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OOC: Ok, for all you people who know this from another rp, I know >_> I don't care if I didn't edit much, I have school so I'm busy, but I'll do the be to edit at will. Still edit my names (lawl KenT)

Name: Ryutaro Ryoku

Age: 43

Personality: Rather goofy most of the time, he seems to never take anything really seriously. This lack of serious conduct seems to add to his clumsiness. Though, many times when he falls into a severe depression, you would never notice that he ever was like his personality portrays. His depression sometimes causes many different forms of anger/sadness. He doesn’t like to be around people in these periods. Just so he can be in his own private company.

Appearance: Ryoku stands at about 6'1" in stature, weighing 116 pounds. His silky black hair reaches down to his shoulders. A strand of his hair covers his left eye, allowing no one to see his black eye. His obsidian colored eyes shine against any light, sometimes blinding an enemy. His nose is slightly slanted down, not a really long nose. His ears are about medium size. His chin advances a bit out of his face, but not that much. His neck is about 6 inches long. He has no acne on his face.

His body is built up fairly well. His muscles aren’t too built up so he looks like an idiot with his muscles bulging out of his clothes, but they are built enough so his body is strong enough to conquer many tasks/ battles and be able to live. His arms stretch to two feet, his fingers stretching to about four inches, except his pinky and thumb. His pinky and thumb stretch to only three inches. His hands and arms are very smooth, he does not have any acne on his arms either. His fingernails are trimmed and are very clean.

His upper body is built up slightly well, he has some abs, but they are not built up the best they could. He is very thin for what his body is like. He should be a little bit bigger for a healthy weight range. His back muscles are pushing out of the upper back of his body when he sits or stands in an awkward position. His upper back is also plagued with a seal, that Ryoku had not noticed until just a little bit ago. 3 prong seal from what it looked like.

His legs stretch at least four feet in length. His legs are thin and light, useful for speed. His Achilles’ tenant has one large bone, the bone stretches the width of the leg. Its also slanted a bit, sticking out of the left on his left leg and the right on his right leg. His feet stretch about a foot in length. (Obviously) His toes differ in sizes. His small toe is about three fourths of an inch. The next toe is about an inch. The next is about a half inch. And his next two toes are both two inches. Just like his finger nails, his toes are trimmed and clean.

His face has a headband tied around his forehead, showing his symbol as a Konoha ninja. Ryoku wears a black jacket on his body. The back of his jacket has white stripes on it along with a hood with white fur on the top. With the hood on, it darkens Ryoku’s face and people can see his anger when he puts up his hood. His hood is usually on used for anger. The undershirt under his coat is a black shirt with blood red stripes. His pants are mahogany cargo pants with chains coming out of the side pockets. He wears a belt as well. His belt has obsidian rocks on it, so it shines in the moonlight and sunshine. He doesn’t wear it often though, he gets bad comments from people about them almost getting blinded by it. He wears black boots that look like regular shoes when his pants cover them. On his back he a strap-on gourd that he bought at Suna two and a half years in the past. The black gourd is the same as any other gourd. It looked like an hourglass, just it wasn’t see through. It had two large widths on both ends and a smashed together portion in the middle. He also carries a Naginata on the outside of the gourd. He holds the Naginata in a red ribbon around the gourd. This ribbon isn’t like others, it can withstand more pain. It was almost like metal.

Village:
Previous: Konoha (age 5-16) Sunagakure (16-41)
Current: Dawn Village

Chakra Element: Fire, Earth

Side: Dawn Village

Ninja Rank:

Weapon(s):

Kunai: A simple throwing knife. Also used as a ninja weapon for stabbing/killing.

Crystal Kunais: A new renovation of a kunai. This kunai, Ryoku throws sand over a regular kunai and then uses dragon fire to form them. The regular kunai is stuck inside. When destroyed the other kunai falls out, allowing for Ryoku to have a few blows with it.

Shuriken: A Japanese throwing star. Usually used by all the ninjas. With four pikes going out of each corner, it is the weapon of choice for throwing.

Crystal Shuriken: Exactly like the Crystal Kunais he created, the same process is used. Sand, Dragon Fire, Crystal Shurikens.

Naginata: A long slender pole made from wood. Usually used by the Samurai class, this weapon is a wooden pole with a curved blade on the top. The steel top is very dense and can withstand many attacks, it does not break easily.

Jutsu:

Taijutsu:

Name: Piercing Arrow (B-rank, Offense, Supplementary Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Ryoku makes a clone of himself to distract the enemy, the real Ryoku runs up behind an enemy and slides under him/her and kicks him/her in the crotch area, making them fly up in the air. The user jumps up to the enemy and starts to barrage him/her with combinations. Then the user throws the enemy over his head and into air, flying towards the ground. The user then proceeds to take a kunai or shuriken out of his/her pockets and holds it straight ahead of him/her face. Diving into the body of the enemy and piercing the weapon through the enemies body on the ground.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Tori Rendan (B-rank, Offense, Supplementary, Short Range (0-5
meters)

Description: This is where Ryoku’s demon chakra really comes into place! After Ryoku summons up his demon chakra, he swiftly glides over to the enemy and uppercuts them into the air. He flies up to the enemy and starts to switch between kicks to the back of the head and back of the chest. As soon he’s finished he throws the enemy into a nearby tree/wall and smashes into them in the wall, then throws them back onto the ground.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Konoha Daisenpü (C-rank, Offensive, Supplementary, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: This jutsu involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first. Ryoku learned this technique from Lee one day when he was sparring with him just for fun…Ryoku lost.

Users: Rock Lee, Might Guy, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Shooting Dragon

Description: Ryoku begins by jump-kicking the opponent in the face. The opponent stumbles back and Ryoku kicks himself off the walls to dive into the enemy. He continues this until he appears above the enemy with a foot smacking their forehead.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sennen Goroshi (E-rank, Offensive, Supplementary, Short range, (0-5 meters)

Description: This is a very simple jutsu with a very over-dramatized name. All the user does is forcefully plunge their index and middle fingers into their opponent's rectum, usually causing severe constipation and embarrassment among other things. Ryoku caught this jutsu when he was walking one day. Kakashi just came up behind him and threw his fingers up his ass! XD

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Ninjutsu:

Name: Katon: Hosenka No Jutsu (C-rank, Offense, Fire, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide Shuriken in the fire balls, creating a surprise second attack. Most of the time this jutsu is mainly used for a distraction. Ryoku was taught this jutsu by his friend, Rayex over the month period in between the prelims and the finals.

Users: Uchiha Clan, Kunokai Rayex, Ryutaro Ryoku.

Name: Katon: Goukakyuu No Jutsu (C-rank, Offense, Fire, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of fire is exhaled from the mouth. Ryoku was taught this jutsu by his friend, Rayex over the month period in between the prelims and finals.

Users: Most Uchiha clan members, Jiraiya, Hatake Kakashi, Kunokai Rayex, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Katon: Ryuuka No Jutsu (C-rank, Offense, Fire, Mid Range (5-10 meters)

Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other long object. It is very large and devastating and is very much stronger than the Great Fireball Technique. Ryoku was taught this by his friend Rayex over the month period in between the prelims and the Chuunin exams final.

Users: Uchiha Clan Members, Mitarshi Anko, Kunokai Rayex, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Flame Fist jutsu (B-rank, Offense, Fire, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Ryoku charges his fist with fire chakra and rushes the opponent. After slamming his burning fist into their gut he jumps back and releases a large fist shaped fire projectile at the enemy. Ryoku taught himself this jutsu one day when he was training in the woods outside of Konoha. He was about 10 when this happened, just two years before he graduated to become a genin.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Fists of Flame Jutsu (A-rank, Offense, Fire, Mid Range, (5-10 meters)

Description: Ryoku’s Upgraded Flame Fist. First he throws four kunai in a circle. Ryoku must adjust his hands towards the two kunai to the left and right of his body. The kunais burst into flame and the fire is shot at the opponent. While the enemy tries to dodge them, four flaming energy fists hit the opponent. Three form all sides and the fourth form above. Ryoku created this jutsu one day when he was pondering with his Flame Fist jutsu. The only down fall to this jutsu is it can be only used once a day.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Flame Prison Jutsu (D-rank, Offense, Fire, Mid Range (5-10 meter)

Description: After making a specific hand sign, Ryoku raises his hand and flames spiral out of the ground and burn the opponent. If the opponent doesn't escape in time the are caught in a follow up jutsu attack. Ryoku learned this jutsu in his early days as a Konoha student, he was just about seven when he learned this jutsu, desperately always trying to get to the level where Sasuke was.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Engulfing Flame Jutsu (B-rank, Offense, Fire, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Once the opponent has been trapped by the Flame Prison Jutsu the fire erupts and begins doing massive damage at the enemy. It is even possible that the foe will be instantly incinerated. Ryoku learned this jutsu shortly after the Flame Prison.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sand Platform Jutsu (C-rank, Offense and Defense, Earth, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: A large piece of earth is raised above the opponent that turns to sand. The sand can buffet the opponent around causing them harm, or even suffocate them. Also Ryoku can use this attack on himself and be lifted high off the ground to avoid damage. Ryoku learned this when he was still in the sand village, his father, Ryutaro Kazuhiko, taught him it.

Users: Ryutaro Kazuhiko (Deceased) Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Suna no Tate (No Rank, Defensive, Earth, Short Range (0-5)

Description: This jutsu causes sand to automatically surround and protect the user from harm, even if it's self-inflicted, regardless of whether or not he/she wants it to. The shield is capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and projectiles, and can be hardened to a point where it's stronger than steel. It can be defeated by avoiding it completely with extremely high-speed attacks, or merely overcoming the shield with incredible brute force. Ryoku learned this jutsu at a later age in Konoha, determined to not let go of his Suna heritage.

Users: Gaara, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sand Temple Jutsu (C-rank, Offensive, Earth and Fire (You could say), Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Ryoku summons sand around the opponent that look like chains on their body. Then Ryoku ignites the chains and they burn into glass. This glass shatters and rips the enemy open. Ryoku taught himself this jutsu one day on short dune of sand. He summoned the sand up and performed the jutsu on it, giving himself a few cuts as well.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sand Sword Jutsu (B-rank, Offense, Earth, Short Range (0-5 meters)

Description: Ryoku forms swords out of sand that can can used to attack and impale opponents. It takes chakra to keep these swords active. Ryoku learned this jutsu when he was about eight in the woods. Just pondering with his weapons, he wondered if it was possible to create a sword created entirely made of sand.

User: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Kage Bushin No Jutsu (B-rank, Offense and Defense, Supplementary, No Range)

Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this jutsu creates clones of the user. Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person. Even though this is true, the Sharingan can tell the difference if it is focused enough.

Any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. This makes the technique ideal for spying, since the user can simply send a clone to spy on a target, then have the clone disperse itself without returning to pass the information back to the user. It's also useful for training purposes, since the total amount of experience the user gains is multiplied by the total number of clones being used to train. Using it in this manner is far more difficult, however, since a large number of clones are needed to make a significant difference in the training time. It's unclear if other types of clones possess this advantage. Ryoku lost the knowledge of this technique back when he was learning Devil’s Hand from his sensei, Kurute, but over the 2 and a half year time period, he learned about it from the archives in the Hokage’s Mansion.

Users: Uzukmaki Naruto, Sandaime Hokage, Konohamaru, Orochimaru, Uchiha Itachi, Kunokai Rayex, Ryutaro Ryoku, Some Jonin-level ninja

Suna Bunshin (No Rank, Defense or Offense, Supplementary, Short Range, (0-5 meters)

Description: This jutsu creates a clone of the user out of sand. Perhaps the most versatile of all clones, this variant does not disperse when hit. When attacked, the affected area turns back into sand and snags the opponent. Major damage must be caused to actually disperse the clone (destroying its head, for instance); otherwise, it can simply reform.

Users: Gaara, Uchiha Sanoske, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name:

Genjutsu:

Time Stop Jutsu (A-rank, Offense/Defense, Earth, Long Range (10-15 Meters)

Description: Ryoku encases himself in and the opponent with extremely dense sand that makes space begin to collapse. This makes time stop around them for a brief period of time. Ryoku learned this jutsu on his first C-rank mission to Suna. He was experimenting with sand and handsigns and it happened.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku.

Forbidden Jutsu:

Name: Devil’s Hand (S-rank, Offense, Unknown, 0-5 meters)

Description: A jutsu taught by Ryoku’s sensei Kurute. This jutsu forms a big sphere of black purplish chakra that is actually reverse matter. It takes considerable time to charge up, which is a major drawback. It has a 95% chance of destroying anyone that it comes into contact with because of reverse matter it is made of can literally obliterate a person. The Jutsu also shuts down the muscles in Ryoku's body due to him being around such unstable chakra. He is paralyzed for a period of time after using the jutsu. Over a period, Kurute taught Ryoku how to upgrade this jutsu and now he can do it two times a day.

Name: Forenzon (A-Rank, Offense, Fire, Mid Range (5-10 meters)

Description: The demon of fire that resides in Ryoku. It has many abilities that can be used at Ryoku's whim and also gives him he ability to control fire. Kurishen and Forenzon have been fused together to make Yoshitsune, but Ryoku can still call on them at his whim.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Kurishen (A-Rank, Offense, Earth, Mid Range (5-10 meters.)

Description: The demon of sand that resides in Ryoku. It has many abilities that can be used at Ryoku's whim and also gives him the ability to control sand.. Kurishen and Forenzon have been fused together to make Yoshitsune, but Ryoku can still call on them at his whim.

Users: Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sabaku Kyu (No Rank, Offensive, Earth, Short to Mid Range (0-10 meters)

Description: This jutsu uses sand to grab the opponent and cover their entire body. This skill is primarily utilized for rendering an opponent immobile, but can kill the opponent by suffocation or by being followed with the Desert Funeral, which crushes them.

Users: Gaara, Uchiha Sanoske, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sabaku Soso, (No Rank, Offense, Earth, Short to Mid range, (0-10 meters)

Description: After wrapping an opponent with sand, The user will cause the sand to implode and crush whatever is within. When used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time to feel pain. The pressure also produces a sizable fountain of blood. The user can control the pressure used in the attack, which allows him to merely break bones or completely liquefy an opponent.

Users: Gaara, Uchiha Sanoske, Ryutaro Ryoku.
Name: Ryusa Bakuryu (No Rank, Offensive, Earth, All Ranges)

Description: This jutsu creates a massive amount of sand and sends it towards an opponent in the form of a wave, covering and engulfing them in an ocean of sand. In addition to the wave effect of the jutsu, The user can control the sand, allowing him to attack his opponent while they attempt to evade the wave. In practice it is virtually unavoidable. Once completed, it can cover an entire forest in sand. The follow up move is Desert Imperial Funeral, which compresses all the sand present, crushing the opponent. Ryoku learned this from Gaara after he had become Kazekage.

Users: Gaara, Uchiha Sanoske, Ryutaro Ryoku

Name: Sabaku Taiso (No Rank, Offensive, Earth, All Ranges)

Description: After wrapping an opponent with sand, The user will cause the sand to implode and crush whatever is within. When used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time to feel pain. The pressure also produces a sizable fountain of blood. The user can control the pressure used in the attack, which allows him to merely break bones or completely liquefy an opponent.

User: Gaara, Ryutaro Ryoku.

Kekkai Genkai:

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Bio:

Early Childhood: Ryoku was born on January 21st, 11:46 p.m. His parents, Kazuhiko and Akiko Ryutaro, loved their baby boy. At a young age. Ryoku was very upright, loving life and seemed to always be smiling. His father had the Masagoton, a Kekkei Genkai trait that allowed the user to use Sand jutsu. His mother was accomplished with Wind jutsu, but she never taught Ryoku any of her wind jutsu. At age two, his parents had already started to train him on ninjutsu and other forms of jutsu. At age three he could already control the chakra inside him fairly well, but not great, he could not walk on water yet, and he couldn’t run on trees. Hell, he couldn’t even walk very well back then. Though, he could channel his chakra into his feet and hands. Once he was three and a half his father started to teach him how to control sand.

At first, it was very hard. He could not control the sand his father wanted him too. He could lift it up quite a bit, but not very much. His body was exhausted after the first week of doing it almost non-stop and he still had many more weeks of doing this until he got the hang of it. When he was 3 and ¾ old, he finally got the hang of it and his parents sent him into the academy to learn the basics of a ninja. Ryoku did not get along there very well. Everyone seemed to be annoyed by his upright attitude and smile. But, they didn’t hate him as much as a lonely kid in the class, named Gaara. Everyone seemed to be afraid of him. Ryoku didn’t see what the big deal was, he seemed like a nice kid, he had never really heard the kid speak, but he was sure he couldn’t be that bad.

As the next year progressed, Ryoku’s popularity diminished from being sort of annoying, to a hostile that one must avoid at all costs. It seemed every time Ryoku tried to talk to another student, they would walk away or just push him out of the way. Though, he was still smiling at the end of the day. His father had taught him many more ways to control the sand, he even taught him how to make a platform using the sand. Everything seemed to be going alright for Ryoku. His entire life was great, but that’s always what kids think their lives are like, when they are really much worse. Until that one day…that day. On June 20th, the day before the Summer Solstice, Ryoku had proceeded towards the academy. He had felt really bad that day when he got up, but little did he know that this would be the worst day of his life. He had turned five just a few months earlier. It was break time at the academy and he was sitting by himself as usual like he usually did. He stared over at Gaara who was also sitting alone on the swings. Ryoku decided to walk over and say “Hey.” He stood up and walked over to Gaara very slowly. Once he arrived over at him, he smiled brightly. He held his hand out and said, “Hey I’m Ryoku.” Still smiling with his eyes closed, he didn’t see the sand flying under him. The sand pulled him down from his foot. The sand pulled him in and he screamed, he couldn’t think of anything to cut the sand. Then, Gaara held onto another student who was around while Ryoku was getting pulled in. Suddenly, Yasahamaru, Gaara’s caretaker, came in and stopped him from killing them both.

Ryoku was shaken the entire day. He couldn’t get the event out of his head. When he ran home, he quickly went to bed after dinner, he didn’t feel so well. Little did he know that the giant bird creature, Yoshitsune was arising that night out of the desert in the west. The village quickly sealed away the demon for a minute and then Ryoku’s parents agreed to seal the demon inside Ryoku. After they sealed him in with a 3 prong seal, a knock came onto the door. An assassin came for Ryoku, his parents did not know, but the village did. His parents fought off the assassin until he killed them both, impaling his mother with a katana and slitting his fathers throat. Ryoku heard a woman’s screaming and he arose quickly. The assassin had left the scene thinking someone would come and arrest him. Ryoku walked down the stairs, the seal still on his back. As he walked down the stairs he looked in shock as blood stains were on the wall of the dining room. He ran outside of the door looking around the area and he found a trail of blood, ending over at the corner. He ran over to it and stood in shock looking at his two dead parents. His eyes started to water. He looked up and saw Gaara standing there. His eyes widened and a rage fueled his body. A black aura started to form around him. Wings forming out of his shoulders. He flew towards Gaara, his fists clenched in anger and started to kick and punch him in every direction. The attacks did not hit because of two things, one: the sand shield was up, and two: The jonin of the village came and stopped the fight before one of them got hurt. As the fight ended, the bird creature dispersed two versions of himself. A wolf named Kurishen and a lion named Forenzon, these creatures would become Ryoku’s demons for a little while. After that night, He was sent to Konoha with all his things. He was sent to a house and he lived on his own for two years, then he entered the Konoha academy.

Academy Student/ Genin Background:

When Ryoku was seven, he entered the Konoha academy. He didn’t really get many friends for a little while. He was mostly quiet, mourning his dead parents in his thought. He was very sad, but he also wanted revenge against Gaara. At this time he believed that Gaara killed his parents. He was still learning though and he sort of had a smile on his face most of the time. He had cleaned his house up and set everything in place. Everything seemed to be alright with him, just being by himself. That’s until he was eight, when he met his future teammate, best friend and rival, Rayex Kunokai. They met one day in Icharku Ramen. He was trying to put sand inside of Rayex’s ramen, and Rayex swiped his ramen off of the counter. Rayex still owes him a ramen. He started to hang out with Rayex more and more, but he still liked isolation from everyone. Just to think things out. He discovered a creek in the woods a bit behind his house. He always hung out their when he wanted to be alone.

As the years went passed, Ryoku still couldn’t pass the final exams at the academy. It was very hard for him, some of the students had already passed by onto genin status. All he could do was watch them pass by, secretly wishing he would be like that. But, as he reached age 12, his dream came alive. He finally passed through the exams and became a genin. Naruto didn’t though, but the next day, he became a genin. Ryoku had no idea how he did, but he somehow achieved that status. Rayex, Ryoku, and his other friend, Marx were put on Team 5, led by their sensei, Kurute Nagura. Their training was rather…hard for the first part. Team 5 went through many D-rank missions, they were always really easy. But soon, they went on a C-rank mission to Sunagakure. The mission was an escort mission. The mission let Ryoku see his own house and work on his sand jutsu. He also saw Gaara who he watched carefully. He wanted to just go and kill him so bad, but he could not. It was too risky for him, if he killed him, he could get arrested. About a week into the mission, they met a hermit in the village. His name was Sano of the Sand. He didn’t know his real name yet. Rayex and Sano got along very well, that was until Rayex’s father came in and kidnapped Marx. Mukaro Kunokai, Rayex’s father, battled the team and ended up getting killed by his son. After that happened, Team 5 separated, Marx went off with this girl named Merin, Rayex went with Sano, and Ryoku went with Kurute, but right after Ryoku and Kurute went back to Konoha, Kurute went missing!

A week after they arrived back in Konoha, the Chuunin exams began. The night before the exams began. Sano, Rayex and Ryoku met a missing-nin…well really, only Sano and Rayex did, Ryoku was in a tree. The next day, Ryoku passed the written exams with “ease.” That night, Ryoku was sitting on top of his house. He was thinking about the day and years in the past. But soon, he started to feel a horrible pain in his chest. He clenched onto it for as long as he could, but he soon passed out in a horrible yell with black chakra forming all around him. Kurishen and Forenzon fused together, and created Yoshitsune. The bird, however, did not reveal himself until after the second exam, The forest of death. For the most part, he had not been with his team for the entire forest, but he managed to catch up with them right before they entered the temple. Yoshitsune revealed himself once he entered the temple. He showed off Yoshitsune’s full power when he battled Kabuto Yakushi. After the final battles were decided, Ryoku’s sensei Kurute came back…that is, until he left again to go on a mission. He decided to go on a mission too, on one account. Ryoku started to have some terrible dreams, about his parents, they were getting killed by some man, with blood red eyes. He decided to go get some answers in Suna. He took some cargo to Suna on his mission and spent a few days in his old house. Taking a photo of his parents and himself. He went to the Council of Elders and they told him the true story of that night. A man named, Daisuke Kishimoto, came and killed them because he wanted Yoshitsune. Fueled by rage and sadness, he stood up and ran out of the door. He ran as fast as he could out of Suna, his eyes watering horribly. He ran out of the village and then started to curse everything in the world, the area around him was plagued with darkness from the aura exhaling from his body.

Ryoku went through the rest of the month period almost never speaking. He trained with Rayex and he taught him how to use the basic three Uchiha jutsu, in exchange for him perfecting his sand jutsu. As the finals came along, Ryoku’s match was delayed. He didn’t get to fight at all he just sat there. His fight was cut off by the Destruction of Konoha that was going to take place. Orochimaru was taking place as the Yondaime Kazekage, the real Kazekage had been dead for a month. He had been unconscious for most of the fight. Temari had smacked him in the back of the head with her fan and he received a giant bump in the back of his head. But he still woke up and fought for the rest of the fight, until Orochimaru fled from the scene. But not all was great, because with victory came a loss. The loss of the Sandaime Hokage.

The next day, the entire village arrived for the funeral of the Sandaime Hokage. Ryoku watched Konohamaru and Asuma, they had lost a relative. He could imagine how bad they felt, but everything seemed to be alright for a little while. Everyone was very happy and they all were helping each other rebuild the village.

A few months later, Rayex had decided to leave the village to go and kill his brother. He didn’t think he really needed to go and that he would die in the process of battling him, so he challenged Rayex. Ryoku just barely won, just by getting up before him and he proceeded to go and fall over unconscious in Konoha. About two days later, Ryoku woke up in a hospital bed with the sun shining in his face. Rayex had already left, he didn't know where he had went, if he was going to go. Hopefully he wasn't going to battle his brother, or Ryoku's efforts would have been for nothing. Ryoku decided to just go on with his regular life, but then he was transferred over to a two man team with Ditonke Hotsuke on his team.

2 and a half year arc:

After leaving the hospital, Ryoku proceeded home and sat on his bed looking out his window for at least an hour. He was thinking about his team, his team had been destroyed, his team was finished, scattered away. He went on a couple missions with all of his other fellow genin class. They were rather nice to him, considering his team, like Naruto’s was scattered. He also hung out with Ditonke quite a bit. Though, once Naruto left to train with Jiraiya, the Toad Sage, he started to hang out at the Hokage mansion. He needed to get Ino’s attention, who had just started to train with the Godaime Hokage, just like Sakura. He would often talk to her while she wasn’t training, but it was a bad idea to mess with her after training.

When he was fourteen, Gaara was promoted up to Kazekage of the sand village. Ryoku wanted to attend, since he was a former Suna ninja. After the coronation, he wanted to speak with Gaara personally. Once he went to his office, Ryoku apologized for all of the bad things he thought about Gaara. Gaara accepted his apology and Ryoku decided to stay a few days. He studied the archives for a bit, studying on Daisuke. He also trained with Gaara for a little while when he didn’t have any work to do. He enjoyed his time in Suna, but it wasn’t a great trip thanks to his sudden depression when he was alone, wanting to kill Daisuke as fast as possible.

As time progressed, he went back to Konoha. Still doing missions with Ditonke and hanging out with Ino, the same stuff. He had not seen much of Kurute lately, though. He had been training by himself for a long time. He had not done much since Rayex left, the same old stuff. He usually sat in his room, or he strolled around the village, looking for some to talk to, or he went on missions. But really, the team missions that everyone would do together had faded after Naruto left. He kept the spirit in those missions, you could say.

As time passed, Ryoku and Ino fell in love with each other, leading to a night of great proportions. (you know what I'm talking about XD >_> And no I'm not a damn pervert, I've had this going in my head for a while.) Leading to something shocking. Ino was pregnant. Put into grief, he fell into a severe depression. He did not know what to do, he couldn't earn enough money to pay for supplies for the kid. He just could not think of one thing, until he came to a conclusion that he just could not stay in the village, he was ashamed of what he did, and in his pursuit of Daisuke, he was just endangering the kid.

So he prepared a note and then set himself off to Ino's house to set the letter and then leave Konoha to go to Suna to find the location of Daisuke. As he set the letter on her nightstand after he had jumped in through her window, he stared around her room, and then over at her door, wondering how her father would feel about her and their child once she told him, and how he would feel about how he had abandoned her and his child. It was just something he had to do. He brushed her hair off her face and then kissed her on the forehead, and leaving these final words. "I will return, one day."

He then retired to the Hokage Mansion, setting a letter to Tsunade as well, showing his resignation from the village of Konoha, and also writing that he might be back one day. Then he was off on the three day trip to Sunagakure, hoping to finish off the monster that had been tearing at his heart for most his entire life. On the way to Suna, he found Daisuke standing in the middle of the woods. He fought him, quickly changing into his demon form, and clawing at his his body until he was down, then he used a charged Devil's Hand to blow a hole throught out his chest. And for one last pain to put on his dead body, he took out his Naginata and stabbed him through the face, then cut his head off of his body and said, "That should be enough, now you know how I felt my entire life." and as he walked away, he remembered the letter. "And one more thing...don't you ever call my mom a bitch...as if you can."

The next two decades was spent at Suna, in a house that he had bought with his own money. He would write to Ino weekly, hoping to get an answer, but nothing ever came back to him, it was kind of heartbreaking, that his only love would reject him life this, but then again he couldn't blame her, no one would want to write to someone that abandoned them and and their child, to care for it on her own, with maybe some assistance from her father. A couple of years later, he heard of a new village, called the Dawn Village. Growing tired of his current setting, he wanted to see something new. A few days later, he once again left another one of his home villages, and went off to join something entirely new. Right now, Ryoku resides in the Dawn Village, knowing that a couple of the people that he knows live there, alot of which he does not, but still today, he still lives by his word, making sure that he never forgets those final two words. "One day..."

Extra: Ryoku’s parents names are Kazuhiko and Akiko Ryutaro. (Both Deceased) He was born on January 21st, oh and he has a demon bird living inside of him. Nothing to strange about that.

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Battle Song: Kick Some Ass- Stroke 9 (doesn't have anything to do with Ryoku, just think that song is perfect for a battle song XDDD)

Ryoku and Ino theme: The Art of Breaking- Thousand Foot Krutch

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The ninja ran as fast as looking at a building that could be seen at least a mile away for Avin. The ninja’s eyes were a white color and you could see veins around his eyes. It seemed that the shinobi, Avin was using Byakugan and was looking at the Leaf Village which he started to see more of every second. He continued to look in every direction using his Byakugan trying to find any people that would ambush them. Two shinobi seemed to be following Avin but they weren’t attacking them so they were probably allies. Avin holding his arms back holding a scroll in one hand and his head band with the sign of the Leaf Village on it in his other hand.

Suddenly Avin stopped then looked to his left he started to wonder if he saw something in the trees but most likely it was just an animal. He looked back at his team mates then signaled them to follow him again. “Guys lets continue we are almost there.” He said in a commanding voice. He focused chakra into his feet and what looked like a blue aura surrounding his feet but it was chakra. He quickly started to run again but this time he was much quicker than last time which was from focusing the chakra. His teammates quickly did the same thing so they could still see Avin.

Avin was the first one to be at the village gates and seeing that he didn’t have his head band are they stopped him from entering. He showed it and continued on his way but started to walk. He put his head band back on so that wouldn’t happen again and then Avin stopped at a ramen shop so he could get a good snack after a day. They presented his food the same as always and Avin ate it the same way as always which was slow so he could enjoy the taste. He slurped some of the juice from the bottom of the bowl and continued eating his food.

Seconds later the two other jounin from his team appeared behind him. It seemed as if they had been angry for some reason and Avin quickly laughed a little and put some money on the table and walked out heading towards what seemed to be the Hokage’s Building. People waved at them and Avin waved back but didn’t stop walking for a few seconds looking around the area. The Leaf Village wasn’t at its best state since the Hokage died. He walked up the stairs and into a room knocking on the door. Avin put the scroll on the table and walked away without saying a word. Avin looked at Konoha as it seemed so beautiful.

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It was still early morning, yet Toruma was feeling as if the day was almost over. He had been up nearly the entire night, but felt no real reason to be tired. He'd taken a soldier pill a few minutes earlier, but even that wasn't actually needed. Not much of his chakra had been used, and he had learned years ago to conserve energy to stay awake for extremely long periods of time. His thoughts wandered back to Konoha, and his many years there, but also even further back to his time in Kumo as a child the second time around, and how dramatically his life had changed since then.

"Hear my voice and go forth." It was so simple a thought that Toruma was having.

The sun was beaming down on his face, though the dense forest around the Dawn Village was not unfamiliar. Years before, when his "sister" Tomie was actually still alive this place had been the location of the Dark Village, and as Daaku he remembered the layout like the back of his hand, the many memories fresh in his mind as if they happened days earlier. There was no one in the courtyard, but for the time being there wasn't supposed to be. Toruma was waiting for Kisuke. he hadn't seen much of his "Grandson", and there was no doubt, that he would be shocked beyond belief that Toruma was in fact "Daaku Raito", but none other than a select few knew of this, not including his son.

"Beyond the gate lies shifting redemption." These things were even more painful than Toruma expected.

Toruma floated directly down to the courtyard, and stared at the fountain to the left of the Dawn Palace gates. it was quite the pretty sight, but at this point in time Toruma was feeling deep sorrow for what he had done in the past, but there was no way to turn back now, and the secrets of his past, and what they guarded was keeping all he did valid. "I just hope that Kisuke doesn't come to hate me after this. I should have told him before, but he was so young then. He has grown strong and mastered his dojutsu just as his parents, and I did at young ages." He sighed, and sat in the air with his legs crossed, his pitch black eyes showing nothing more than the abyss...............

"The legacy lives on, yet they know not of the swarm."

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OOC: Hotaru, and Felix let's hope we can stand against the Dawn Village and win.

IC: The sun shined brightly through the forest. The sound of battle was in the air. Two foolish ninja thought they could invade Konoha just because it was losing ninja and strength. This wasn't the case though. Powerful ninja still lived in Konoha and these two were facing one of the strongest, Raito Arashi. Arashi was completely serious about this whole fight since they had threatened his village.

Arashi dashed forward and one of the ninja swung at Arashi quickly. He ducked under it and used a sweeping low kick to the ninja's legs, knocking him off his feet. He then suddenly disappeared from view, reappearing on the branch of a tree. "You guys are daed." Arashi said seriously and he brought both his hands together behind his back.

Energy began to charge in the plams of his hands. "Senhappa Wave." Arashi said as he brought his hands forward, unleashing a ball propelled by a beam of energy. It hit one of the ninja, sending him flying into a tree. His clothes were ripped, and he died only a second later from the senhappa wave. Arashi's eyes then turned to the second ninja. Controlling the darkness, the ninja's shadow began crawling up the ninja until it reached his neck. Suddenly several spikes flew into the ninja's neck, killing him instantly.

"Now to return back to the village." Arashi said as he made his way back to Konoha. It only took him a couple seconds to reach Konoha's gates and he walked in as if nothing happened.

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Avin smiled looking at Konoha. He then noticed a fight going on outside of the village but it seemed under control but he didn’t know who was even fighting. He did the first thing he could think of which was rushing their as fast as he could. Jumping from building to building to trying to be unseen since people would be worrying if an ANBU was rushing somewhere. He stopped checking again with his Byakugan if he could see who the people fighting were.

The fight seemed unfair to Avin two against one but sometime people have to do that. He noticed one of the ninjas quickly since it was Arashi one of Avin’s friends. Then he saw two Dawn Village ninja from the look of it they were probably Chuunin from their abilities. By the time Avin would get there it would be over so he quickly just waited at the gates for Arashi to finish. Avin laughed alittle after seeing Arashi take down the two ninjas easy. “That is sad if the Dawn Village is going to bring two people to attack a Jounin bring decent ninja at least.”

Avin said to himself. He started to walk then saw both ninjas drop dead which Avin didn’t mind since he was use to seeing people getting killed. Avin continued to walk over checking their bodies for anything he then looked at Arashi who had entered the city. “Hey Arashi! You had to kill the guys I don’t mind but it would have been smarter to get some information out of them.” Avin said then following Arashi. Avin looked at the two dead shinobi one more time and how it would be when a real war happened.

People started to look at Avin since he was an ANBU he looked back at them but didn’t say a word. Avin looked at the busy village then remembered when he was like that. The Genin all running around for trying to become Chuunin or learn something new to become the strongest. All Avin could do really was give a small laugh since he was like that too and becoming a Chuunin wasn’t as easy as you thought even though Avin became one at a young age. He then looked at Arashi asking,” how has it been?” He then waited for a answer.

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Hotaru jumped from one branch to another. Many thoughts and memories raced through his mind. Of his past with his team. At the moment, Hotaru was racing to Konoha, with words from the Raikage. 'Nothing.' he thought. Hotaru missed the constant babbling of his father when he was alive. After the death of his father, Hotaru had matured a lot. "I'll kill the both of you." He whispered, speaking of his brothers. He sighed, and then laughed. "Look at me, sounding just like Sasuke." He said, jumping to the next branch.

Hotaru looked forward, to see a fight. He was almost to the village, traveling for about three days. "Arashi." He said, noticing by the attack. He stopped in the tree just above Arashi. "Now to return back to the village." Hotaru looked a bit ahaid of him. "Konoha...hadn't been there in a while." He whispered. Hotaru jumped to the next tree, keeping his distance from Arashi. Hotaru entered the gates of Konoha just moments after Arashi. ” How has it been?” Hotaru stood on the rooftop of a building. Someone was speaking to Arashi. He then jumped down next to Arashi, facing the opposite way. "Been a while. See you still know the Senhappa. Last time I saw that by you is when I used mine on you." He said in a whisper. "But that's all behind us now." He said with a smile.

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Ooc: Hidden Dawn Village all the way!!!

The dawn approached.

Lifting his head from the pillow, the dawn nin woke up with with yawn. Rubbing his eyes and relieving them of the crust, he opened both eyes which were sterling silver. The expression on his face was pretty drowsy as he'd had a hard time getting to sleep. Eyes barely open, sliding off to the side he looked over at the clock and noted that it was really early. Staring the day now wouldn't be that much of a hassle for him so he turned his head off to the table near the kitchen and went to get some breakfast. With yet another yawn, he moved to the distinct part of the room and sat down for some breakfast. A piece of toast, eggs, sausage and two short stacks. This was something uplifting in aroma as is chef material came from the unorthodox classes at the academy.

"Time to start the day..." The dawn nin yawned.

Finishing off the breakfast he had before him, he smiled and moved the the bathroom where he had a quick shower. Stepping out he got dressed, pulling out black pants, silver undershirt, beneath that a fishnet shirt, over it all a black jacket with short cut sleeves, and a popped up collar styled with the symbols of two clans, Raito and Kunokai emblems overlapping on his back. On the top of his head, were silver lends shades and the hidden dawn headband over his head. Reaching down in the corner he placed his black katana to his side as it did belong to his father. Setting out the door, he locked it behind him and lifted his vision loosely over to the Dawn Kage's mansion.

"Such a marvel of beauty and also peaceful." he said with a sigh.

With a swift leap, he hopped up on the buildings of the village scaling the rooftops, the thought of his father in his head seemed to plague him. To witness it...and only be a genin, it was enough to really rattle a person. The young one tried to shake off the edge to the side and smile as he sat on the roof of a local building only slightly taller and near the front gates. Laughing it off, he cleared his mind and sat with his legs folding smiling and staring down.
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Toruma wasn't sure how much time had passed, he may have drifted off to sleep, but wasn't sure. The large clock tower was facing the other side from where Toruma was located, but this was not a problem. Seeing directly through the stone, Toruma easily found out what time it was, and saw that only about 15 minutes had passed, since his serene moments had began. He felt much better now, but was becoming a bit annoyed that Kisuke was so late. It really was no surprise to him though, tardiness was more than a normal thing for the young ninja. "He really needs t get here before I......", he closed his mouth, as a young man landed on the roof of a nearby building. Of course it was none other than his "grandson"

"I sure hope this isn't too much on him, but he needs to informed, before it's too late to go back."

With a high jump, Toruma landed on a roof several yards away from Kisuke, and then simply flew across the small gap to where Kisuke was sitting. He looked peaceful at the time, and Toruma was willing to bet that the news he had would more than make Kisuke freak out, but then with the mind that his "grandson" had, he might be able to deal with it much easier than most would take it. He sat next to the boy and sighed.................."Kisuke there is something I need to tell you. I am not who you think I am." He paused as he stared ahead.

It was harder than he thought to speak about the matter. "I know that you haven't seen much of Daaku, and that your father was very close to him and all, obviously, yet there is something you don't know." He touched Kisuke's shoulder. "I am Daaku and this body you see is nothing more than the curse of a jutsu that keeps my soul alive as time passes on. There is much about the jutsu that I'd rather not explain, but I can tell you that the battle that killed Rayex, is most likely my fault." Tears ran down Toruma's face, and he could not even look at Kisuke...............
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Name:Hakumei Myou Tomoshibi

Age:45

Personality: Hakumei is basically what most people would classify as ‘the strong silent type’. He’s not the one to just throw out random and useless words and comments, he will only join real conversations, or speak when confronting or being confronted by an enemy, or if he is bringing up a matter of importance, but for the most part, most of it stays inside. He can however be quite cold to those that act out of pure stupidity, or to those that he dislikes, even to those that he cares about. It’s just in his nature to do so. At times, he could be rather cocky, especially to other ninja. This was one of the few ways that he ever had fun in his life.

It is very rare to see Hakumei in great anger, or show strong emotions towards something for that matter. The only things that are able to draw out his true feelings, be it anger, sorrow, agitation, aggravation, whatever it may be, are his enemies, and those he cares for. There are very few things that finds worth living for, though. The only things he really believes in this cold, sinful world is justice, loyalty, trust, peace, friends, and family. Other than that, he doesn’t care for much else. He used to be a carefree, fun loving guy, but his heart has hardened over the years, and it’s only getting harder as time moves on.

When in battle, Hakumei keeps himself calm and collected, so as not to make any stupid mistakes, no matter how small they may be. If ever thrown into a berserk rage during battle, he is merciless in his actions, and may even possibly be on the verge of borderline psychotic, though one has to drive his emotions over the edge for this to happen.

Village: Originally from the Hidden Stone Village

Ninja Rank: S-Class

Appearance:

Weapons:

He carries twin katanas, and average sized shurikens, nothing really out of the ordinary. He carries the occasional smoke bomb every now and then.

Side: Unknown

Clan/Bloodline: The Uchiha Clan: Being connected to the Uchiha bloodline, Hakumei has inherited the Sharingan eyes, the eyes which all of the Uchiha are born with.

Extra: Missing-Nin

Bio: He was found as a baby, left and abandoned outside the Village Hidden in the Stone. The babe was found by Tsuchikage Tomoshibi, helpless and sobbing, while he was out taking a stroll through the village. Seeing no tracks that led to, or away from this crying child, the Tsuchikage knew he should take it into the village. Though the man wasn’t exactly known for a warm heart, he wasn’t cruel enough to leave a baby out to die in the dry heat of the land.

Finding no one that would take the child, Tsuchikage Tomoshibi took it upon himself to raise the boy like his own, and teach him the ways of the Ninja as he grew of age. Until then though, he cared for him, fed him, clothed him, put a roof over his head, he did all that he could for the babe. He named the boy Hakumei Myou Tomoshibi, giving him his last name as well. For the rest of the infants childhood, he would be under the safe protection of the Tsuchikage of the Village Hidden in the Stone.

As the years passed by and Hakumei grew old enough to finally begin training as a ninja, he was placed in the academy to begin his journey as a student in training. Tshuchikage Tomoshibi noticed something very peculiar about Hakumei in only the first month of his time at the academy. The boy seemed to learn things much quicker than all the other students, and learned the required Genjutsu far faster than anyone in his class. Anything that was taught to him, seemed to latch onto his brain in such a way that he would never forget it, no matter how long it had been since he had heard it. Tomoshibi had seen intelligent, advanced students before, but nothing quite like this.

One day after a day at the academy, and Hakumei was not but several yards away from his house, with his ‘father’ waiting outside, he caught a glimpse of something up on top of the roof of his home. Almost as if out of nowhere, three ninja came from above, their weapons drawn, and seemed to have the full intent of killing Tsuchikage Tomoshibi. Hakumei had just enough time to pull out a shuriken to strike the one in the middle, which alerted Tomoshibi of the danger above him. The one that Hakumei had hit, which seemed to be their leader, caught sight of him. The thought of being hit by an academy angered the assassin, enough so for him to use Ninjutsu on the brat.

The man got into a stance which made him seem as though he was going to sprint. Suddenly, the man seemed to disappear. This caused Hakumei to panic a little. Just as Tomoshibi was finishing the other two killers, he looked over to see if Hakumei was alright. He saw that the boy seemed to be frightened by something, and as he glanced the area, he could tell why. The assassin seemed to have executed a Body Flicker Technique. No Pre-Genin ninja could possibly avoid a jutsu such as that. Feeling as though Hakumei was going to die, the old man struggled to kill of the two ninja that were trying their best to end his life. However, he failed to notice the red glimmer in the young boy’s eyes…

The lead assassin reappeared from the Body Flicker Technique, quickly unsheathing his blades as he did so, intending to end the Hakumei’s life. Any normal academy student would have reacted to slowly, and have been killed. Hakumei however, dodged the swipe just as it came for him. Not expecting an young brat to maneuver out of such a simple attack, his guard was left open. Hakumei got out of his panicked place of mind, and hit the man several times with a roundhouse kick. Straight afterwards, as if he had done it a hundred times before, he used the Body Flicker Technique, and sped around to the back of the man, and managed to stab the man in the spine with several shuriken, causing him to go into a paralysis like state.

Hakumei took both blades from the man, and stabbed him through the chest on either side. This ended his life there and then. He decided to keep the blades, in order to protect himself from anything like this that happened in the future. Tomoshibi had finally taken down the assassinators, and ran over to his ‘son’. He was worried sick about him, though not wanting to get to emotional, he just kept asking him things such as “Are you alright?” and things like that. The thing he was most curious about though, was how Hakumei had managed to avoid the man’s blades. He should have died, if anything, not dodged it. As he tried figuring out this mystery, he was drawn to the boys eyes, which looked different than they ever had.

They were a blood red, with the same black insignia in both eyes. This was how he did. This boy was no ordinary boy, he had something that very few people had in this world; the Sharingan eyes, an exclusive genetic trait known only to the Uchiha clan. Now the pieces were finally starting to come together.

Tomoshibi spilled out the secret of Hakumei’s past. The boy finally knew that he had been abandoned as a baby, and that the old man had found him on the ground, helpless as any babe would be. He told him how he was able to get out of the killer’s way so quickly, at least at the low level that he was, he told him of the clan that he was really connected too, the clan that had apparently left him to die. This was all such a shock to Hakumei, it was a lot to take in at one moment. Not wanting to have the name of a family who had given him up, a family who didn’t love him, he kept the name of his trainer, his friend, the father in his life… Tomoshibi.

The years at the academy went by quickly, and Hakumei graduated with the highest marks in the class. After that, he started training as hard as he could, all day, sometimes all night, preparing for only one thing: The Chunnin Exam. After long months of harsh, intense training with Tomoshibi, he was finally ready for the exam. Though it was a challenge, seeing as how there were dozens of ninja entering, many skilled with their own unique style, Hakumei managed to pass exceptionally well, and finally took on the title of Chunnin at the age of twelve.

Many more years went by, and through that time, he had copied many different kinds of Jutsu, even ones as high as A-Rank. By the age of twenty, he had earned the title of Jonin. Hakumei was so skilled, that Tomoshibi referred him to the ANBU. However, as much of an honor as that was to Hakumei, he found no interest in it. It just wasn’t his kind of thing. Instead, he led the B and A-Ranked missions at his village.

Also during this time, Tomoshibi taught Hakumei the Jutsu's Chirdori and Rasengan. Though it took several months to perfect them, Hakume managed to execute them quite well. Also during this Jutsu practice, Tomoshibi began a long, harsh, brutal training course that would push Hakumei passed his limits. It would all be for the best in the end though. Once the young man knew how to survive, even when pressed way passed his limits, that would be the key in helping him to achieve the S-Class... and one step closer to becoming a well renowned ninja.

After months of severe training with Sensei Tsuchikage, the old man felt he was ready to be deemed the honor of S-Class. It was very rare for a ninja to reach that rank as such a young age, but Tomoshibi felt that the boy had unimaginable potential, and it only felt right to grant him this incredible honor. Right after doing so, Hakumei joined the first S-Rank mission he could get his hands on.

When he got back home from his mission, he found Tomoshibi beheaded in his chair. This caused Hakumei to pour out his heart in tears, then he turned it hard as stone, turning a cold shoulder to the world. It was then that he struck out on his own, trying to find the one who murdered such a great man. Over the years, he accomplished many great things, assassinated many corrupted ninja, claimed victory in all of the missions that he took on. What really spread his name though, was the rumors of his connection to the Uchiha clan, and most importantly, his Sharingan eyes.

Not much is known about him, most of the time he keeps to himself. There are those very rare people that he opens up to, but besides them, he doesn't say a whole lot. Twenty five years later, he is still wandering from Nation to Nation, trying to find the murderous heathen who stole his Sensei's life away. He has collected a vast amount of information on the man. The man who killed Tsuchikage Tomoshibi, is none other than a descendant of the horrific Ninja, Orochimaru. Now he searches the land for information... and a man with the resemblance to a snake...

(Sloppy bio, I know, but I just wanted to get the bloody thing OVER with XD)

Jutsu:

Tai Jutsu

D Rank:

Dynamic Entry: Throws something towards his enemy to distract them (shurikens, sometimes even one of his katanas), then quickly executes a flying jump kick and nails them in the head (most of the time).

Leaf Gale: Performs a spinning kick and sweeps the enemy off their feet

Piercing Fang: He spins at ferocious speeds and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks on the target.

C Rank:

Leaf Great Whirlwind: This jutsu involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first.

Shadow of the Dancing Leaf: While the target is airborne, the user jumps in such a way as to appear below the target while following a similar trajectory through the air. Since the victim is airborne, he is in a vulnerable position to a more damaging attack.

B Rank:

Front Lotus: The first chakra gate must be opened in order to perform this technique. When that is done, he kicks the enemy into the air, and performs Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, he wraps the opponent into a bear hug, and pile drives them into the ground, often killing the opponent if they are not strong enough.

A Rank:

None

S Rank:

Blades of Blood: Four of the Eight chakra gates must be opened in order to begin this jutsu. Once this is done, Hakumei begins his assault on the enemy. In a matter of seconds, he makes one hundred swipes with his katana’s upon the enemy, though he does not slice through them, he merely gives them deep cuts, causing them to bleed to the extreme. If they victim is not treated quickly enough, they will die of blood loss.

Other Taijutsu:

Eight Trigrams Empty Palm: The palm is thrusted at the opponent, and expels a large burst of chakra. This violently pushes the enemy away.

Leaf Rising Wind: Using speed and agility, Hakumei executes a swift, upwards kick at the opponent or the weapon they are carrying.

Intercepting Technique: He is able to intercept and counter an oncoming taijutsu technique by raising the knee, and driving the elbow downwards at the same time. This catches the attacking limb between his two limbs, and drives the elbow down with great force, effectively shattering the bone.

Peregine Falcon Drop: Hakumei grabs a falling opponent by their ankles, wraps his legs around their wais, and drives them head first into the ground.


Ninjutsu

E Rank:

Body Replacement Technique: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Cloak of Invisibility: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.

Rope Escape Technique: This jutsu allows Hakumei to free himself if he has been tied up.

Transformation Technique: This jutsu allows him to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu.

D Rank:

Hiding Mist Technique: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

Earth Release: Inner Decapitation Technique: Hakumei emerges from the ground below the target area, and pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. (Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique is needed to accomplish this)

C Rank:

Earth Release: Split Earth Turn Around Palm: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them.

Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique: Using this jutsu, Hakumei can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent.

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique: Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is produced when the user exhales in a style similar to fire breathing. The user places one hand close to the mouth, igniting the air by mixing the breath with the chakra in the hand.

Manipulating Attack Blades: This jutsu allows the user to control and manipulate blades (metal weapons) with chakra

Wind Release: Great Breakthrough: This jutsu sends out a powerful explosion of wind from the user's location, easily leveling anything in its path. A variation of this technique involves a smaller blast of wind that gets ignited with flame, making it stronger and more damaging to the target.

B Rank:

Earth Release: Earth Mausoleum Dumpling: He is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling-shaped chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flattening everything in its path.

Earth Release: Earth Style Wall: Hakumei spits out a stream of mud that quickly grows and solidifies into a strong, protective wall.

Shadow Clone Technique: Hakumei can make dozens of solid clones, though the more he creates, the more chakra he needs to distribute to all of the clones. His chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person.

Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique: Using this jutsu, the Hakumei creates a huge current of water in the form of a serpentine dragon and directs it towards a target. The water used to create the dragon must be present to perform the technique. This technique usually requires 44 hand signs, but because of Hakumei’s intense training, he has brought it down to a point where he only needs four hand signs to accomplish this, which is only three hand signs more than the Third Hokage’s one.

Water Release: Water Encampment Wall: This jutsu creates a water barrier to protect the user from any offensive attacks. There must be water in the area in order for this to work

A-Rank:

Chidori: This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into Hakumei’s arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to many birds chirping, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes an electric crackling sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything; as such it is usually fatal to the enemy. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces.

This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows the enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, Hakumei is able to avoid the drawback because of his Sharingan eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to a few times a day. Hakumei can execute the jutsu about six times a day. Should the user attempt to go beyond their limit, all of their chakra will be drained and their very life force could go along with it, killing them. An additional problem, though not necessarily a debilitating one, is the fact that the large amount of chakra can also injure the user's hand if they put too much force into the attack.

Clone Great Explosion: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.

Rasengan: The Rasengan requires no hand seals to perform, instead relying entirely on the chakra control of the user. Once Hakumeicreates a stable Rasengan, however, it becomes self-sustaining, so the user does not need to provide any more chakra after forming it. The force of the spinning chakra grinds into whatever it touches, causing major damage. The force of the attack also causes significant internal injury. Hakumei can also release the spinning chakra, creating a violent explosive force at the point of contact. The one drawback of the Rasengan, if it can be considered as such, is that it requires great chakra control. Of course, this is no problem for Hakumei, for he has been gone through extreme training for that such thing. It can be a problem if some force is disrupting the user's ability to mold chakra. Unlike the Chidori, there is no definite limit to the amount of times this technique can be used in a day. Because it uses far less chakra in comparison, it doesn't carry the same over-use risk as the Chidori, either.

Secret Healing Wound Destruction: Hakumei can concentrate his chakra to a prepared area on his body and begin regenerating the moment the targeted area becomes damaged. Unlike normal healing, this can actually restore dead cells.

Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique: This jutsu is used to fire a massive spiraling blast of water at an opponent.

Swords of the Elements: With the right amount of chakra, Hakumei is able to infuse either the elements of Fire, Lightning, Water, Earth, Wind, Darkness, or Light into his blades. There must be some trace of the actual element in order for it to work, though.

S-Rank:

Lightning Blade: This jutsu is an enhanced form of the Chidori, and has the same, but more powerful effect. This jutsu requires a larger amount of chakra and better chakra control. This is exemplified in their respective appearances. Whereas the Chidori creates a large mass of chakra in one hand that appears near-white, the Lightning Blade is considerably more concentrated and appears in the normal blue color of chakra. He can only use this three times in any given day. He can perform this with both hands simultaneously, but is only able to do so twice a day.

Other Ninjutsu:

Armor of Sand: Hakumei can cover himself in a compacted layer of sand, providing an additional defense should his Shield of Sand fail. Though quite effective, maintaining the armor requires a large amount of chakra and stamina.

Grat Ball Rasengan: This is simply a larger and more powerful version of the Rasengan, but also more unstable. Hakumei needs a clone to form and control the energy.

Technique Neutralize: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.

Personal/Forbidden Jutsu

Rasengan Ultima:: This version of Rasengan was created by Hakumei himself, and has been working on this Jutsu for many, many years. This jutsu is one of the most powerful, and most difficult to do correctly. At least five clones are needed to execute this safely without killing himself. It is also necessary to have that many in order to draw out the Rasengan’s true power (for this JUTSU, not the Rasengan itself, so for those who are obssessed about detail, don't get your shorts in a knot). This form of Rasengan consumes so much of his chakra, that if he were to try to do this with a limited amount of clones, he would besically be committing suicide. Chakra from people of the same level as Hakumei is needed