning. Extra aggressive to followers of Ereon. (See history to see why)

Appearance: Messy black hair, with a skin about as pinkish as Goku. Wears a sleeveless black shirt and wears a dirty blue jeans with two tears on each knee area of the pants. Wears white socks and running shoes. Height of 154cm, weight of 45kg.

Homeland: Earth

Race: Human

History: Roy was a curious boy, at the age of eight, he had heard of the 'ki' that everyone has, from then he had a goal. To unleash his ki, he no idea what to do after he did, at the time, he just thought that it was 'cool'. After five months of training, the boy with a never-say-die attitude finally managed to create a ball of ki. Once he did, he rushed back home and kept on blabbering to his parents about his 'cool' blue ball of ki. From that day, he had another goal, to shape his materialized ki energy into weapons.

Four years passed and the wonderful boy had managed things boys at his age never felt were useful. Swords, shields, hammers, axes and even amour, the boy had done so, but his fatal flaw was that he did not train his body, leaving him with only a strength of an average boy. One day while he was coming back from school, Roy saw his house was in flames, his mother and father ran out, followed by a man. He announced to be a follower of Ereon and shot Roy's parent's with bullets made out of ki. Enraged by the man's actions, Roy jumped at him, yelling and crying at the same time. The man smacked him back using the back of his hand. Roy soared through the sky and smashed into a tree. He looked up at the man who was charging a ki blast to kill the him.

Roy mustered up all the energy in his body and with a great shout, launched a devastating cannon of ki at the follower of Ereon, overwhelmed by the blast, the man was instantly vaporised. Roy fell unconscious, a side-effect of using all his energy. The young Licht woke up in an orphanage, apparently, someone had saw his dead parents and him and took Roy to the hospital. After a check-up, the preteen was transferred to a near-by orphanage. Still feeling bitter at the lost of his parents, he set out with nothing but the clothes on his back to help others, not wanting to let others live through want he had.

Alter Saiyan- This is a transformation that causes the hair to partially spike, and turn blonde, and transform the body in some way. It grants an increase in physical and energy power, also gives Roy the power to the 'Shinning Sword Attack' of Trunks.

Alter Saiyan 2- Transformation that makes Roy's hair turn white and gives an aura of white ki around his body. Will reflect ki blasts, medium ki cannons and weak techniques. Can not reflect psychical attacks and if the attack is a technique that is strong, the white aura might even fuel the attack and give more damage to Roy. Gives Roy more strength but reduces his energy.

Alter Saiyan 3- Looks like Alter Saiyan 2 but with very spiky white hair and no aura. Increases both energy and strength greatly but in cost of losing focus easier and lost of speed.

Techniques- Ki Sword: Roy makes a sword out of ki to help him in battle. Very light and sharp but pretty easy to break.
Rain of Ki Balls: Roy creates small spiked balls of ki and launched them at the opponent, they are sent through the air as quick as rain, hence the name. One ball is weak but a whole group of them might be powerful.
Ki Shield: Creates a Large shield made out of ki that is as big as a 13 year-old child. Very study and hard to break but drains energy fast and only protects one side.
Massive Boxing Gloves of Ki: Roy creates giant novelty sized gloves to help him in psychical combat, very strong and can fracture small bones but very hard to move with it on.
Anger Flash: Roy uses all the negative emotions he felt through his life to empower his attack and stretches his hand out and lets his palm face his opponent. Roy then creates a red ki cannon the size of a Kamehameha and launch it at the opponent. Kind strong but the only problem is that you can tell if he is doing it. Due to the red energy gathering at his palms.
Ki Lance: Roy creates a lance and fights using it. The lance is fast and not easy to dodge. Roy has to use two hands to wield it thought.
AniKi Barrage: Roy uses his ki to form small animals like squirrels, mouses, hamsters and rats and makes them run toward his enemy to suicide. Roy makes many of them. And each them has the power of a bomb.
Spinnend Voorwerp: Roy creates two energy discs and lock-on to a nearby person's ki. He then throws the ki-seeking energy discs at the person. Only way to destroy them to make the discs hit each other. This is the only way as it can cut throw many things like trees, rocks and even ki blasts and is fast and deadly.

Ultimate Techniques- Split Drain Bomb: Roy unleashes about almost all of his ki to the air and drains it all back, together with anyone's or anything's ki that was mixed with Roy. He then raises his hands and creates a giant ball (about two tires sizes) of energy and splits it in half to detonate it. The attack is very strong but the bad part is that it will also damage Roy.
Giga Ki Sword: Roy creates a normal Ki Sword first, then Roy gives his all energy to his Ki Sword to give it more power and increases it size. The sword is two-story building in length and as wide as a medium size car. The only problem is that it is too heavy and after using this attack, Roy will faint.
Rising Dragon: Roy places his hand on the ground and concentrate his ki through the ground. Roy channel the ki to where his opponent is standing and makes the ki burst through the ground as a blue-coloured dragon that will eat the opponent and implode. Only problem with the attack is that it takes some time to materialize the dragon underground and direct it at the opponent.
Dragoon Jump: Roy creates a lance in him hands and uses his ki to jump up high and stab the opponent from above. If he miss, Roy will make the lance implode and blow up anyone nearby. He will then use the force of the blast to jump away. Sometime, he he does stab his opponent, he will still implode the lance. Very fast and fatal.

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"Not again.........the universe annoys me because there are far too many fools that seek power, for all the wrong reasons."
Name: Momoouka(Momo) Jouen

Age: 24

Persona: Momo can a bright and cheerful woman, but can sometimes show a darker, almost scary side when provoked, and often hides her emotions when she is suffering, but it seems at times as though she has a dual personality as well. She is sublime and proud, but at the same time is very humble when faced with tasks that she might be praised for. Due to her upbringing, she was taught to be quiet and controlled, and can seem cold. In actuality though, she merely represses her feminine side, mostly demonstrated by her love of cute things..............

Appearance: Momo is is simple words very beautiful, but she choose not to wear overly revealing clothing, and keeps her attire nice and simple, choosing to wear a skirt, or plain jeans. She sometimes keeps her hair in a ponytail.

Homeland: Namek 4, moved to Earth

Race: Human????

History: Years ago, during the onslaught when Ereon wiped out most of his family, his rage, and madness got the most of him, and during this time, his sister pregnant sister Yulia was able to escape with the help of her husband. Her husband was killed in the process, but she made it to Namek 4 where mere days later, she gave birth to a daughter; whom she named Momoouka after her husbands favorite thing to look at. She was a very sickly and frail woman, and was near death after giving birth, but knew that there was a chance her brother would still be crazed and come after her, and she wanted Momo to live. Because of this, she requested that Momo be put into stasis, and with her request granted by a Namek elder, she died in peace. A century went by...........

Rules pertaining to the justice of human life, and stasis regulations only allowed for a human to be in stasis for up to 95 years, and already, Momo had five extra years, so she was removed, and ended up being adopted. Her adoptive parents cared for her very much, but as she grew up, Momo was kept under strict guidance, and trained to be a warrior, but her personality was too much to contain, and she became both upbeat and trained to the limit for fighting, as to protect her home if needed. At the age of 14, during a match with her "father", she was knocked through a wall, and thinking that he'd severely injured his "daughter", no time was wasted going to her aide. Surprisingly Ferenda was knocked back, and his daughter was standing with a yellow aura surrounding her body, her pink hair now mostly blond. Momo had unlocked her Alter Saiyan ability.

Not wanting to have the fight get to intense, Ferenda stopped then and there, and congratulated Momo on her training, to which she brushed off as nothing, laughing all the while. For the next couple of years things were uninteresting, other than her obtaining her Alter Saiyan 2 form, but wanting to get out on her own and now being 23, Momo decided to move to Earth for a change of pace.Only hours after boarding the ship, the shuttle began shaking and looking out the window, Namek 4 exploded, being utterly annihilated by an unknown force. Momo could not stand the sight of her home being destroyed, and freaked out, only to see a chunk of the planet floating away, and another blast destroy that too. The shuttle was of course sent into emergency state, and was shot off towards Earth for safety, but she could not get over what she'd sen, and was haunted with nightmares of Namek 4's end. Her home was gone, everything she cared for simply gone in the blink of an eye.

On Earth, she eventually found out about Ereon, and how he destroyed Namek 4 out of madness, and she had already known about her past, and time in stasis as an infant for almost a century. The anger from her exploded, upon finding out, and she attacked her friend in Alter Saiyan 3 form, and killed her. The grief and despair that she felt from this was even worse than losing her home, and she vows to help in the search for the dragon balls to stop Eeon's announced plans of reviving her ancestor........Krios. Her journey is one of both revenge, and atonement.

Alter Saiyan- Unlike most Alter Saiyan's, Momo's hair does not spike all the way, and only turns blond on both sides of her head. The middle stays pink. Her abilities are all increased, and her body is surrounded by the normal yellow aura. She also becomes seemingly meta-physical in this state in concentrating and can regenerate her body from almost nothing, but if she does, she is out of commission for a very long time..........

Alter Saiyan 2-She assumes, a demon like nature and appearance. her hair remains pink, but her attire warps into little to no clothing, and she forms a large black aura that sears the ground as she moves. Momo's face darkens, and her eyes bulge and black veins form along her body. Her speed is increased dramatically by the odd shield wings on her back, Her body's aura is now laced with high amounts of flames, and what appears to be green electricity. Her abilities are powered up even further than before, and now she can split her body apart, and control her arms, legs, and head remotely, while maintaining her ability to attack and use techniques, and ultimate techniques.

Alter Saiyan 3- This is Momo's ultimate Alter Saiyan transformation. She recently learned to control it, and in this from her appearance also drastically changes. Though it doesn't look like it, her muscle mass increases, and she grows taller. Her body sprouts red fur, and her shirt shreds, as her breasts grow, but remained partially covered by the fur. Most of her body is now marked in this manner, along with the hair color change to brown, and getting longer. All of her abilities are multiplied by 100, or more, and her techniques have warped into far more powerful versions. Her regenerative ability is phenomenal, and her ki is now pinkish silver. However she cannot maintian this form for a long time, and will be exhausted afterwards...........
Techniques-

Corona Pulse: Momo shoots lines of ki from her finger tips, that expand around an eneny, then return to her. The air around her enemy distorts, and a large pulse of burning ki slams into them from ten directions.

Plectra Kamehameha- Ki is charged is charged into the space between Momo's hands like a normal kamehameha blast, but she forces the ki to become invisible and punches the ki towards the opponent, where it reforms at point blank range, and Momo expels a purple kamehameha from afar, along with the energy in front of the enemy.(Momo uses variants of this technique)

Fierce Detonation- A small orb of ki is formed atop Momo's hand, and she throws this miniature ball at an enemy. As it travels however, it splits into three orbs, and the first slams into the ground, causing an moderate explosion. The second grows twice the size of the first, and locks onto the opponents ki signature and blows up close them, causing a staggering blast. The last grows smaller, but the left over ki from the previous attacks caused it's energy to flare out of control, and cause a horribly large blast...........

Cyclone Ki Bomb- Momo jumps into the air, and fires a ki blast at an enemy. While they are busy with this, she flies over to them and spins around rapidly, sending a barrage of flashing pink ki blasts, that explode on contact with the enemy, or anything else they touch..............

Rush Flare- Using a burst of speed, Momo fires a thin beam of ki form her finger, that spirals around an enemy, and then waves her arm, firing an arc of ki beams, that rush in to connect to the spiral. This results in a chain reaction that can bow apart, or crush the enemy with fast ki assaults.

Sear Blade- Long blades of teal ki extend from Momo's arms, and she uses them to attack and slice an opponent with. Before long however, the blades shatter, and the ki from them blats away the enemy, and possibly impales them.(Momo uses variants of this technique)

Chaos Dome- Momo puts out her palm, and charges ki into it, thus firing a medium sized, blast of energy, that slams into the grond, but stays together. The ki expands, and forms a dome around enemies, and collapses, showering them with ki, and then exploding.(Momo uses variants of this technique)

Big Bang Blast- Momo extends her arms, opens her palms, and turns her hands up at a 90 degree angles (as if to signal "Stop") and starts to charge up massive amounts of ki. She then fires a spheres of ki, a large energy ball or comet-like ki projectile. This attack is either yellow, light blue, or purple in color and creates an enormous mushroom cloud explosion upon contact, with the ground or an enemy. It has low accuracy, but the blast makes up for that, and the second blast can combine with the first.

Ultimate Techniques-

Heaven Kamehameha- Momo pulls back her hands, and releases a massive amount of ki into the space between then, and fires a kamehameha wave that rips a groove in the ground, and it's pink color makes it hard to look at. Immediately after firing this attack, Momo unleashes another kamehameha into the first, and the beam expands in size and power, able to cause extreme damage to the enemy, and surrounding area with ease.

Howaido Raikiri Issen- The ki in Momo's body is used to form a large mass of electricity, that is colored pink znd a shifting green color. The ki is channeled into her hand, and she then rushes past the enemy, so fast that it looks like she misses, but their body has likely been torn open from the attack merely touching their side. The surrounding area is shredded and scorched, and they are blasted away and their body falls to the ground. The left over energy is used to plow the opponent into the ground with a smaller version of the attack, used from a jump......

Plectra Bang Blast- This is a move combined of two of Momo's most powerful and favorite attacks. Both the Plectra Kamehameha and Big Bang Blast. Momo charges up her ki and places her hands in front of her, turning them up at a 90 degree angle. About 3 feet from her ki begins to collect into two balls that grow to the diameter of Momo's body. She then pushes her hands forward into each ki ball and they emit uber powerful shock wave-like beams that fire outward in a fan type pattern. This ultimate technique harbors massive strength and can and will wipe out the surrounding area, even if it is blocked, but has relatively short range

Choushinsei- After rising into the air, Momo raises her left hand up and a gargantuan flaming mass of black ki materializes in a mere second, like a bolt from the blue. This mass is so large that it can easily block out the sun when it's formed and cause an eclipse. The pink shell of light around the attack and inside it shines out and light soon returns as this j is dropped down upon any enemies, or even allies unlucky enough to be in it's wake. It's power is extreme, and just touching the ground can cause cataclysmic damage. Defending against this move is rather pointless, but you always have to deal with the massive explosion that is sure to follow. Momo sure hopes everyone likes the crater this forms.............


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"Not again.........the universe annoys me because there are those that fight without purpose and can't seem to justify their own actions."

Name: Kisuke Zeholyte

Age: 19

Persona: A really kind hearted and kindred spirit, his traits are what set him apart from most men. The deal with his way of thinking is he cares alot for the lives of those close to him. To live his life to influence others knowing he's done something for the better. His mentality wraps around the intention of playing a role in a sense. In other words selfless.

Appearance:

Height: 5'9''

Weight: 205 lbs

Eye Color: An illuminating bright red color in the midst of which completely throw of those that gaze into them with his persona.

Skin tone
: A light shade of melanin almost to the point where you can see his background has mixed traits.

Facial Features: The face protruding a strong disposition near the underlining of the face. Hair soft like wool configured with a black texture though brown in the sunlight. It's puffed back into a rotating counter-clockwise seven spikes in total colored a nice shade of red and scarlet. Ears both hanging loosely from the sides of the face unattached to the head where the bottom lobes seem to jut out loosely. On his face a clear cut and shaved around the chin and neck and at the seems as it envelops the chin and connects to the side burns.

Physical Features/Attire: The body fairly built, encased in flesh with a humanoid form. The first layer of clothing on the torso being a red t-shirt sleeveless of course and touches past his backside. Over this a short black jacket pertruding all the way over his torso right above the elbows. Down below around the waist would be that of a red and black belt, they hold up his black sweat pants the hang down bagged just over the feet. On both hand are fist clasped in gloves with freedom of the ten fingers with a steel plating over the fore palm.


Homeland: Neozanthros -> Earth Traveled Instant Transmission

Race: Neolyte (Luminous Humanoid)

History:

Birth.

Born on the planet Neozanthros, his power level measured substantially high for a newborn. He lay in a crib in the hospitalized establishment putting off a bright aura about his bod shining for his neolyte inheritance. The mother identified as Misha Zeholyte and the father Barboda Zeholyte. Amused with their young ones potential at birth his power level seemed to be something to admire.

"The name Kisuke shall be given to our son. He'll do great things, he has inherited your eyes Barboda" Misha said unto her husband.

"Expectations are high for him.....hopefully he can live up to them."

As he grew in time, at age seven he learned a few things being educated by his own father. The ways of using that mystical force and aura of their own called ki and feeding this brand of energy into the atmosphere manipulating it and giving it shape. Barboda wasn't one that took things lightly as he did wish for his offspring to succeed him and show the pride of his race. With the basics beginning this routine so to speak is something that went on for years, the next five to be exact.

At the age of twelve, Kisuke befriended a nubelite alien that had visited their planet. Their people were odd looking specimens with no physical capabilities to speak of. His associate later befriended him where he learned a wondrous technique called "instant transmission". Its something that allows the user to accelerate their body moving it at several thousand miles per second across the vacuum of space. This was something Kisuke had trouble with and didn't perfect until two years later. His young friend had jumped to yet another planet leaving him with his wisdom.

In later years, Kisuke jumped shifts and traveled to other planets as he was now nineteen in age. His father had passed leaving him with his valuable teachings and techniques. Applying this in his voyages, it left something of extremities. Landing on the planet of earth, he took but a glimpse of the planets beauty as he'd be here for sometime. As of whats current' he's been on earth for whats been about three months.

Alter Saiyan- Using a large concentrated amount of formulated ki, Kisuke pushes himself into a state of power using his will. His hair normally red and mildly spiked lifts up slightly then beginning to form blond spikes. His field of red ki release turns from red to a golden flash as it fluxes about his person. This form has been known a Alter Saiyan of some sort. The strength of his normal self multiplied times twenty without the strenuous strain of his own ki pushing down on his body. The eyes as well turn from their normal red daggers of blood to a solid silver giving him access to his people's rare eye trait known as the shirubaai.

Alter Ascended Saiyan: The power of alter saiyan is increased about ten-fold. The hair spikes up much more than the first form, leaving Xell with two bangs reaching down near both is temples on his head. The shirubaai is leveled up as well in this transformation giving him access to not only the normal shirubaai, but the hizumu shirubaai.

Alter Saiyan Tri: The third and final level which has yet to be reached.

Techniques-

Howaitnoizu; White Noise (Mid-high, short range, Lightning-ki):
Ki it channeled rapidly into the user's palm at a rapid pace building to form a white out source of energy. With the brand of it being exposed to the open air, the sound of white noise like on a tv screen begins to disperse wildly as the energy in still focused in the palm. Upon movement, traveling at an adept level of speed gives the attack it impacting point and needed momentum for the full thrust into physical matter.

Aura Shot (Mid, long range, Pure-ki):
From the user's finger they can purge a fixed amount of pure ki and it travels at the speed of sound at the max when dispersed from their hand.

After Image Technique
(Low, short range-mid range, supplementary):
One of the oldest tricks in the book, the user flash shifts and leaves a false image of themselves in their place. The speed can in some cases be so great that their could be hundreds of replacement shells simultaneously. This is soully for those that make an attempt to conceal themselves from others.

Vorpal Orb (High, short range, Pure-ki):
This technique requires no rapid complexities to perform. It gathers a vast amount of ki into the hand that forms into a ball about the size of a softball. Kisuke can use this technique in many ways. He can either throw it at an enemy since it will follow an enemies chakra signature until it slams into them causing damage, or rush the opponent with it and cause damage in the following way. As the orb impacts the skin, the spinning effects rips onto the surface of the skin entering the inside spiraling and twisting around. Depending on how much force is applied, it can tear apart the inside from the outside.

Aura Shotgun (Mid-high, long range, Pure-ki):
Just like how the thunder gun technique works, its more focused into a fist than a finger. The user's fist swells with his own ki and builds substantially. When charged up to the point of release, the user disperses a multitude of mini shots of ki sharpened firing rapidly from the clenched fist. The feel of this technique is like being stricken with physical fist a broad number of times all subsequent hits occurring frequently.

Instant Transmission (High, long range, supplementary): Technique invented by the Nubelites passing their genius to those who felt to make use of it much like the fabled one, it turns a person that even outmatched into a fast moving machine. The technique incorporates localizing a single most energy source and moving towards at a few thousand miles a second. Planet hopping can be done this way as well.

Senhappa Wave (Mid, mid range, Pure-ki):
Pure ki is focused into the palms at a rapid pace and stores it up for dispersal. From both palms a pure wave of energy is released and shot traveling at a sound breaker fast paced energy in a single beam.

Digix Aura Wall: (Mid-high, short range, supplementary)
The user fixates ki into the atmosphere and connecting them all together to form a tightly bonded shield of ki with special properties. It dissipates weaker ki attacks, and deflects close range ki attacks of about the same level and below.

Ultimate Techniques
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Hell Storm Flare Shot
(Ulti, mid range, Pure-ki):
The user fires a massive array of ki blast into the sky. The ki blast are all guided by the user purposely flying past the opponent and floating dormant in the air. This gives the enemy the moment to think that the shots all missed on accident, but the ki illuminates into a flare of energy surrounding him or her rotating rapidly. The number of shots are vastly stretching close to a thousand as the average ki blast is as big as the palm, however that blast split and multiply. On the user's wish they all fly upon the opponent slamming vigorously into the opponent with rapid tenacity.

Dancing Dragon Flame
(Ulti, long range, Fire/Pure-ki):
The mighty twin dragon technique residing in purple flame first developed by Misha Zeholyte Kisuke's baachan. This explosive technique is used when completly overwhelmed and can blow back a mass number of enemies B-level and below. Ki is stored and built up in the chest and released all at once unleashing twin dragons of purple flame that wrap around an enemy. The vortex of purple fire burns and cinders the flesh as it would most definitely peel.

Raifuuton Vorpal Orb
(Ulti, mid range, Wind/Lightning/Pure-ki)
This technique combines Kisuke's lightning and wind based ki in combination with the vorpal orb. By doing so the attack is both sharped by the wind ki enhancing its ability to pierce through matter. With the lightning as an addition it gives it the same properties and speed of rippling ki making it light and maintaining speed. By far this technique is still in the pre-stages, about half way finished to be exact. Kisuke later perfected this technique after learning how to manipulate wind based ki in a simultaneous fashion. After which the orb not only held his lightning nature, but a thick layer of wind was about the outside. The attack can be thrown and it seeks out the enemy, or detonated upon the user's whim. The explosion of direct contact electrifies the flesh on the lightning being spiral to prevent any further movement whereas the wind slices through the tissues of the flesh severing all given nerves in responses to pain as such. It works and expands to fast locking them in a dome containing both natures as the rotation worsens the attack. The recipient would die in a matter of four seconds.

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Name: Kyo

Age: 13

Persona: A slient kid, who barley speaks but is very brave and will defend his allies even with self sacrifice.
He rarely smiles and always seems to be under a shadow. He enjoys what other kids enjoy and is a unusal kid.

Appearance- Kyo has brown hair, a shark-tooth necklace, a blue bandanna and a blue fighting suit.

Homeland: Korin Tower

Race: Human

History: Kyo's mother gave birth to him on Korin Tower and died shortly after, Kyo was left in the care of Mr Popo and Dende[if namekians live for 2000 years]. He trained with Mr Popo and protected the tower with him, after years of training Kyo's power reached amazing heights, and one day in the hypobolic time chamber he reached his alter sayian and nearly destroyed the room. After showing Popo his transformation he told Kyo about Goku and the other sayians, but he ddn't know why he was a super sayian.

2 years later when he turned 13 he went down to earth to see if there were other sayians the world he found was amazing, his excitment transformed him into alter sayain 2 and fell asleep dreaming about a super sayian 3.

Alter Saiyan 1- His first alter saiyan form is a powerful one his bandanna falls off his hair raises his face grows darker, his power increses imensly, his eyes turn a dark green colour.

Alter saiyan 2- He grows a tail in this form and is even more powerful he has yet to master this transformation.

Alter sayian 3- He has yet to find this transformation he only sees it in his dreams.

Techniques-

Luna Ray- A beam of silver that has been powered up by the moon.

Moon Rush- A 15 hit combo that is as fast as the speed of sound.

Sol Ray- A blast of gold that has been powered up the sun.

Sun Rush- A 15 combo that is as fast as the speed of light.

Copy Cat- Makes shadow copies of the enemy.

After Image- Makes shadows clones of himself.

Solar Flare- Blinds the enemy for a limited time.

Ultimate Techniques-

Luna Eclipse- The Moon is covered and makes the enemy unable to see so Kyo can attack him with a 30 hit combo.

Meteor- Meteors are summoned by Kyo and fly at the enemy.

Luna & Sol -A gold and silver blast that has unkown power.

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Not again... the universe annoys me because people always want power

Name: Ankelo
Age: 16
Persona: Really outgoing and happy
Appearence: He has black hair and brown eyes. He is dressed mostly in white
Homeland: Earth
Race: Human
History: His parents left him when he was 2. He managed to find a good training facility and learned all about martial arts. He was also trained a little bit by Vegeta and Gohan. After that he found a good home and good friends. He has learned to be sweet and caring but sometimes he can become wild. He doesn't like people to be in his own personal buissness and likes to joke around sometimes. He managed to find the fountain of youth when he was younger and that kept him alive.
Alter Sayian 1: His body is surrounded by a dark aura. His hair grows longer and turns gold.
Alter Sayian 3: His attacks get deadly and his body is surrounded in a light-dark aura.
Techniques: Machine-Gun Raid- repeated bursts of energy
Mortar Pulse- a big ball of enrgy is launched at the enemy
Ultimate Techniques: Tank Cannon- a giant wave of energy is blasted at the enemy
Bazooka Shell- a long tube of energy is shot at the opponent

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"Not again.........the universe annoys me because it needs saving once again from a power hunrgy villian...yeaaaah"


Name: Aixin Stryker
Age: 17

Persona: Just like goku he likes to have a good challenge, eats alot, hates injustice, has a good sense of humor and can't stand his friends,famliy or innocent people being harmed and will protect them at any cost.

Appearance: Black eyes,navy-blue bandana on top of head with black combed hair down to the end of neck with a pony-tail. Black tee with white long sleeved shirt underneath with navy blue shorts and black and blue shoes.

Homeland: Earth

Race: Tyrexion(The humanoid looking race)

History:Earth was close to his home planet Tyrexon but Tyrexon was distroyed when he was young by a rampaging power hungry evil being many years ago. His parents and himself escape to earth and lived there ever since and becuase Tyrexion's look exactly like humans except when they change to a more powerful form it was easy to blend in. They seeked out someone strong or mass wisdom to maybe teach Aixin to control and progress in his new Sayian forms.

He has learned how to fly on his home planet at an early age along with his parents and now they head for Korin tower in hopes Aixin can be trained. Since Aixin already had a more poweful form before he got his new founded Sayian powers it mixed in with his other and his body and power is well different from a human would have but the power lvl is pretty the same but looks are different.

Alter Saiyan 1-This is the only sayain form where his hair is blonde but with red aurora and red blasts.

Alter Saiyan 2- Since he had another form before he got his Saiyan powers they mixed together in this form, his hair turns red with black streeks going through and black and grey pupils(hole eye is black xcept for pupils which are grey) he gets claws and has the sparks around him and a red aruroa around him.

Atler Saiyan-His hair is mostly black but with red thick streeks eyes stay the same with black aurora and black blasts and hair that goes a little past his shoulder. Really spikey.

Techniques-

Ying Yan blast: A blast he gathers from his black or any other color aurora he has also gets stronger if he is mad or happy hence ying yang i mean thats why its called that.

Metoer Canon: He blasts his energy balls into the sky and the rain down a very deadly attack but it depends on how much energy he puts into it and the range is large.

Moon strike(His kind is stronger in the moonlight)-A devasting combo where he passes with extreme speed all around the enemies striking them all around the body takibg them high up and continueing it and when he stops he lets the enemy fall to the ground.


Ultimate Techniques-

Soul body- He sends a copy of him to to enemy and blows up on contact.

Oblivion stryke-He uses 4 swords in this move and it pretty much is about 10 combo hits then a huge blast.

Soul body transmission- He hits the enemy into the sky and he sends another copy after the enemy and grabs him/her/it(lol) and he gathers energy and blasts full power. Unfortantly the last 2 moves written take alot out of the body and can have the user in a critcal state.
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Race: Tyrexion(The humanoid looking race)

History:Earth was close to his home planet Tyrexon but Tyrexon was distroyed when he was young by a rampaging power hungry evil being many years ago. His parents and himself escape to earth and lived there ever since and becuase Tyrexion's look exactly like humans except when they change to a more powerful form it was easy to blend in.
*sigh* Okay, here are the problems with this.

1. There are no planets close to Earth, and if there were, Earth would have been caught in the blst and wiped out along with your planet.

2. If you are 17 how is it that your planet was destroyed by a rampaging evil being many years ago?? If that happened, people would know about it, and no doubt would have tried to destroy such a being. If it was so long ago, you should be older than 17.......

3. If the planet WAS close to Earth, and your characters family did escape, people would know yo came from a blown up planet. There would have been rescue missions and all.

Fix these problems a.s.a.p.

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*sigh* Okay, here are the problems with this.

1. There are no planets close to Earth, and if there were, Earth would have been caught in the blst and wiped out along with your planet.

2. If you are 17 how is it that your planet was destroyed by a rampaging evil being many years ago?? If that happened, people would know about it, and no doubt would have tried to destroy such a being. If it was so long ago, you should be older than 17.......

3. If the planet WAS close to Earth, and your characters family did escape, people would know yo came from a blown up planet. There would have been rescue missions and all.
ouch....alright here is a remake then but many years ago can mean aything like 10 or 7 many doesn't always mean like 20 or 100 just clearing that up.

His home planet Tyrexon was distroyed when he was young by a rampaging power hungry evil being who was once a kind hearted resident about 10 years ago. His parents and himself went to earth but most of the others went to nearby planets just looking for a new home. It took there strongest warriors to take out the Evil being but they did it but to a price of their planet being distroyed.They didn't worry about blending in when they get to earth becuase Tyrexion's look exactly like humans except they can change to a more powerful form each one has a different form though . They seeked out someone strong or mass wisdom to maybe teach Aixin to control and progress in his new Sayian forms which is why they came to earth.

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Name: Adrian Carson

Age: 24

Persona: By nature, the vast majority of Furions are very aggressive, always wanting to fight, and have a hair-thin temper. While Adrian retains these characteristics, they are far more suppressed. This, however by no means implies that he will shy away from a good fight. He is competitive and although he can take a loss, he prefers not to. He is also significantly calmer than most, if not all Furions.

Appearance: Adrian stands at 6'4 and is weighs 225 lbs. A Furion's body is not designed to contained fat, so to say that he is ripped would be an understatement. He is also quite handsome, his skin takes a dark brown pigment. He has a very strong jawline, chiseled cheek bones and all that jazz. He wears mid-neck length dreadlocks and beard. There are two key differences that sets him apart from humans in appearance, aside from his lack of body fat, he also bares fangs and his eyes take a shiny grey-purple hue. He is currenylt wearing a short sleeved plaid shirt that is white red and gray, a pair of light blue jeans, and a pair of gray and red sneakers.

Homeland: Furii Alpha (destroyed), he now lives on Earth.

Race: Furion

History: Adrian was born on Furii 7, a planet very similar to Earth aside from the inhabitants. The Furion is a very aggressive breed, designed for battle, very violent. Adrian was born in a peaceful time, if it could really be called that. Technically since no nations were at war (which was very unusual, as he always heard talk of a campaign to destroy the Furii Alpha''s sister planet, Furii Omega) it was peace. People still fought alot though. More as a feat of strength than anything. A way of proving that a man was a man. From a young age Adrian was taught to defend himself being trained in the martial arts, both in body and a specific weapon training. He chose the Bokken, which was a wooden sword. As Adrian aged he became increasingly proficient with combat, winning several global tournaments, it was later told to him he had he ability of the alter-saiyan.

As had been mentioned before, tensions had been rising between planets, as they were at the cusp of boiling over each planet's respective leader decided that a planetary representative will fight for the neighboring planet, the loser's planet would be destroyed. Adrian was a prime candidate to represent Furii 7. However before the match he was poisoned, thus weakening him significantly. He was unable to access his second or even first level of Alter Sayian. As a result he was killed in that fight. The planets then warred after finding out why Adrian had lost the fight. The end result being Furii's destruction. However there are a handful of people that escaped.

Upon realizing that he was dead, Adrian continued on to meet king Yemma, and after being reviewed he was chosen to meet King Kai. Adrian trained with King Kai for what seemed to be years, allowing him to master his Alter saiyan Form, enabling him to retain that form as if it were his natural form, expending almost no energy. He has also gained more conrtol over his Alter Saiyan 2 form, he is able to achieve Alter Saiyan 3, however, this is when the true Furion emerges.

Upon completing his training with the Grand Kai, he had more than served hiss time for his first death. He was then let free to travel back down Snake Way. King Yemma had then transferred him to Earth, being that his was the nearest planet with a similar atmosphere. He has since then been teaching at a local high school, participating in the Annual Tenkaiichi Tournaments as well.


Alter Saiyan- In this form his hair remains almost the same, except for a few locks that have taken a silvery color. Of course his strength and speed increases, he eyes also begin to take a more silvery hue. His aura also becomes purple and wavy. In this from he can withstand attack ranging from the weak to middle class in power. His ki also become more focused, causing his atacks to become more potent, particularly his Ki Blade.

Alter Saiyan 2- He retains pretty much the same form as he did in Alter Saiyan 1 although his hair begins to float, with ore of his locks becoming silver. Also, his beard become longer and his aura is now blazing and crackling with sparks of electricity. He receives a massive boost in strength and speed, as well as ki focus. His attacks are now significantly stronger. His Ki blade will now cut through almost anything, save for a very powerful ki attack.

Alter Saiyan 3- As was mentioned before, this is when the true Furion comes out, his irises become deep purple, he also grows in muscle. He is stronger than anything seen. His has now grown down to his mid-back and is all silver, his aura is blazing a bright purple and is swirling with electricity. Also, his beard has become almost mane-like, and his teeth have sharpened. He is nigh unstoppable in this form, blindingly fast so the chance of actually making contact with him is unlikely. However, he has become alot more aggressive in this form; almost feral. He barely has control over it, attacking anything that looks at him wrong and will stop at nothing short of his own death before completely destroying his opponent.


Techniques-

Ki Blade: He focuses his Ki into an object, most often his bokken, creating a super-fine blade, enabling it to cut through any object aside from Ki focused well enough to negate it.

Light Grenade: Adrian draws energy from around his stomach area, creating a