Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds - Page 83

~~Tragic Fall~~ · 04/21/08, 09:24 PM

Altoran looked back at Jailtin, Raem and Sotrec. He then smiled and laughed a little. He put a hand on his father's shoulder.

"I think I will knock again." said Altoran. He summoned up all of the strength he had aquired from being a demon and the strength he recieved from being half-reaver, and reached back. He then punched the door as hard as he could.

**Chosen Again** · 04/22/08, 02:55 AM

A few scorpions fell into the sun from the shadows and quickly scurried back to the living floor of scorpions on the inside. There was an unearthly sort of hissing coming from each of them. The all seemed agitated from the large slabs of wood that had flown into the darkness with them.

As one the scorpions cleared out of the way. Making a large path many pinched and pushed at each other but eventually they stood still. Jailtin seemed unsurprised by this but there was a definite undertone to his out calmness that betrayed the emotions that raged inside. His skin crawled remembering the scorpions. He remembered the darkness. The pain. And the venom.

A large shadows stirred from inside. It could be roughly described as the size of a bear. The scorpions adjusted a bit as the shadow passed. The shadow came closer and closer to the light until two orange eyes could be seen. The scorpion's tail was raised in defense of it's home. It was ready to strike.

( Let me point out that this scorpion would not be easily killed as The armor of the Giant Scorpion is the hardest substance in this world.)

**Stavvy** · 04/22/08, 03:14 AM

Stavros took a step back as the scorpions ran into the light, and scurried away. There were too many of them to count, if he cared to, which he didn't.

His blade of death found its way in his hands before he knew it. Two orange globes appeared from the darkness, and out came much larger version of the other animals. This is just great. . . He waited, watching the creature's movements, ready to parry whatever it threw at him. He looked at the others - who were just a pace or two ahead of him - to see what they'd do.

Candy Man · 04/22/08, 03:50 AM

Sotrec was getting tired of being on a team. Actually, he was just starting to hate people in general. They rushed to quickly into things, the ones he had to deal with anyway.

He unraveled himself and silently entered the room. As he reformed, he stepped on a scorpion. It was no bigger than his thumb, but it remained unharmed. If this is how protected these ones are. He looked at the large pair of glowing eyes in front of them, joined by six near-invisible points of the same light. What can go against that?

**Chosen Again** · 04/22/08, 03:57 AM

The scorpion's eyes remained on Sotrec constantly. It's tail darted forward in feints. trying to catch him off guard. Finally it swiped a claw at Sotrec with a loud hiss.

Jailtin watched as Sotrec attempted to do battle with what looked to be the king of the nest. The thing was armored like a tank. He shook his head. "Sotrec! You're not doing any good in there!!"

~~Tragic Fall~~ · 04/22/08, 02:09 PM

"Damn.......all I did was knock!" yelled Altoran as he dodged one the regular scorpion's stingers. His shadow changed into a shadow sword as he ran towards the king scorpion. He jumped into the air and aimed a slash at the scorpion.

"Lets see how you like this, you stupid bug!" yelled Altoran as the slash hit the king scorpion. It made a scratch on the armor.....but it didn't pierce it. Altoran backed away from the monster and turned to Jailtin.

"Shadows won't help much here, Dad." said Altoran sounding slightly worried.

Candy Man · 04/22/08, 11:12 PM

Sotrec ducked and weaved away fom the beast's tail and claws. There wasn't a blow that he could land on it.

He quickly turned his head, barely missed by the scorpion's posionous barb. It's learning. Before he could move, it came back. This time for his chest. He caught the stinger in his hand. Nothing with this sort of brute strength would have a powerful toxin The spike was lodged like stigmata and down into his wrist.

He felt his heart through his ears. Sotrec was swirling ina sea of color and sound. The beast grabbed his middle in it's claw. He coughed and spat more blood. His strength wa sapping away.

He was wrong about the poison, but he was right about this. He took another knife and stabed it where the claw and it's arm met. In the gap, was the creature's only bridge.

It let him down, out of reflex, but it would have been smart otherwise. Seeing his chance, he stabbed it again. This time, in it's left eye.

~~Miss Murder~~ · 04/22/08, 11:57 PM

[ disregard ]

Candy Man · 04/23/08, 12:17 AM

Sotrec knees started to buckle he'd be unconcious soon. But apresence was back, one he never could tolerate interfering.

He painfully pulled his hand free from the stinger. He jammed three fingers in the now empty left socket of the king. He muttered a few short words before it's head split open with a loud crack.

The huge beast lumbered for a moment before falling roughly down. Sotrec could barely stand, but walked towards the scopion's torso. "Now.... come....on.. out..."

All vision blended together before being covered up by the dark palace floor.
"Silly, silly, silly.... when will little boys ever learn?"
"Don't speak."
"Oooooooohhhhh, someone needs a hug."
"I said no."
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click, click click
"I heard you. But what do you mean, no?"
"I mean, I can't. There's nothing that I can do."
"That doesn't sound like any cousin of mine."
"And yet, my destiny will surpass yours."
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"Son, you'll never get anywhere in life if you don't try at it."
"As if there's time"

~~Tragic Fall~~ · 04/23/08, 01:46 PM

Altoran ran to Sotrec's side and motioned for Maverick to come over.

"Your aura is still up." said Altoran," Which means he is still in danger." Maverick ran over and sent a green beam of light into Sotrec. This should heal whatever is wrong with him thought Maverick.

"You better not die on us, Sotrec." said Altoran," We need you man......." Altoran looked at the body of the scorpion. He walked over and kicked the dead body.

"Damn it............" said Altoran," Who the hell put these things in here anyway."

**Chosen Again** · 05/02/08, 04:05 PM

"That would be me good sir." A refined sounding voice echoed from the back of the dark room. "And it seems that you are trespassing in my friends nests." The man walked into the light. His skin was pale, incredibly so and his eyes were yellow. The veins of his body were running black and could be seen through his nearly translucent skin.

"They tend to respond poorly to that."

Kristine held the baby like it was a time bomb. She shook her head slowly. The thing was so damned stoic. He just lay there. Staring at her with his hypnotic eyes. There was something sensual about those eyes. If he got through childhood with becoming a deformed freak he'd be a big hit with the ladies.

She wondered vaguely where the other Chosen. Going off alone. . . into the darkness. She was worried what she'd done may have effected the baby. She stood in the desert now. With a child. . .a child she was uncertain existed.

~~Tragic Fall~~ · 05/02/08, 09:35 PM

"Who are you?" asked Altoran," And why do you have a bunch of pet scorpions?" Altoran stared into the man's eyes. [i]What is this guy's deal....../I] thought Altoran He looks.......disgusting... Altoran could sense every shadow in the room. He would use them if he had to. Hopefully this guys is friendly... thought Altoran But judging by the scorpions.....he probably isn't

**Chosen Again** · 05/03/08, 08:56 PM

"These are hardly my pets dear man." he gestured around the room. "These are my Idols. My blueprints, if you will, to a better society." He suddenly looked jarred. "But I forget myself." he said " I am Alashana. It is The Tounge for Ancient Power." He bowed ever so slightly. "And this is the Temple of The Barrens. What is your business here?"

~~Tragic Fall~~ · 05/04/08, 12:09 AM

"Actually......I'm not sure...." said Altoran," And you can call me Altoran." He began to let his guard down a bit. He looked at Alashana.

"We were put here to take out some sort of evil....thing." said Altoran," You wouldn't happen to know where that is......would you?" His eyebrows rose with anticipation. This guy might be able to speed things up a lot thought Altoran.

Candy Man · 05/04/08, 12:33 AM

""So we have an agreement?"
Sotrec lifted his head. "You've hardly given me a choice."
"Please be curtious, we practically saved you with this."
He didn't flinch at this. "If the five of you are so mighty, why is my commun required?"
"Because you've already done it."
The next electric blink in Sotrec's brain could of killed a mammoth.

04/21/08, 09:24 PM	#1231
~~Tragic Fall~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: South-West of Wal-Mart Age: 16 Posts: 1,358 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Altoran looked back at Jailtin, Raem and Sotrec. He then smiled and laughed a little. He put a hand on his father's shoulder. "I think I will knock again." said Altoran. He summoned up all of the strength he had aquired from being a demon and the strength he recieved from being half-reaver, and reached back. He then punched the door as hard as he could.

04/22/08, 02:55 AM	#1232
Chosen Again Irony Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here. Posts: 3,325 Rep Power: 7	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds A few scorpions fell into the sun from the shadows and quickly scurried back to the living floor of scorpions on the inside. There was an unearthly sort of hissing coming from each of them. The all seemed agitated from the large slabs of wood that had flown into the darkness with them. As one the scorpions cleared out of the way. Making a large path many pinched and pushed at each other but eventually they stood still. Jailtin seemed unsurprised by this but there was a definite undertone to his out calmness that betrayed the emotions that raged inside. His skin crawled remembering the scorpions. He remembered the darkness. The pain. And the venom. A large shadows stirred from inside. It could be roughly described as the size of a bear. The scorpions adjusted a bit as the shadow passed. The shadow came closer and closer to the light until two orange eyes could be seen. The scorpion's tail was raised in defense of it's home. It was ready to strike. ( Let me point out that this scorpion would not be easily killed as The armor of the Giant Scorpion is the hardest substance in this world.)

04/22/08, 03:14 AM	#1233
Stavvy A Synonym for Acquiesce Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: . . .To Suffer. . . Age: 16 Posts: 8,971 Rep Power: 14	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Stavros took a step back as the scorpions ran into the light, and scurried away. There were too many of them to count, if he cared to, which he didn't. His blade of death found its way in his hands before he knew it. Two orange globes appeared from the darkness, and out came much larger version of the other animals. This is just great. . . He waited, watching the creature's movements, ready to parry whatever it threw at him. He looked at the others - who were just a pace or two ahead of him - to see what they'd do.

04/22/08, 03:50 AM	#1234
Candy Man For the Lick Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Every waking hour, and every lonely night. Age: 17 Posts: 1,620 Rep Power: 3	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Sotrec was getting tired of being on a team. Actually, he was just starting to hate people in general. They rushed to quickly into things, the ones he had to deal with anyway. He unraveled himself and silently entered the room. As he reformed, he stepped on a scorpion. It was no bigger than his thumb, but it remained unharmed. If this is how protected these ones are. He looked at the large pair of glowing eyes in front of them, joined by six near-invisible points of the same light. What can go against that?

04/22/08, 03:57 AM	#1235
Chosen Again Irony Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here. Posts: 3,325 Rep Power: 7	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds The scorpion's eyes remained on Sotrec constantly. It's tail darted forward in feints. trying to catch him off guard. Finally it swiped a claw at Sotrec with a loud hiss. Jailtin watched as Sotrec attempted to do battle with what looked to be the king of the nest. The thing was armored like a tank. He shook his head. "Sotrec! You're not doing any good in there!!"

04/22/08, 02:09 PM	#1236
~~Tragic Fall~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: South-West of Wal-Mart Age: 16 Posts: 1,358 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds "Damn.......all I did was knock!" yelled Altoran as he dodged one the regular scorpion's stingers. His shadow changed into a shadow sword as he ran towards the king scorpion. He jumped into the air and aimed a slash at the scorpion. "Lets see how you like this, you stupid bug!" yelled Altoran as the slash hit the king scorpion. It made a scratch on the armor.....but it didn't pierce it. Altoran backed away from the monster and turned to Jailtin. "Shadows won't help much here, Dad." said Altoran sounding slightly worried.

04/22/08, 11:12 PM	#1237
Candy Man For the Lick Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Every waking hour, and every lonely night. Age: 17 Posts: 1,620 Rep Power: 3	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Sotrec ducked and weaved away fom the beast's tail and claws. There wasn't a blow that he could land on it. He quickly turned his head, barely missed by the scorpion's posionous barb. It's learning. Before he could move, it came back. This time for his chest. He caught the stinger in his hand. Nothing with this sort of brute strength would have a powerful toxin The spike was lodged like stigmata and down into his wrist. He felt his heart through his ears. Sotrec was swirling ina sea of color and sound. The beast grabbed his middle in it's claw. He coughed and spat more blood. His strength wa sapping away. He was wrong about the poison, but he was right about this. He took another knife and stabed it where the claw and it's arm met. In the gap, was the creature's only bridge. It let him down, out of reflex, but it would have been smart otherwise. Seeing his chance, he stabbed it again. This time, in it's left eye.

04/22/08, 11:57 PM	#1238
~~Miss Murder~~ Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Climbing Up the Walls Age: 16 Posts: 3,399 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds [ disregard ] Last edited by Miss Murder; 05/14/08 at 03:32 AM.

04/23/08, 12:17 AM	#1239
Candy Man For the Lick Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Every waking hour, and every lonely night. Age: 17 Posts: 1,620 Rep Power: 3	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Sotrec knees started to buckle he'd be unconcious soon. But apresence was back, one he never could tolerate interfering. He painfully pulled his hand free from the stinger. He jammed three fingers in the now empty left socket of the king. He muttered a few short words before it's head split open with a loud crack. The huge beast lumbered for a moment before falling roughly down. Sotrec could barely stand, but walked towards the scopion's torso. "Now.... come....on.. out..." All vision blended together before being covered up by the dark palace floor. *"Silly, silly, silly.... when will little boys ever learn?"* "Don't speak." *"Oooooooohhhhh, someone needs a hug."* "I said no." ----------------------------------------------------- click, click click "I heard you. But what do you mean, no?" "I mean, I can't. There's nothing that I can do." "That doesn't sound like any cousin of mine." "And yet, my destiny will surpass yours." ------------------------------------------------------------------- "Son, you'll never get anywhere in life if you don't try at it." "As if there's time"

04/23/08, 01:46 PM	#1240
~~Tragic Fall~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: South-West of Wal-Mart Age: 16 Posts: 1,358 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds Altoran ran to Sotrec's side and motioned for Maverick to come over. "Your aura is still up." said Altoran," Which means he is still in danger." Maverick ran over and sent a green beam of light into Sotrec. This should heal whatever is wrong with him thought Maverick. "You better not die on us, Sotrec." said Altoran," We need you man......." Altoran looked at the body of the scorpion. He walked over and kicked the dead body. "Damn it............" said Altoran," Who the hell put these things in here anyway."

05/02/08, 04:05 PM	#1241
Chosen Again Irony Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here. Posts: 3,325 Rep Power: 7	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds "That would be me good sir." A refined sounding voice echoed from the back of the dark room. "And it seems that you are trespassing in my friends nests." The man walked into the light. His skin was pale, incredibly so and his eyes were yellow. The veins of his body were running black and could be seen through his nearly translucent skin. "They tend to respond poorly to that." Kristine held the baby like it was a time bomb. She shook her head slowly. The thing was so damned stoic. He just lay there. Staring at her with his hypnotic eyes. There was something sensual about those eyes. If he got through childhood with becoming a deformed freak he'd be a big hit with the ladies. She wondered vaguely where the other Chosen. Going off alone. . . into the darkness. She was worried what she'd done may have effected the baby. She stood in the desert now. With a child. . .a child she was uncertain existed.

05/02/08, 09:35 PM	#1242
~~Tragic Fall~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: South-West of Wal-Mart Age: 16 Posts: 1,358 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds "Who are you?" asked Altoran," And why do you have a bunch of pet scorpions?" Altoran stared into the man's eyes. [i]What is this guy's deal....../I] thought Altoran He looks.......disgusting... Altoran could sense every shadow in the room. He would use them if he had to. Hopefully this guys is friendly... thought Altoran But judging by the scorpions.....he probably isn't

05/03/08, 08:56 PM	#1243
Chosen Again Irony Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here. Posts: 3,325 Rep Power: 7	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds "These are hardly my pets dear man." he gestured around the room. "These are my Idols. My blueprints, if you will, to a better society." He suddenly looked jarred. "But I forget myself." he said " I am Alashana. It is The Tounge for Ancient Power." He bowed ever so slightly. "And this is the Temple of The Barrens. What is your business here?"

05/04/08, 12:09 AM	#1244
~~Tragic Fall~~ Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: South-West of Wal-Mart Age: 16 Posts: 1,358 Rep Power: 0	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds "Actually......I'm not sure...." said Altoran," And you can call me Altoran." He began to let his guard down a bit. He looked at Alashana. "We were put here to take out some sort of evil....thing." said Altoran," You wouldn't happen to know where that is......would you?" His eyebrows rose with anticipation. This guy might be able to speed things up a lot thought Altoran.

05/04/08, 12:33 AM	#1245
Candy Man For the Lick Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Every waking hour, and every lonely night. Age: 17 Posts: 1,620 Rep Power: 3	Re: Darkness Revealed 2: Chaotic Bonds ""So we have an agreement?" Sotrec lifted his head. "You've hardly given me a choice." "Please be curtious, we practically saved you with this." He didn't flinch at this. "If the five of you are so mighty, why is my commun required?" "Because you've already done it." The next electric blink in Sotrec's brain could of killed a mammoth.

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